Below One Person, Above Ten Thousand People

With so many good reviews from you, I even suspect that I am buying a troll to save my life...

The setting was changed in the first chapter. Zhang Chulan's unremarkable college life was about being bullied. The author of Nanbukai compared the original novel to Nankai and added the setting of Nanbukai as a pheasant university. The most outrageous thing is that the protagonist failed 18 subjects for two years in his junior year. It's better to say that the protagonist has mental problems than this. It's outrageous.

Poisonous. Addicted to maintain quality

Chapter 5: Death due to poison. The author has read too many Tomatoes. How did he come up with such a plot that is so embarrassing that it can be deducted from three bedrooms and one living room?

The writing is really bad and the plot is weird. You can write it as you think of it. You are not that good at it. Just write an outline. After I finished writing it, I read it again and the logic didn't make sense. I didn't pay attention to the details. When I saw my phone being crushed for the second time, I felt like vomiting blood. What did you write? Xiaobai's writing is not written in this way, and it is full of taken-for-granted atmosphere.

After reading Chapter 18, you can assassinate the Japanese Emperor, but you can't kill a king? No matter how awesome the Wang family's bodyguards are, how can they be better than the Japanese Emperor?

After reading ten chapters, I didn't mention anything else, good or bad. When the author wrote it, he was definitely high. I don't know if others were high. He was definitely high.

Shen Nong tasted a hundred herbs, I tasted Shen Nong, my evaluation was poisonous

How can I put it, the protagonist's power is from the time and space of ancient times, but it is not obvious, and there are no specific details about his abilities or moves. He is just strong, very strong, but he is definitely not as good as the old master. And it will jump repeatedly on the same timeline. I don't think the author can grasp the writing method of repeatedly jumping the timeline. In addition, the protagonist had a girlfriend (who is dead) who looked very similar to Feng Baobao, and was said to be exactly the same later. The protagonist said that he loved his girlfriend deeply, but he was entangled with Feng Baobao during repeated jumps in the timeline (I only watched the first three jumps). I felt This is quite poisonous. The protagonist's girlfriend has a pure motivation point, a reason for the protagonist to do things in the alien world. However, with the appearance of Feng Baobao, the protagonist's affectionate personality has collapsed a bit. At the same time, the motivation is given by the girlfriend's sister, which feels a little abrupt. The most important thing is that the character of the protagonist is fragmented. According to the author, if the protagonist can repeat his studies in college for three years and has already collected information about university leaders before the system is activated, he must be bold and careful, good at collecting and organizing information and not running away. He may also have some other specialties. But regarding the death of his girlfriend, he said that he was obsessed with it and did not believe in suicide. He kept searching for evidence, but Mao couldn't find it. Is this reasonable? Looking at the title of the novel, it should be pointed out that the protagonist and Feng Baobao are definitely going to be a couple, so I think this ex-girlfriend setting is a bit disgusting for readers.

Author, who are you? The Guinness record is typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, and then 20 minutes to go to the toilet, 40 minutes Take a shower, an hour of exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour of dazed fishing. You should have nine hours to type, and you should type 435,780 words. Calculated according to 2,000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so much content every day, what's going on? Honestly, is it a deduction? The donkeys in the production team dare not take such a rest, and the author quickly got up to type!

Generally speaking, there is actually only one problem when looking at the whole story, that is, the protagonist's relationship with his girlfriend in the early stage is too abrupt, which makes people feel weird. In the early stage, when we look at the protagonist, there is no explanation of the story between him and his girlfriend, but suddenly he is on the phone again, and he says to Feng Baobao, you are not her after all. Has the author ever been in love?

I don't know why, but I can't stand it when I see a height of 1.75 Meters 😥

The book review section is poisonous, right? A wave of people raved about it, and a wave of people said it was poisonous, but Shen Nong didn't say where the poison was.

Although you, the author, are very interesting, you really poisoned Shen Nong.

There are basically no big poisonous spots, but there are quite a lot of small poisonous spots. Fortunately, I have been reading for many years and my poison resistance is relatively high, otherwise I really wouldn't be able to survive, but it's quite enjoyable to read.

"The writing is really bad" "The writing is very solid" Is writing still subjective in this aspect? Does it vary from person to person? 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

I thought it was the author's own sarcasm, but after reading it, I found out that it was the truth.

Don't be a eunuch, this is the best fanfic I've ever seen.

The book is very good so far, I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. After all, this is the best fanfic I've ever seen.

I can't hold on until chapter eleven.

Seeing that he was fooling around with Zhang Chulan, he retreated decisively.

Oh, originally I wasn't curious, but the introduction said so, so I must be a Shennong and taste the poison for everyone.