My Husband-Wife Relationship Can Be Digitized

Let's briefly comment on this book. This book uses data to represent the relationship between the male and female protagonists. This is a good idea. However, this idea is not strong enough to support the plot development of the entire book. Therefore, on the one hand, the author enriches the strength of the system, including tasks, lottery, and luck. On the other hand, it strengthens the realistic attributes of the system, so there is still a considerable part of realistic content. Overall, there are no major logical problems. The following is a criticism of this book. The author made the protagonist too vulgar, unlike a man who has been married for seven years. Here, it gives people an obvious feeling of being out of touch. Secondly, the development of the relationship between husband and wife is rewarded with monetary gains. This is an obvious way of writing. Although the development of relationships is different in real society, everyone who reads novels hopes to have a sweet relationship. Here, because I can make money, I go to pick up my wife from get off work. No one with a normal mind will take this kind of plot for granted! Second, the character creation is facial. In the first few chapters, when describing the appearance of the wife, the summary is that the appearance is 80 points, the height is 170 centimeters, and the figure is good. As a description of the heroine's debut, I can even laugh out of my embarrassing prostate fluid. I would like to ask other readers how they feel about this description. Third, the deus ex machina is serious. At the beginning of the novel, it is unreasonable to contact the company to pay the money in advance. At the end, you are pretending to be a slap in the face. Brother, you are deus ex machina, and we don't feel any better watching it. Overall, the writing style of this book is average, the writing power is not enough, the plot development is abrupt, and the idea seems good at first glance, the variation of data flow, and the characteristics of daily sweet articles. However, the author neglects the basics and pursues the end, using random imagination and mechanical deity. The final achievement is a third-rate self-stimulation article with imagination. Perhaps Shang Sanjiang is the highest highlight moment of this book. As for whether this book is poisonous or not, everyone has different tastes and different reading needs. I won't make a direct conclusion here. Other book lovers can watch it for themselves. I believe everyone has a strong balance in their hearts.

Is it a licking dog? No, everyone, yes, let's go

The male protagonist is a cuckold. He is so mentally retarded. He has been married for 7 years and doesn't even know how to coax a girl. He has found such a good-looking daughter-in-law. He can coax her even with the same method he used to pursue the female protagonist. Moreover, I felt frustrated watching the plot of the male protagonist. The male protagonist is purely for profit, and he is unlucky at the expense of intimacy in order to gain luck. There is no sense of crisis when you see your wife being targeted by a handsome guy. At least you knock on the doorknob when your wife runs to the bedroom. If you see your wife in a bad mood on the subway, you don't ask her. What if your wife is bullied? If you are not angry about the macho chauvinism, you must not grab your wife and ask her to understand? And now that I'm older, I still ask Zhihu. Zhihu is full of people who are bragging and don't write drafts. There are only a few that can be used. Moreover, the emotional conflicts between every couple are different, and the personalities of wives are also different. Even the conflicts between husband and wife are different in size, how dare you ask netizens? Then you might as well go to Baidu. What did the author think? This kind of straight man can't even find a wife. In my opinion, the protagonist and the heroine don't want to be married for 7 years at all. I can only say that it is worthy of being recommended by Wulu.

When the intimacy level of a couple is 18, the first reaction is to cheat on her, the second reaction is to go to the hospital to check to see if she has AIDS or something, and the third reaction is to go to her best friend's house and not come back to sleep. If she doesn't get divorced, what are she waiting for? Do you like to be a father?

Is the author single and lustful? Why don't I know when my wife of seven years, my aunt, is coming?

More than 60 people on the web version of the signing list saw this book, and unexpectedly found it interesting and clicked it to read it. I rarely post comments, so today I want to say something after a long absence. As I read this book, I found that there are no big problems with the writing, and the basic description is in place. In terms of expectations, it is biased towards daily life. In fact, the audience is also daily, so the characters must be good enough. I believe the editor will often tell you, so I, as a reader, will not go into details. Look at the twenty pictures and mention the biggest questions. 1. The data panel appears repeatedly, which makes people feel irritated. For a long time, data has been used to measure the relationship between husband and wife, and the relationship between two people is regarded as a task. This is a very wrong model. It is not a harem novel, but it is very disgusting for you to do this in a daily novel. 2. While describing the relationship between husband and wife, it was good at the beginning, and now it is also very deep. , But I can't experience it at all from the protagonist. I repeatedly mentioned work, how can I increase intimacy to get lucky points and make money? It gives the impression that my wife is a tool for making money. There are too few daily interactions between husband and wife, which makes me feel that this book is very confusing. The title of your book is Husband and Wife. Do you want me to read about the relationship between husband and wife or about career? 3. The male protagonist is not good at actively thinking about the relationship between husband and wife. They have serious problems and constantly seek answers online. This is okay, but the male protagonist does not know how to summarize and think about why doing so can restore the female protagonist's mood. "The system has added intimacy, oh, I have completed the task." This is the state of the male protagonist, and the perception of the male protagonist is very poor. 4. Repeatedly combine the scenes of your wife with your best friend. I don't know what other people think. Best friends are just supporting roles, so it's not appropriate to give too many scenes and plots. In fact, quite a few men don't like their wives living with their best friends all day long. At this time, it's better for the male protagonist to react, rather than say nothing at all, and then say "Oh , Got it." Although it may be that I am sensitive, but to be honest, many people cheat, and it is inseparable from their "good girlfriends." The reader knows that there is nothing wrong, but the male protagonist does not know, so the male protagonist is too indifferent. This is an information asymmetry. Thinking of this, it is difficult for readers to have a better sense of the male protagonist. The above is over, I have said a bit too much, but I am not complaining, I am just telling my personal sense.

Two people have been living like this for seven years. They want to divorce and be happy soon. The protagonist is more than just a straight man? It's just like a stone! In my opinion, everything I did was just to increase intimacy and gain job opportunities in a game-like way. Where is the heroine? It's just a robot. Whatever the male protagonist does, the system will force him to add 1:2 points of intimacy, and her own intimacy will not change at all.

Goodbye, my acceptance of the adventure of jumping off a cliff is higher than what you have written in these chapters, relying on the defense

In my opinion, this novel generally has advantages, but there are too many bad points. The advantage is that the subject matter is okay (this is the first time I have seen such a system written) and the writing is relatively smooth. There are too many disadvantages 1. It feels like the protagonist keeps looking at the system panel after getting the system, even if he does nothing, just like a child getting a new toy. The protagonist is not 29 years old but 9 years old (it should be the author's word count). Too much and repeated writing makes the reading experience very poor. 2. The protagonist's attitude towards the system. He scolded the system for no reason, which gave me an inexplicable feeling. However, the protagonist is very dependent on the system, and there is a sense of "picking up the bowl to eat, putting down the bowl to scold the mother". 3. The portrayal of the protagonist can be said to rely on the defense. In terms of work, dealing with people and getting along with his wife, the protagonist is not 29 years old but 16 or 7 years old. He is full of adolescent shyness and strong self-esteem. The protagonist himself has no ability for the time being, and his age and behavior are inconsistent (it is recommended that the author write the protagonist as a high school student from a parallel world who has traveled through time to be more acceptable). Moreover, the protagonist is very hesitant and grinds on doing things. 4. The author always wants to show that he is superior to others. When he encounters problems, he only asks online, but in order to show off, he looks down on ordinary people. 5. The most important thing is that everything the protagonist does is just for the sake of system and intimacy, and his wife is not important at all. The protagonist has said many times that he will do anything for the sake of intimacy, and his way of thinking is very different from that of normal people. (So ​​it is recommended to write the protagonist as a time-traveler, so the logic will be smoother) In conclusion, although this book has many shortcomings, it is still readable. Brothers who are not interested in reading can give it a try.

The author should not be married and not living together

Let me summarize it for my brothers. I can only say that it is very toxic. The intimacy level with my wife is only 18. I am afraid that Lao Wang is exhausted. Some people say that I am used to being sexually active. Even if I feed a dog on the roadside, it will be higher than this. I can only say that writing this book and liking it are both born.

I asked netizens how to live as a couple, and even posted photos of my wife online. The author is really talented.

Oh! A few chapters into it made me sick, even worse than watching the harem. At least the harem is just inconsistent with the concept of a single female protagonist and no female protagonist. You are just disgusting. I didn't read much before two things came up that made me sick. The first one is the system, but in fact it has little to do with the system, it is purely a matter of the male protagonist. It can be said that the author does not know how to write this, but it is still disgusting, because when the system appears, he starts to please his wife. It is really utilitarian. Is this your wife or a tool for you to make a living? The second point is the forum. He also posted a photo of his wife. So awesome. Do you have that hobby?

I have been married for seven years and have no children. I haven't touched my beautiful wife for a month. I have read messages that I can't reply to. I am very motivated by profit. Is there something wrong with this male protagonist? The male protagonist himself is indifferent to the relationship between husband and wife, and now he is acting like a licking dog for profit. Really ugly.

Tell me how I feel. I read the first ten chapters and felt that except for the word count, the overall reading experience of this book was quite good. But the more I read, the more awkward I felt about the plot and setting. My feedback from the title and introduction of the book is that it should be a daily novel for couples, but in actual reading it turned into a career novel. The purpose of the male protagonist to increase intimacy is not to repair the relationship between husband and wife, but to gain so-called luck and thereby promote career development. In the first chapter, the male protagonist asked a question on Zhihu to express that the male protagonist wanted to take the initiative to repair the bad relationship between husband and wife. This is where the story begins, and then the system appears. I think this is the biggest highlight of this book so far, and it's also the biggest flaw. The highlight is the appearance of the intimacy value of the relationship between husband and wife, which allows you to intuitively see the quality of the relationship between husband and wife. The male protagonist can interact with the female protagonist in various ways to increase or decrease the degree of intimacy. The downfall is that the system can affect the increase or decrease of intimacy. In particular, the use of skills and props requires intimacy. Let's make a hypothesis: if the intimacy level is used up using skills or props, and the intimacy level is 0, will the male and female protagonists get divorced on the spot? By the way, regarding this so-called intimacy value, I think it is more appropriate to call the heroine's intimacy with the hero. In the relationship between husband and wife, husband and wife are two people, not one person. If the male protagonist is good to the female protagonist, the relationship between husband and wife will become better. If the male protagonist is not good to the female protagonist, the relationship between husband and wife will be bad. This is wrong! Let's make a hypothesis: the male protagonist did something that satisfied the female protagonist today, which made the female protagonist's favorable opinion of the male protagonist increase by 1 point, but the female protagonist did something that made the male protagonist very disgusted, and the male protagonist's favorable impression of the female protagonist dropped by 10 points. So, has the relationship between husband and wife gotten better or worse? I think the relationship between husband and wife is mutual. The male protagonist can affect the relationship between husband and wife, and the female protagonist can also affect the relationship between husband and wife. About the male protagonist's career, I guess the author wants the male protagonist's career to be linked to the quality of the couple's relationship, or that he wants the male protagonist to have a smooth career in the early stage and focus on improving the relationship in the later stage. As far as the actual reading experience is concerned, everything the male protagonist does is to improve the intimacy value. Note that it is the intimacy value of the system, not the quality of the relationship between the couple. As other people have said, the more I write, the more it looks like a game. The heroine of the strategy team will be rewarded with intimacy points, while skills and props will consume intimacy points. After saying so much, I agree with the author's choice of subject matter, but I don't like the setting of the system and key points. I feel a bit pity here. It's not that the author's writing is not good or the setting is not good, but that I may not read it anymore.

I think it's okay. Water is a common problem in most online novels, and there are also emotional scenes. (If you expect someone who has never been in a relationship to write a good emotional drama, then it's nb) It's quite satisfactory. As for intimacy, it always gets interrupted. It's normal, what can I write at the starting point without interrupting. A whole small group VIP chapter?

If you read any of the stallion stories written by this author, the relationship between the couple in this novel will be smoother.

The author knows how to raise the blood pressure of book lovers.

After reading Chapter 13, I really couldn't stand it anymore. There was no trace of the so-called long-term relationship. It was all about targeting the heroine, completing the mission index, and getting mission rewards. The heroine's existence feels like a damage-testing stake in a dungeon.

What are you still trying to do with 18 points? You passed 60 points, 18, and your life has become what it is now after so many years.

Isn't this just licking the text? Problems between husband and wife must be more than one person's fault. In this book, only pig's feet are allowed to change, and nothing else is mentioned. This one sent a WeChat message to sleep at the best friend's house and did not come back at night. There are also male colleagues who are all kinds of ambiguous, but they do not clearly reject it. If you don't reject this thing, you must not be disgusted with it. There is also the colleague who made a joke, and you are still talking and laughing with him? If this change continues, it will only turn the male protagonist into a bitch, and the female protagonist will think that I never missed it, and it was all the male protagonist's fault before.

Those who sell newspapers will support me after seeing this.

Thank you to the author. I feel that the author wrote it from the heart. My relationship with my wife has become better and better. Really, as a man in a marriage, he should really lean in, cook a small meal, buy a bottle of cheap red wine, and coax.

Your book was originally Wan Ding's idea, but it turned into a street gadget because you overly vilified the male protagonist!

To be honest, after reading it, I found it to be quite good. Although the writing was a bit rough at the beginning, I was willing to listen to the readers' opinions and improve it. I think it is very good. But your word count is similar to that of a newspaper seller. It is so short and a large number of fans have already poured in. But you are not willing to update or use more words to retain readers. In fact, it is a big failure.

The author writes very well, I support the author to persevere

It's a bit too little, I hope it can be updated ten times a day 😭😭😭😭

I saved two monthly passes and gave them to you! Come on, I hope you can update more

It's really written so well, it's so eunuch😭😭

I let you stay on my bookshelf for more than 7 months and then took it off the shelf. I won't give you a chance to update.