From the Heavenly Prison to Immortality

He kept talking about being cowardly, but it turns out he's just another charlatan pretending to be something he's not. This weakling is jumping around everywhere, clearly tired of living.

The protagonist is clearly not a saint, but the author writes her as such, giving the impression that she is a great saint at first glance. How is the saintly heroine portrayed in TV dramas? Is it like this? (1) When the heroine sees that there are still survivors behind her, she takes out her hunting rifle and smashes the skull of the zombie next to the person with one shot.

They're already living to the end of their lifespan, so why would they be afraid of losing good karma? Others who kill people to uphold justice or join the army aren't afraid of losing good karma, but the protagonist is afraid of losing good karma just by interrogating a criminal. It's ridiculous.

Highly poisonous. I tried to survive but couldn't continue writing. Then I started showing off and got slapped in the face – I died from the poison.

He spent three years in the imperial prison. The protagonist hasn't been assimilated yet; that's impressive!

No, that's too saintly. I want to see immortal beings like Indra, not tortoises.

I've seen so many books, all the same.

Not bad, I'll add it to my collection. The style is similar to my book "Thirty Years of Exorcising Demons in the Demon Slayer Division." But just don't follow his example and abandon the project.

Well written, please add more chapters!

The pacing is too slow. I don't know if the "heroic figure" or what you're saying is just setup; it feels like the protagonist's strength isn't that great after chapter 200.