Conan: Rice Krispies Spring

Failure is rebellion, success is revolution

What's going on? Martial law in Seoul. Airborne troops surrounded the National Assembly... And it was lifted in ten minutes.

The protagonist's line design is a bit fragmented. The line design is a major reflection of the character. The protagonist's communication with Moori Kogoro and Gin was quite normal at the beginning. He was no nonsense, mature, steady, and serious. Later, when talking to the Miyano sisters, he suddenly started to be clever, complain, make jokes, and even act cute. It's awkward + low. It's so divisive for you as an organization cadre to talk like this. Do you stop writing protagonists as soon as you get involved with a female character? Do you have to automatically start frivolous flirting with girls? So I don't know how to write emotional scenes, so I suggest you write less.

It feels like Lu Junyi, Qin Ming and the others established a Liangshan sect😂

None of this author's four books has been completed safely.

After reading two or three chapters, I realized that the protagonist is an aboriginal. I don't understand. What is there to write about in an aboriginal novel? In the original work, he is a minion. The aboriginal novel turns the minion into the protagonist, but how can he become the protagonist without an entry point? It's like you are a low-level person with no background and no money. If you want to break through, you must have an opportunity, such as the appreciation of a noble person or the dedication of your life, etc. So you can write that you don't know the plot, but you can't be an indigenous person, otherwise it will be very strange.

Didn't Sotakuya stop writing? I quite like that one. The author has quietly opened a new book?

I could still watch it at first, but now it's getting more and more clumsy and awkward. I just keep going through the plot, and it's no different from other Conan fans.

The young general is so interesting. He was tried many times One did not admit his fault Two did not plead guilty Three did not pay the fine The Xiba people were so angry, hahahahaha He was put in jail, and the army started patrolling at the door of the police station that day😆

To put it bluntly, it is already difficult for you to create a short novel with a Japanese native as the protagonist. How about writing a novel on this subject? Ox

I can only say that the author of The Eunuch can't even manage the group. He even openly advertises for jobs and debts in the group. I can only say that he is a naughty person.

As the protagonist is a native and there are no plug-ins, in theory, he will only follow the original story line step by step, and there will be no variables. As a fanfic, the world view and world line have been structured in advance. When there should be no variables, the author forcibly creates variables in order to highlight the protagonist. This is actually tampering with Mingke's character design. It is normal for fan fiction to change the plot, but changing the characters is a bit disgusting. Since the protagonist is set to be an indigenous person and was unknown in the original storyline, and there are no other variables now, why can he suddenly be included in the plot? Other indigenous texts at least have golden fingers to explain it. This book has nothing, but the plot can change. Do you think it's strange or not?🤭

When you write about Aboriginal stories, you don't want to criticize the characters of the original characters subjectively to the readers. You want the Aboriginal protagonists to slowly discover that they are very separate.

I am the reader Quan Doohuan, the author who hit me just screamed

It's a bit like being unable to walk after seeing a woman. Of course, this sentence is a bit exaggerated, but when I first met Xue Li and her sister, they talked too much. They talked a lot and talked about their past. If these two people are obsessed with talking about you, Gin knows that you don't want to work in the organization so much, so don't do it.

It seems to be very good so far. It is a new idea on the subject of science. I hope I can stick to it. Subscription is required to support listing.

Do you still think that you will be happy when you come in? Isn't this name an attempt to sell dog meat?

After reading it again, I no longer trust this author.

The author's writing style is very strange, not straight to the point. The writing is monotonous and has no sense of beauty. But it is messy and uninteresting. The plot is barely interesting. Content. Can it be called a novel if you keep explaining it all the time? Fan humanities tell stories, don't keep explaining them. Spending long paragraphs explaining is meaningless and will just bore people. Use stories to explain characters. Use plot to drive emotions. I can barely see it.

If I fail, I will bear it alone. If I succeed, I will not enjoy this glory to myself 🙂

Alas, how should I put it? Forget it, nothing to say.

Still a eunuch, there has been no update for fourteen days.

Sure enough, he is still a eunuch

The author's writing style is obviously good, but why are the two books written by this account so unfinished? I'm really convinced, and I'll feed myself off of it.

3 votes are given, update slowly, don't stop.

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