Black Myth: Chang'an

The "Evil Sex Book" recommended by Qinzhi Huaqing, hahaha

Read sixty chapters. The author's writing skills are still very good, there are basically no typos and typos, and it is not a fluffy text. The problem with this book is that the author does not give each character distinct personality traits, consistent behavioral and logical patterns, and purpose or tasks in the story, and then allows the characters to promote the development of the plot themselves. Regardless of the protagonist, supporting role or villain, they may suddenly change their appearance at any time under the control of the author. It does not mean that deliberately making readers unpredictable about the direction of the plot is a good story, but making the characters come alive is a good story.

The setting and writing are pretty good, but the main character's performance is really stupid.

This building is a good building. Everyone is here for the first time. Come here, leave your footprints, say hello, spread hope, spread love. Life is so difficult, you still need to work hard, let's work hard together!

The title of the work is too big and the author's writing style cannot keep up.

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I think this book has the following advantages: 1. It's full of dark style, and it portrays the weird and inexplicable atmosphere very well. 2. But the shortcoming is that the character description is insufficient, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role, and the character itself is not explored. 3. The conflicts between the characters are relatively poorly created. Many conflicts started inexplicably, but no explanation was given in the end. 4. The power system is also unclear. How does the protagonist upgrade and how does his strength increase? 5. The protagonist has no thoughts of his own. Going to Chang'an is the path given by the system, not the protagonist's own path. If the protagonist must take the system's path, then he must give Chu a suitable reason.

Can a lazy dog ​​like Du Ting Cup really survive in this kind of world?

"Whether it's time travel or a game? If it's time travel and you can't even control your own body, it's better to die early. Don't become too successful and make a wedding dress for others. If it's a game, let's talk about it differently.

The protagonist's performance is a bit stupid, but everything else is fine, whether it's the plot or the choice of words and sentences.

Will it stretch the crotch like Du Gong?