Lord of Everwinter

Here's an idea: after reading a few DND books, most of them wrote about dragons, and most of them wrote about lord dragons. It started out normally, but later on it gradually turned into an empire, and the monsters it accepted that were originally chaotic and evil became orderly neutral. I personally think that authors have a misunderstanding when writing about dragons. The Lord Dragon transformed into a human wearing dragon skin. I combined the characteristics of dragons in Western movies and dragons in DND [especially evil dragons such as five-color dragons]. In my impression, dragons often belong to the bosses behind the scenes, playing with various human powers over the long years and becoming the manipulators behind the mysteries one after another. More of the characteristics of dragons are shown on the side, the reactions of different classes of human adventure teams when facing dragons, and the reflection of monsters on the ecological status of dragons. Less descriptions of the big scenes of the legion and more small characters' reactions to the damage or taboos caused by dragons Or you can try to create adventure stories between dragons and various races in the famous stages of young dragons, youth and adulthood. And I think that a powerful family force is not formed by fighting in a few chapters in a year or two [especially a huge family force]. The stories of family members and dragons are interspersed with these stages of growth. I think this is the growth process of dragons that everyone has never seen [and it is also very good in word count and burst of inspiration] As for the territory I think we don't need to be too obsessed with militarizing the kingdom. The territory of an adult dragon needs the respect and fear of the world, and there are stories belonging to the legend of the dragon. It's not like I came to set up camp there to find a family member to ask about nearby forces, recruit them and build a reputation. And everyone says that the intelligence of dragons is the IQ of adults. There is also a misunderstanding here that it should be the IQ of adults. The difference here is the judgment and analysis of the environment by an adult intelligent creature For example, if the protagonist is abandoned by the dragon mother just after birth, an adult's judgment should be to find a Feng Shui treasure place to hang out and then change the map to upgrade. That's what's wrong. It should be analyzed from the perspective of a dragon using the intelligence of an adult but abandoning the concept of a human being. Maybe it will find a female who is also a five-color dragon, find treasure coins in the way of a dragon to please, and then sincerely pray for the protection of an adult female dragon, or simply join or pray for protection by paying a protection fee. Of course, you can prepare the ground in the early stage. After all, there are no five-color dragons that are so kind The focus here is to analyze the dragon's actions from a dragon's perspective but with an adult's IQ [I have not participated in the running group and have only read pseudo-DND novels. I just suggest that if you don't like it, don't spray it]

The author's last book had a female supporting character who was too vicious. . . It's not like a dragon of one species dies when other creatures take a nap. It's better not to have a female protagonist.

The writing written by this author still has a strong sense of epicness and a strong personal style. However, Dragon/Shadow Oath is always high and low, and subsequent updates are becoming more and more unstable, which is very torturous. Where is this book? Based on the existing chapters, my personal evaluation is that Xiancao has a different feel to Longwen, rather than simply leading a younger brother to conquer territory. But you are serious about this update. You have interrupted the update before it was put on the shelves. However, in the last book you mentioned that you don't care about perfect attendance (if you stop updating for public for 5 days, you will be deprived of the qualification to get full attendance on the shelves), I can't say anything to you. Well, don't be a eunuch, just update it every day. Come on..

I'll go, it's gone before I can see it... All the good popularity I had last time is in vain.

For an evil dragon, his subordinates are really accessories, but too many novels directly make them the main body. What does that mean? A normal evil dragon is as big as my fist, so you treat me as my little brother and listen to me. Then, for example, a tribe of 1,000 orcs consumes the lives of one, two, ten or eight orcs. It is not important to the dragon. It shows that kind of cold-bloodedness. What is the result? Many people have written books, and even dead goblins want to write about their sinners and kill them on the spot. This is not to say that using it as an excuse is not good, but some people write it instead of using it as an excuse. It seems that they really do this, and bring the values ​​​​of their previous lives here. There is also the fact that Young Dragon Youlong has a huge exclusive empire. What chain of interests binds it, but in fact, there is a big problem. The evil dragon's subordinates are from the chaotic evil camp. No matter how great your interests are, even if he kills you, he will be buried with you. He may kill you. The evil camp will not be satisfied and loyal. If you give him a reward, he will only want more. If you rescue and treat him, he will only think about betrayal and why didn't you save him earlier? If you give him dragon blood, he will only want to eat dragon meat. The evil camp is unique in taking advantage of the situation, but many authors are direct and overbearing, and then become absolutely loyal with a little profit, and then use the excuse to say that the evil camp is stupid and better than humans Is there such a possibility? Instinct and nature are just like this. There are also some people who refuse to eat people. There is nothing wrong with the website, but the reasons are different. Some are understatements and just say it, and some wish to mention it three times a day. I don't eat, I don't eat, I don't eat. I don't eat people. Of course it has nothing to do with this book, it's just based on my feelings.

It should not have been set up from the beginning that the protagonist was caught by the frost giant. The frost giant also strengthened it so that the protagonist could not escape. Even if he could freely survive in the wild, the subsequent plot would be better than being stuck like this.

Author, if you don't update for a week, I will default to this book as a eunuch.

The most annoying thing is not the incompetent author, but the person like you who thinks you can write something good but only relies on it for defense. Dream World/Goldfinger is just pooping in a bucket

What a fool you are, brother, your grades are not good in just a few chapters, that's not what the eunuch said.

Single lines are written unclearly, making it confusing to read. I also write multiple lines. I don't know if it's because I'm brave and talented, or if I'm pursuing something deliberately. Anyway, I gave up after reading Chapter 30 because the content was baffling. The writing is very tasteful and the descriptions are very detailed, but it will also consume more of the reader's attention. In the end, they don't know what to read anymore. Everything is inexplicable.

I just saw that the author has released a new book and it's already been a month.

Becoming a eunuch only happens for the first time and countless times

I feel like it's okay to jump through this book, but the key is that I don't have the desire to continue reading.

It's time to make a judgment. This book is based on the eunuch

Goldfinger is too complicated. It has an outline but the ideas and structure are very confusing. Especially the various hidden settings are bombarded but the performance is like relying on a defense. I hope the author can simply write a story in the next book and not make the settings and plot too complicated. Without the support of writing and ideas, it is a burden.

It is originally a two-line narrative and it is very discouraging to update it so much. I suggest the author to update more and push the bright lines more first! The dark lines can be postponed to write.

Alas, at least the cover looks pretty good.