Douluo Dalu: From the Start, I Tear Into the Grandmaster

Luffy is the biggest downfall of this book

Seeing the protagonist raising Luffy as a father and giving him all kinds of skills, I couldn't bear it. Luffy couldn't bear to give Hu Liena to him, so he started to get angry. When I saw Zhu Zhuqing giving it to Hong Maoyan, I couldn't bear it anymore and died of poison.

The writing was okay, but Lu Fei had too many plots. An original supporting character became one of the fixed characters. The protagonist shared all his skills with him, and the foreign server soul bone seemed to be ten thousand years old and was also given to him. What is the difference between him and the protagonist? Most people who read novels hope that the protagonist is unique, but what you have done here is that there is no difference between the two except for the proficiency.

The protagonist's name is Lu Yu. I don't know how to make tea?

It's a very good novel. Although it's a little bit toxic, overall the IQ is still online. Even if there are problems in some places, it can still be justified. Personally, I think it can be ranked among the top five in new Douluo fan fiction books.

It's poisonous. You can get away with a lot of money without getting anything when you enter the Wuhun Palace. Even a licking dog would lick like this. Not to mention sending a girl as a gift. The person who licked his cheek and said it was not poisonous and pushed it to me has been beaten to death.

It's very poisonous, just like the thinking of an elementary school student. The fat man next to him, Lu Fei, is a huge poison, with mediocre talent and low IQ. However, the protagonist received half of the jelly grass, and all the opportunities such as system rewards were given to him. He was forced to become a genius, and then he gave Hu Liena jelly grass and acted as a matchmaker to make them good. This nanny is disgusting. There is also an opportunity like a bunch of people from Wuhun Palace giving jelly grass when they meet for the first time.

If you don't even have a decent introduction, anyone with even the slightest bit of logic will be poisoned by your introduction. What does it mean to let people know what ordinary martial arts can do, and then come up with a systematic system? Then you are talking nonsense. If you weren't hanging, you wouldn't be able to crawl as well, so why are you pretending to be a big-tailed wolf? Just like Ah Dou and Zilong killing each other seven in and seven out, and then Ah Dou yelled that I can do seven in and seven out just like a baby. Isn't this just funny? I don't know what the actual content is, and I don't have the courage to click in. I say this because I hope the author can speak logically.

Why would you give Zhu Zhuqing to Yan? I don't understand. Regardless of whether you read the original work or the fanfic, this is what he is, a complete licker, and to put it bluntly, he is just a fucking passerby. If you don't accept it, don't give it away. What do you think of the author? You Duguyan, you want it, why don't you want Zhu Zhuqing? Even Bibi Dong doesn't want it if you have the ability! Give it to Yu Xiaogang, this is a little bit poisonous, and Luffy, don't tell me what I just saw, I'm all set, sorry

Let me talk about my personal views on the character Lu Fei. The author will try not to fall into this trap again in the future. To be honest, the role of Lu Fei has been solidified in my impression. If the author wants to remedy it, he can only downplay or modify his character flaws in the middle and later stages. For now, this guy has taken so many resources from the protagonist and has never done anything outstanding. It can only be said that he is quite decent, and the aura around him is completely built up by the protagonist using resources, and there is no bright spot in himself. Looking at this guy's performance, he has obviously suffered a big loss in the arena, lost half his life, and almost couldn't become a soul master. The protagonist begged his grandfather and grandma, first he owed Qian Renxue a favor, and then he owed Ye Lian Lian a favor to cure him. In order to repay the favor between the two, the protagonist gave away two elixirs. This may also be an arrangement by the author, who wants to promote the subsequent plot and bring the two of them together. No evaluation here. But look at what this guy did later. Well... I really didn't show much, and the matter passed lightly. Only a few days later, this guy started to live carelessly again, eating, drinking, and taking what he should. Obviously such an event that can change a person's life has happened, but I can't see any growth in this guy. He can accept everything the protagonist gives him with peace of mind. This is the most unpleasant thing. Don't say that Lu Fei is still a child now. He is still young and cannot have too high demands. Why is the character Zhu Zhuqing so popular? The early efforts of a girl with only level seven innate soul power almost caught up with Tang San, who had full innate soul power. In the few years after taking the fairy grass, her soul power improved even more than Tang San and others. If Tang San hangs up too much, Zhu Zhuqing can slap all the talented members of Shrek in the face by himself. Whether it was before taking the fairy grass or after taking the fairy grass, Zhu Zhuqing never relaxed a little bit. She kept strict demands on herself and kept chasing the footsteps of the protagonist group, because she knew that she had the worst qualifications among everyone. This is not about Zhu Zhuqingchui, but this girl's qualities are exactly what Lu Fei lacks.