My Marriage Somehow Became Quantifiable

The male protagonist is a cuckold. He is so mentally retarded. He has been married for 7 years and doesn't even know how to coax a girl. He has found such a good-looking daughter-in-law. He can coax her even with the same method he used to pursue the female protagonist. Moreover, I felt frustrated watching the plot of the male protagonist. The male protagonist is purely for profit, and he is unlucky at the expense of intimacy in order to gain luck. There is no sense of crisis when you see your wife being targeted by a handsome guy. At least you knock on the doorknob when your wife runs to the bedroom. If you see your wife in a bad mood on the subway, you don't ask her. What if your wife is bullied? If you are not angry about the macho chauvinism, you must not grab your wife and ask her to understand? And now that I'm older, I still ask Zhihu. Zhihu is full of people who are bragging and don't write drafts. There are only a few that can be used. Moreover, the emotional conflicts between every couple are different, and the personalities of wives are also different. Even the conflicts between husband and wife are different in size, how dare you ask netizens? Then you might as well go to Baidu. What did the author think? This kind of straight man can't even find a wife. In my opinion, the protagonist and the heroine don't want to be married for 7 years at all. I can only say that it is worthy of being recommended by Wulu.

When the intimacy level of a couple is 18, the first reaction is to cheat on her, the second reaction is to go to the hospital to check to see if she has AIDS or something, and the third reaction is to go to her best friend's house and not come back to sleep. If she doesn't get divorced, what are she waiting for? Do you like to be a father?

Is the author single and lustful? Why don't I know when my wife of seven years, my aunt, is coming?

More than 60 people on the web version of the signing list saw this book, and unexpectedly found it interesting and clicked it to read it. I rarely post comments, so today I want to say something after a long absence. As I read this book, I found that there are no big problems with the writing, and the basic description is in place. In terms of expectations, it is biased towards daily life. In fact, the audience is also daily, so the characters must be good enough. I believe the editor will often tell you, so I, as a reader, will not go into details. Look at the twenty pictures and mention the biggest questions. 1. The data panel appears repeatedly, which makes people feel irritated. For a long time, data has been used to measure the relationship between husband and wife, and the relationship between two people is regarded as a task. This is a very wrong model. It is not a harem novel, but it is very disgusting for you to do this in a daily novel. 2. While describing the relationship between husband and wife, it was good at the beginning, and now it is also very deep. , But I can't experience it at all from the protagonist. I repeatedly mentioned work, how can I increase intimacy to get lucky points and make money? It gives the impression that my wife is a tool for making money. There are too few daily interactions between husband and wife, which makes me feel that this book is very confusing. The title of your book is Husband and Wife. Do you want me to read about the relationship between husband and wife or about career? 3. The male protagonist is not good at actively thinking about the relationship between husband and wife. They have serious problems and constantly seek answers online. This is okay, but the male protagonist does not know how to summarize and think about why doing so can restore the female protagonist's mood. "The system has added intimacy, oh, I have completed the task." This is the state of the male protagonist, and the perception of the male protagonist is very poor. 4. Repeatedly combine the scenes of your wife with your best friend. I don't know what other people think. Best friends are just supporting roles, so it's not appropriate to give too many scenes and plots. In fact, quite a few men don't like their wives living with their best friends all day long. At this time, it's better for the male protagonist to react, rather than say nothing at all, and then say "Oh , Got it." Although it may be that I am sensitive, but to be honest, many people cheat, and it is inseparable from their "good girlfriends." The reader knows that there is nothing wrong, but the male protagonist does not know, so the male protagonist is too indifferent. This is an information asymmetry. Thinking of this, it is difficult for readers to have a better sense of the male protagonist. The above is over, I have said a bit too much, but I am not complaining, I am just telling my personal sense.

Two people have been living like this for seven years. They want to divorce and be happy soon. The protagonist is more than just a straight man? It's just like a stone! In my opinion, everything I did was just to increase intimacy and gain job opportunities in a game-like way. Where is the heroine? It's just a robot. Whatever the male protagonist does, the system will force him to add 1:2 points of intimacy, and her own intimacy will not change at all.

Goodbye, my acceptance of the adventure of jumping off a cliff is higher than what you have written in these chapters, relying on the defense

In my opinion, this novel generally has advantages, but there are too many bad points. The advantage is that the subject matter is okay (this is the first time I have seen such a system written) and the writing is relatively smooth. There are too many disadvantages 1. It feels like the protagonist keeps looking at the system panel after getting the system, even if he does nothing, just like a child getting a new toy. The protagonist is not 29 years old but 9 years old (it should be the author's word count). Too much and repeated writing makes the reading experience very poor. 2. The protagonist's attitude towards the system. He scolded the system for no reason, which gave me an inexplicable feeling. However, the protagonist is very dependent on the system, and there is a sense of "picking up the bowl to eat, putting down the bowl to scold the mother". 3. The portrayal of the protagonist can be said to rely on the defense. In terms of work, dealing with people and getting along with his wife, the protagonist is not 29 years old but 16 or 7 years old. He is full of adolescent shyness and strong self-esteem. The protagonist himself has no ability for the time being, and his age and behavior are inconsistent (it is recommended that the author write the protagonist as a high school student from a parallel world who has traveled through time to be more acceptable). Moreover, the protagonist is very hesitant and grinds on doing things. 4. The author always wants to show that he is superior to others. When he encounters problems, he only asks online, but in order to show off, he looks down on ordinary people. 5. The most important thing is that everything the protagonist does is just for the sake of system and intimacy, and his wife is not important at all. The protagonist has said many times that he will do anything for the sake of intimacy, and his way of thinking is very different from that of normal people. (So ​​it is recommended to write the protagonist as a time-traveler, so the logic will be smoother) In conclusion, although this book has many shortcomings, it is still readable. Brothers who are not interested in reading can give it a try.

Let me summarize it for my brothers. I can only say that it is very toxic. The intimacy level with my wife is only 18. I am afraid that Lao Wang is exhausted. Some people say that I am used to being sexually active. Even if I feed a dog on the roadside, it will be higher than this. I can only say that writing this book and liking it are both born.

Let's briefly comment on this book. This book uses data to represent the relationship between the male and female protagonists. This is a good idea. However, this idea is not strong enough to support the plot development of the entire book. Therefore, on the one hand, the author enriches the strength of the system, including tasks, lottery, and luck. On the other hand, it strengthens the realistic attributes of the system, so there is still a considerable part of realistic content. Overall, there are no major logical problems. The following is a criticism of this book. The author made the protagonist too vulgar, unlike a man who has been married for seven years. Here, it gives people an obvious feeling of being out of touch. Secondly, the development of the relationship between husband and wife is rewarded with monetary gains. This is an obvious way of writing. Although the development of relationships is different in real society, everyone who reads novels hopes to have a sweet relationship. Here, because I can make money, I go to pick up my wife from get off work. No one with a normal mind will take this kind of plot for granted! Second, the character creation is facial. In the first few chapters, when describing the appearance of the wife, the summary is that the appearance is 80 points, the height is 170 centimeters, and the figure is good. As a description of the heroine's debut, I can even laugh out of my embarrassing prostate fluid. I would like to ask other readers how they feel about this description. Third, the deus ex machina is serious. At the beginning of the novel, it is unreasonable to contact the company to pay the money in advance. At the end, you are pretending to be a slap in the face. Brother, you are deus ex machina, and we don't feel any better watching it. Overall, the writing style of this book is average, the writing power is not enough, the plot development is abrupt, and the idea seems good at first glance, the variation of data flow, and the characteristics of daily sweet articles. However, the author neglects the basics and pursues the end, using random imagination and mechanical deity. The final achievement is a third-rate self-stimulation article with imagination. Perhaps Shang Sanjiang is the highest highlight moment of this book. As for whether this book is poisonous or not, everyone has different tastes and different reading needs. I won't make a direct conclusion here. Other book lovers can watch it for themselves. I believe everyone has a strong balance in their hearts.

The author should not be married and not living together