I Won a Lot of Money After Announcing My Retirement

The introduction is too difficult to think about, and I have no idea how to change it. I'll leave it like this for now, and I'll figure it out one day. Thank you all the Summoners for your comments and opinions. It has indeed made me aware of my problem with rhythm control. However, if I don't modify the previous article (rewriting it will cause eunuchs, so I choose to insist on finishing it) I can only slowly improve and grow later. This is an ordinary fantasy alliance article. It may be different from other alliance articles, and it may not look that interesting, but this is the story I want to write. I am lucky to be seen by the summoner. As for other things, we will not respond. If there is a summoner who likes it, that would be even better~ The road ahead is long and only words can accompany me. Then what I want to talk about is pain! It hurts so much! When I used to be a happy reader, I always felt that the author was too busy and weak... Now, now I understand. Don't write articles if you have nothing to do. It's really a waste of your body. I originally thought that I could be a diligent and diligent daily slave, but I never thought that I would lose to a boring job, but I lost to my suddenly deteriorating health. Fever, severe cold and toothache came one after another, which made me directly suspect that I am autistic. It was really a dream-like experience when illness came and went away like silk. I started to catch a bad cold on the afternoon of the 8th. In the blink of an eye, it was the 19th. The cold was gone, but half of my face was swollen due to toothache and inflammation. . It hurts, it hurts, it really hurts. When I get better, I will make up for all the updates I missed. Because I want to record my growth, I will leave a brief comment~ Hi, I wish all summoners good health and all the best.

Should you retire or continue playing professionally? What I hate the most is the look of retirement, but I still have the mentality of playing professionally! Why do you care about these things after you have retired? I was attracted by the introduction. The author's doing this will only disgust people... Maybe what I said is a bit unpleasant, the author does not blame me.

There is too much emphasis on the female character at the beginning, and it seems that the heroine is the default one. The emotional line is laid out too quickly, and there is too little description of the game's gameplay. There is always a sense of instant vision when watching a fantasy romance online drama, that is, a romance novel wrapped in a game cover. But it's not sweet either, because the pace is slow, and I didn't even hold my hand when I first met, but I was just a stranger whose name I knew. The slow emotional line greatly amplifies the reader's irritability.

All I can say is that I am totally enjoying myself. I read a few pictures, describing psychological activities, which took up 4 to 5 pages. It was really tiring to read. The most embarrassing thing is the author, how did you type "Oops, OMG, I've finished my French fries"? ? ? People who watch it are so embarrassed that they have cancer. I wish you a safe journey and farewell!

I suggest the author stop writing about e-sports. I have read more than a dozen new e-sports books during the New Year. Yours is the most speechless. Of course, the subject matter is very good, but it feels like a love story. The content of writing games is the same as that of high school students. It is suitable for girls. I suggest the author write on female channels, which will definitely be more popular than male channels.

I thought it was an e-sports article. After reading a few pictures, I looked at the comment section. I thought it would be okay to make excuses. But after reading a few pictures, I realized that was not the case. Romance novels disguised as e-sports articles are still kind of vulgar.

Are you kidding me? Imaginary professional e-sports article? This is just like you writing an entertainment article that doesn't involve filming variety shows and testing female stars in their big villas. I just want to watch you compete in the group stage and world championships. What do you think of your presumption? No bright spots

The author takes a look at the new author's description of the game, the description of the game in League of Legends: Remastered Master, and the old book about hexagonal jungle. You are too blunt. I don't know what those who say food and grass in the comment group think. Are you praising it? I will read every e-sports article. Your advantage is to write about emotions. You can focus on carving out the inner thoughts of the characters in the game, and then look at other people's descriptions of skills. Instead of one Q hitting, one E hitting, it's all like this. The recommendation vote has been voted, the subject matter is very good, I hope you can work hard.

I was really disgusted by writing a love story with the skin of playing games. Those people in the comment area knew it was dragging at a glance. Those who said it looked good, do you have diamonds in the game level? I laughed so hard. Lucian went up and beat him to death, Yunmuhehehe, the other onehehehe, the writing was so good, wonderful hahaha

To be honest, my league level is not high and I can't understand the operations of those kings, so I generally can't tell the quality of the game, but those original teams make me too embarrassed. Writing e-sports articles, unless the author is like Butterfly Blue, creates an original game, otherwise, for example, you When writing about the league, in our impression, there are already many familiar teams. Then you replace the familiar teams with unfamiliar teams and unfamiliar players, and add the same games. Such a comparison will really make people feel confused, and it is easy to make people feel confused.

At first I thought the writing style was okay, but the more I read, the more I felt it didn't feel right. Is the author a girl? This is not the flavor of male video game writing. Many plots are too strange for those who are used to watching male videos. It's better to post a girl's video, to be honest.

To sum it up in one sentence: Romance stories in the name of a game are just like a TV series about romance in the name of a game. They are purely disgusting.

In fact, the change is simple, that is, there is no need to create so many self-made teams. Good e-sports league articles will almost always create a protagonist who joins a team we are familiar with. Among the players we are familiar with, we use various methods and various opportunities to group them together, and then increase the reader's sense of involvement. The league has become old. Now, the reader's sense of involvement is no longer "vn rushes into the crowd 1v3", but the explanation of the team cooperation: "His grand opening interrupted the perfect curtain call, the sudden moment was so charming that it accelerated, and then he flashed over and danced in pairs back to the policewoman." If what you write has a sense of picture, you have succeeded. Let me give you an example. In your first 10 chapters, you wrote about the first game where the male and female protagonists meet. I had no sense of immersion at all. The basic quality of professional players is not to be tricked by some weird routines, such as your Morgana. Learning E to defraud at level one, and then flashing into the tower, is impossible for most people in high-end games. Even if Thresh upgrades to level two and comes up to press you, it must be E. Even if it is not e, it must be Q. Pull two steps, and e will slow down instead of flying over. I think you are the first one, just write casually, then the second one is a new author. The game writing is too stiff, and one game is too short. Competitive texts rely on competitions to get success. There is not even one chapter in a game, and you are not good at competitions. So what do you think 😥

I've read a few chapters, but based on the current writing style and plot, I don't need to read it at all. It's pretty bad for an e-sports article. The author should stop writing about e-sports.

Go to a female channel, seriously...

There are dozens of photos, and I don't care about that and that woman. . . I really can't understand your rhythm. .

In the past, e-sports articles were very popular, but now it is rare to find high-quality e-sports articles. The problem is here, various system plug-ins and so on, and then substitute them into reality. To put it bluntly, it is a cool article. In fact, the writing style of full-time masters is not too out of the ordinary. In the past, when e-sports articles just started, the structure was like this. What makes him outstanding is how he brings the game circle to life. Actually, what you want to read is not this game or competitive article, but some conjectures and fantasies. Compete with famous players on the same stage, create your dream team, have an affair with a beautiful host and a beautiful anchor, and so on. Even if you read with three-tenths of your seriousness and attitude, you will find this purely imaginary setting very embarrassing.

To be honest, I originally read the game article, but Chapter 17 has nothing to do with the game. The relationships between the characters are messy, and I really have no patience. There are only a few people who are still ambushing each other for more than ten chapters, and they are covering up all kinds of things. This is not a romance article. Is there anything wrong with making it so complicated? Others are the golden chapter three, but you are the golden thirty chapter, right?

I don't understand why the team name was changed. Are there any popular lol novels that change the team name? I couldn't get into the first chapter and slipped away.

The author said that he would update 4,000 yuan a day, but it started to fall apart. I hereby put him under supervision. 🙂

About the update ● As expected from March 20th, there will be stable daily 4k updates, that is, two chapters [Office workers + nannies + bad emo people, there is no potential for explosive updates] [And the author is 800 words per hour, and it will take nearly five hours on the 4th day, I won't say who cried] About comments ● Accept all bad reviews, negative reviews, positive reviews, and suggestions. Comments will not be deleted. Comments are free to everyone ~ Just be happy. About Chapter Comments●The author is not used to replying in the background, so Chapter Comments basically do not reply very often, but they are all read, and suggestions and comments will be seriously considered. Thank you everyone for being willing to witness my growth. About e-sports articles●Perhaps every summoner has his or her favorite e-sports articles, and as a summoner, I also want to write the e-sports articles that I want in my heart. Those who like it will like it, and those who don't like it will not force it, so I am still free to sing my song forever, and the rest is up to the summoners. [This quote from Bobby is so cool, haha, okay, whatever you want] About the emotional line ● I admit that I really don't have control over this, but I have to write everything that needs to be written. For Yun Mu, the little girl is like a torch that suddenly lights up when he is at a low point, so ~ everyone has faith, and there is hope for victory. About the description of the competition ●The author who has spent his whole life doing nothing but not making progress also said that it is very difficult. He is working hard to study, ponder, and research, and is trying to write out the pictures in his mind. There are many loopholes and manipulations, so please forgive me. About this book ● Alliance is love, and writing is ideal. I combine the two into one, just to witness my own growth. Thank you for reading and watching, thank you. "Finally, thank you all for being here and having the pleasure of meeting each other. I wish you all peace, happiness, and all the best." About the author ● I have been an ordinary player for eight years, currently the highest ranking platinum keeper The goalkeeper [Ionia ID: The Cat Who Owes Me/Think About What Yunmu Would Do], his usual playing position is as a support player. From S10, he became a chess player and a brawler for the elderly, so he no longer has the strength and skills to speak of... But he will always love it, even though he can't win. Finally, thank you all again.