Starting from Never Being Killed by the Witch's Knife

The first thing I felt after reading the first chapter was that it was smooth. There is no water-filled text. There are no long paragraphs of awkward and unclear psychological descriptions of blockbuster characters, no long paragraphs of dry environment descriptions that affect the viewing experience and lack of visual sense, and there are no random narratives and random explanations and introductions from a God's perspective. The plot is very smooth and full of contradictions. At the beginning, the great conflict between the witch and the empire was pointed out, and then there was a comparison of mechanical tension, and the conflict between the imperial army and the lower-class residents on the west coast was written under the great conflict. After that, it naturally followed the conflict between the protagonist and the inspection soldiers. The sense of contradiction makes the plot profound but not vulgar. Only a plot full of contradictions can be attractive enough. The characters are fully motivated. Faced with the "witch" killed by the empire, why did the protagonist save her? Facing the guarding priest, why did the soldier captain insist on searching? The seemingly unreasonable plot leads to a bigger secret. Many people say that plots that do not fit the character's motivations are foreshadowing. You will understand why later, but if you don't point it out, who will know that it is foreshadowing and not a loophole? The author did a great job. To sum up, the first chapter is really "silky", like a mountain stream flowing down directly by gravity. As the first chapter, it is undoubtedly very qualified. The highlighting of the world view and the entire environment, the highlighting of the protagonist's behavioral motivations and the main plot, as well as the rendering of the entire environment and emotions - the ocean, the tense ocean under heavy rain in the dark, the turbulent ocean full of violence, are all in place. Looking forward to the author's subsequent performance. The title of the book should not have been changed. "Starting from Never Being Knifeed by the Witch" is not as charming as "The Ocean, the Witch and the Late Night Tavern". And the painting style of the former should be more funny, but this book has a serious style. The only drawback of the latter may be that it is limited to the West Coast capital, but the former is really bad.

To the author, every reading you do is important. Please don't keep it and watch the latest chapter within 24 hours, thank you~

I can be considered an old reader, so I won't comment on the plot because I'm not qualified. I can just give you some opinions on the writing style. I have very good language habits. I am very talented and smart, so I am very suitable for taking the path of online writing. The only small flaw is to pay attention to the coherence between sentences, let the writing flow like water, so that readers can read without pressure. Of course, I still have to pile up the number of words to practice, come on!

A very sexy author A very sexy book

It's quite to my liking. Was it really written by a junior high school student?

In the past, everyone could come here to fill water and increase contribution points~

I had high expectations after reading the reviews. It may be due to the author's experience. The plot connection is not very natural, and there is an innocence that cannot be hidden between the strokes. Of course, the writing style is still great. It is indeed as spiritual as the reviews said. I would like to give you a monthly ticket and support the author.

My evaluation is that the writing is very good, but it doesn't quite match the style of the starting point. The writing style and visuals are great, but it is obviously very Japanese style (I'm sorry for my shallow knowledge and don't know what this style is. I have only seen it in early Japanese-style different worlds. Please forgive me if I am wrong). If I keep writing it, I will definitely become a boss.

Let me ask, is Yuan Xue the heroine? Why are there so few scenes? My full-text search for Handel yielded 184 results, while my search for Yuan Xue yielded only 54 results. Normally, there shouldn't be much difference between the roles of the two protagonists, right?

A book with a witch title, but only 6 of the 25 chapters have witch-related plots. Are you kidding me? The author, although the writing and characters are okay