Conan: the Man Who Rejected the Criminal Division

The plot after release was a bit disappointing. It seems that the author has let himself go, or maybe he gave up quality for quantity, and it feels like the writing is quite casual. The writing style is a bit overwhelming, becoming more and more frivolous, heading in the direction of nonsensical pranks. Of course, it can also be said to be comic style. This is a matter of opinion. Then, what disgusts me the most right now is probably the emotional scenes. One of the biggest reasons why I followed this book was the heroine, and I was attracted to the protagonist and plot later. Although in the early stage of the emotional scene, there was a problem of being too anxious to establish a relationship between the two and it seemed stiff, but this is not a big problem for me. But after the two confirmed their relationship, their interaction had no sense of CP, which was a very big problem. Moreover, the author is very persistent in describing the story sideways. Occasionally, this kind of plot can be used as an adjustment, but if it is used too much, it becomes very obscene. Up to now, the male and female protagonists give me a stronger feeling that they are lovers rather than lovers... In addition, the author should be more careful when writing special characters such as Kidd and Dr. Ari who have been highlighted in recent photos. For example, the explanation given in the article for not catching Kidd is unconvincing, which quite ruins the character of the protagonist. Not to mention Dr. A Li's bug. If you don't pay attention, it may even lead to the complete failure of writing this book.

It's almost the end of March and there's still no update. Is it TJ?

Very nice. The protagonist has brains and strength, he does things quickly and neatly, and is handsome (and can even make Conan feel embarrassed) Catching drug dealers instead of participating in criminal cases is very novel, and the arrest and interrogation process is also exciting, especially handsome. The cases are all strung together in an organized and natural manner, and then the winery is naturally touched upon, without any interruption at all. The emotional line with Reiko is not as brilliant as the main line, but it is coherent and natural. All in all, it's a great novel, and you won't lose money by investing in it.

Does the author never read the comments on previous chapters? We have caught a lot of typos, but the author has not corrected them. I hope to check them before publishing. There are also many broken sentences and strange paragraphs. If possible, can I correct them? Comparatively affects the perception

Update

After reading it, I have ordered it all for free

Singer——Qiuting Reiko

It's not a time-travel negative review, even if it's one that has no memory, Japanese natives make me uncomfortable just thinking about it.

A reminder to the brothers who haven't come in yet, don't come if you haven't made a reservation. Cut the books. I suddenly cut the book when the plot was developing normally, and I didn't even want to take the time to make an outline or a garbage ending. The most speechless book I have read recently, the first time I met Qie Shu at the starting point. . . . . Is writing like this worthy of my own work and hard work, and worthy of the readers who have always been with me?

It's okay. IQ Online's novel doesn't show decryption reasoning like other fans. It's quite exciting. It will also circle back to the main line of Conan and has its own main line. I hope the author will continue to maintain it.

An indigenous protagonist, who doesn't know the plot and only has a rubbish golden finger, keeps trying to find out the inside story of the winery. How can he survive 5 episodes without the halo of the protagonist? Chianti can shoot headshots with a sniper, Sister Bei pretends to be lurking and poisons, peripheral members kidnap your target, directly plant bombs at your foothold and car, or Gin directly attacks your face with Apache. Can you, a weakling protagonist, stop these?

I'm a eunuch. I sit down and change my vest and open a new book. Then while updating my vest, I open my vest again and open a new book. I say this operation is wrong.

Ke Wen, I only approve of the Japanese harem life of Kudo Shinichi 🙂

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The writing is pretty good and I read it smoothly, but Chapter 20 really took the edge off me. Although he is a local male protagonist and does not know the plot, how can he, a police officer, not know how influential the rejuvenation incident is? Just tell it so carelessly to a woman you have only known for a short time, and then take her with you to investigate? Just force the heroine to have more scenes.

Recently, due to the increasingly fierce party struggle, I suddenly discovered that the author of this fanfic is one of the few male viewers of Conan who does not use Ke Ai CP! And it's not Haihara Yumeo, it's the kind of plot where Miyano Shiho looks like a 7-year-old girl and falls in love with the original male protagonist. To be honest, I feel sick every time I see this plot. Isn't this just copper smelting? !

A eunuch, really. Although I used the coupon to read the next 400 chapters for free, I feel that the author is pretty good at writing Conan fan fiction. It's such a pity that eunuchs develop normally.

There are too many typos, which affects everyone's reading. I feel that the author will check carefully. Of course, if there are any omissions, I hope you can point them out. Xiaopujie is very grateful.

The protagonist is an indigenous Japanese child, run quickly.

Added to the bookshelf, the protagonist is not a time traveler, the heroine is well chosen, finally it is not Maori or Haiyuan, keep up the good work of this novel.

Who says anything about Xinlan Eternal, I laugh at him. Don't put too much emotion into the paper man for the rest of his life. Can Qingshan die?

Does the author have any misunderstanding about the winery's style? . . In the section of catching tequila. . . If we follow Gin's style in anime, the protagonist is already dead. . Why? The original plot in the anime: A candidate for prime minister and a former high-ranking official of the Self-Defense Forces. Gin's explanation for killing him was simply that this person would promulgate some laws that would be detrimental to the organization after he came to power. . . (Of course, it's also possible that I want to change to someone who is obedient or someone who cooperates with the organization. Ginjiu didn't say anything in the anime.) Brother hasn't come on stage yet. . . And even if he promulgates laws that are unfavorable to the organization, he will be assassinated in public to scare the monkeys. . . A person who wants to organize in the eyes of the organization. . . Young. . As a bachelor, the only little problem that is a bit tricky is that I have a good relationship with the Suzuki family, but it's not a big problem. . . His last name is not Suzuki. . The red Siamese cat (fake) that appeared in the theatrical version is a terrorist organization that dares to target the second in command and the daughter of the Suzuki family. When the time comes, the organization will try again wearing a green Siamese cat vest. . . Then what makes me most speechless is. . . Obviously he is already dealing with a large-scale transnational underworld, but he can still let his weak point run around without protection 🙂 This is how he looks down on the winery. . . The Metropolitan Police Department can't afford to offend you, but it still can't catch an artist who performs everywhere? When the time comes, there will be a set of sacks and the people will be flown directly to Africa. I will see how the protagonist will bring the people back. . . What? How to leave the country? Kidd can bring Conan the Dark Lord to Singapore. . Is it difficult for a winery to get someone to go abroad? Why do cia mi6 fbi and even the local evil police force just send undercover agents in secretly and set up a secret department to investigate without daring to come out openly? . . Because those who came obviously are gone. . Isn't that what Judy's father is like? There are also Akai Mutake, who is still living in the story, and his wife (it's not clear whether Belmode escaped death when he let the water go) Jingguang didn't dare to leave his cell phone behind before he died, because he was afraid that his friends and family would be retaliated against. . The protagonist Wei Guangzheng is fine, but please also think about the people you control. . . His own sniper has a history of being coerced. . Why do you think the winery won't replicate the style of its predecessors?

About the plot of Mermaid Island before and after Chapter 360 A very ideal and impossible plot. First of all, this situation is not considered a riot at all, and the riot is not caused by your protagonist's words. Credit is shared. If it were so easy to get such credit, everyone sitting in this position would judge the riot with just one sentence. It's funny. Another point is that the riot is a credit to the Metropolitan Police Department, but what about the local government officials? Isn't that a huge stain on your political performance? Do you really think that everything is said by the protagonist? So brainless

When I read Chapter 57, I said it was just average. It followed the same path as most novels. The emotional scenes were a mess, and there was no candy. The heroine's plot was pitiful. Personally, I think the emotional scenes can be deleted. It's a piece of cake. There's no difference between having it and not having it.

Preliminary summary: The protagonist is an indigenous person, and he is an authentic old Japanese from the inside out.

It's a pity that it's unfinished. I've been following it for a long time. It's a pity

I just want to ask, is the protagonist married?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Your heroine's appearance is too sudden, right?😒