Martial Arts Longevity Begins with Reaching the Full Level of Stabbing Swordsmanship

The writing is okay. Even if someone is killed temporarily in a secret place and someone can be found out and blackmailed, the arrangement is too blunt, and it feels unbearable. If this is not solved early and instead comes out to threaten, it can be abandoned.

Alas, the beginning was so frustrating that I almost wanted to give up. Let's save it for a while and read it again later. To be honest, the various danger routines that are popular in Qidian at the beginning are so poisonous that some people choose not to watch them, which is always frustrating. Isn't it good to start off smoothly while introducing world view settings?

The first few dozen chapters are okay, with some ideas, but the character descriptions are average and unattractive. The main reason is that the character's IQ is worrying, and it gets even more outrageous later on. I don't know if she is the heroine when I meet her. Within a few days of knowing each other, I met twice, and she is so mentally retarded that she reveals some of her secrets. You said the protagonist wants to be stubborn, but Zhang Yang is the old one. You Zhang Yang, at least you have to have an IQ. The more you write, the worse it gets.

A normal person's soul, energy, and blood is 5. If the protagonist returns to the level of a normal person, won't his lifespan also be restored? Why is the protagonist's lifespan still 10 years even if his vitality and blood are 10? Suppressing the protagonist suppressed the heaven-defying bug.

The author is quite ambitious and has quite some ideas. The main reason is that he is not famous and is written by a master. Readers have the patience to read your foreshadowing. Reading the comments will tell that they don't have the patience to read your foreshadowing. It's a pity

I really can't bear to forcibly create conflicts. The whole world is only targeting the protagonist. The protagonist's mentality that the whole world is harming me is uncomfortable to watch. Is it a lone star?

I feel like the main character is too childish. The whole style of writing seems very childish.

When I went to that place where the saint and the ice were, I felt like I had changed people.

Even if you have skills in rock climbing, you are still an orphan. Why do you want to go back to collect medicine? I can't even eat before, but I still don't put in any effort. I really think it's just playing a game.

Gone. Grinding for too long

I went back directly to Luoxia Valley. Wouldn't Wolf and Fish practice for a few days before going back? If you have the ability, that's fine. Just like ordinary people, you can just risk climbing. Zhang Wuji knew that he couldn't make progress in the Nine-Yang Divine Skill before going up there. You, a time traveler, are just looking for death.

I have read many novels in which the protagonists use swords. Those who practice physical fitness, those who practice Qi, and those who cultivate immortality all use swords.

These first few chapters are so cool that you don't even know how to write them? Counter-routine?

By the way, is there a female protagonist in this article₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

I feel bad from behind

Has it been on the new book list for a long time? Why are there no comments? Is there Shennong?