Martial Arts Immortality: Starting from the Spiritual Beast Map

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There are a lot of people in the comment section who are bragging about this book. Are they getting paid? In the first chapter of the game, the poison was released. When he was at his weakest, it was clear that the pig's spirit refused to be accepted and he wanted to absorb the dog's spirit to improve his sense of smell. Isn't the pig's sense of smell much stronger than that of a dog? I have the spirit of a beast and am picky and picky. I write this stuff in the first chapter. Is this a good book?

There are too many mistakes and omissions in killing strange beasts and touching beards. How can you still reason with Jie Dao, who chopped off his beard after just one more word? Knowing that it was a hunter who did it, he captured all the hunters within a ten-mile radius. He would rather kill the wrong one than let go, so he is a bandit in troubled times. Can a family without food help the eldest brother to be released from the labor force? What's going on in the county, don't the leopard bandits know? The protagonist signed up to learn martial arts and went home in martial arts uniform on the first day. Where did the money come from? There are too many loopholes. The author wants the bandits to discover it whenever they want. Even if there are loopholes, they will treat it as if they didn't see it and provide "alibi". You think that modern laws are sound, but even if the laws are sound, they will give you a first and second suspect spot.

Every time I see this kind of chapter, I feel that Nao Shen has opened the door for Nao Shen, and Nao Shen has come home. No, you are in a modern civilized society. Do I need a reason to kill you? What else is an alibi? What's more, they are bandits, who are you? You are not even a warrior, you are at the bottom of society. Where do you get the confidence to prove it to others? How hilarious.

When I saw Chapter 44😂😂, I was really puzzled as to how this bandit could be so awesome. After killing several of his minions, he tracked them down for more than three months, and then he was still found and assassinated. He even dared to openly kill disciples of the Liuhe Sect. Moreover, the bandit was only in the Qi realm, and the sect leader was a higher realm than the bandit leader. The rest of the plot is fairly understandable, but I'm really speechless after seeing this. I feel like it's much better than a regular organization. This is just a bandit around a small county. As for the future plot where the protagonist becomes a headhunter, I haven't watched it yet, so I won't comment.

If you see that you are going to be a catcher just to avoid trouble, you shouldn't continue to do it. Shouldn't the top priority be to practice martial arts non-stop? I just killed Cruel Heart Pillar and I have money, but the bandits don't dare to enter the city, so I have to be a catcher. The master is at the third level of Blood Realm. Isn't it easier to kill a Qi Realm than to kill an ant? You still want to send your apprentice to the Yamen to hide from trouble, because you are afraid of offending the bandits and hurting your relatives and friends, so why do you practice martial arts? Even your own apprentice can't protect you from accepting a stupid apprentice? The most important thing is that Senior Brother Yuan said that one person at the third level of Qi Realm can kill one hundred and eighty people below the third level without armor! There are only so many bandits in total, and even the masters and third-level blood realms are not enough for him to kill by himself!

After reading more than forty chapters, the encounters of the bandits were forcibly added to the drama, and then continued endlessly. I don't know how long they will be entangled. After the bandits were eliminated in the city, they almost acted openly outside the city, and then they said that the government could never catch them. What kind of logic is this? The writing and characters are okay, but the plot needs to be more rigorous.

Awesome, awesome, no brain in writing. Bandits can be so awesome that they block the door. He dared to kill people in the city.

The writing is good, but the previous plot arrangement is too rigid. I still don't understand why a group of bandits are so persistent in chasing a few people to death. Moreover, you also made the bandits have the same ability as the yamen to investigate cases. It is not that a bandit has such great ability. What does the government do for such an awesome bandit? If there is an explanation later, just ignore it.

I was short of books. I wanted to read it to pass the time, but it got worse and worse. I gave up. This is a personal view of traveling through the Golden Finger Martial Arts School in troubled times, all the old routines. It took a long time to describe the character's psychology, but the actual situation couldn't do it. The protagonist looked like a fool. Especially when writing about a man who goes up a mountain to kill bandits, the author should want to set the protagonist as a smart person who thinks things through and knows everything like a god, but the writing feels like he is out of his mind, and too much is illogical.

The bandits in a small county are well organized and strict in ordering and banning cattle. They are better than the army.

What I wrote before was pretty good, but suddenly I went off topic and changed to solving a case, and it suddenly felt uninteresting.

The male protagonist is not likable and the plot has no highlights.

In general, in the early stage, the ability to obtain creatures is clearly stated, but the author does not understand the abilities of creatures, only half-understands. There is obviously a limit to the number but I have no plan to learn any abilities. I just forget about it in the early stage. After all, it is to save my life. The last few are really not done well. At the very least, we should try the theoretical infinite lifespan of lobsters, the regeneration of severed limbs of leeches and earthworms, and the many powerful abilities of insects. I don't know much about biology, but I know these powerful characteristics of creatures. Good ability is equivalent to everyone having a golden finger. The strength of a bear, the speed of a leopard, the flight of a bird, the fire attribute and the weak thunder attribute

The prices are ridiculous. Four cents can buy two kilograms of white flour and one tael of sesame oil. A coolie earns 20 cents a day. Even if he only has ten cents for himself, he can still feed a family of three white-flour steamed buns every day. However, those who can afford white-flour steamed buns are already considered well-off. This is simply ridiculous.

Author: The bandits in your world are children of the world? Everything is flowing smoothly?

The speed of the turtle The endurance of the leopard The memory of the fish The appetite of the bear The vision of the mole

In order to be able to sleep as a police officer, I started to embark on the road of solving crimes. This operation is really six. The master can kill bandits in sneak attacks. With the protagonist's strength and speed, the Bat Radar. The bandits who have beaten the protagonist every day can't catch up. The bandits don't dare to go out for ten and a half months. I really don't understand how to become a dog.

The protagonist's golden finger is in Schrödinger's state, right? The general direction is not scientific, but the details are strictly scientific. The protagonist inherits the special skills of the bear and the antelope, which is not scientific in itself. However, when it comes to inheriting the special skills of the turtle, he talks about science and is drunk.

The detective bandit also knows what kind of poison was poisoned from the corpse, and can accurately predict the time of death of the deceased on a snowy day. Even if the person buys medicine, the store will remember that there are so many people hunting in a few months, and the drug store can cooperate with the bandit to identify the person. There are only two villages within a hundred miles, right? The bandits are so unscrupulous

I feel like my brain circuit can't keep up! A matter of life and death! Go and work as a detective to investigate the case? If you don't use your strength to kill bandits, you are suddenly not doing your job! It burned my brain out and I can't stand it anymore 😥

It looks good, has a natural rhythm and a reasonable plot. The upgrade system is very good and does not crash easily. I am optimistic about this book, it has the opportunity to become a little god.

Don't you even think about writing novels now? The blind old mother was shocked to see this. She could put some sesame oil on it even if she couldn't afford to eat. I have gained a lot of experience after reading novels for more than ten years. Ha ha ha ha

I read everyone's comments. There were some problems in Chapter 60 or 70, including the subsequent extermination of the bandits. But from now on, after Chapter 128, it slowly gets better. The upgrade system of the spirit beast map has also begun to be improved. Later, except that the update was too uncomfortable, I could catch up and watch it. The system of the world, exercises, and nine-square grid has also been straightened out. Anyway, I skipped some in the middle, and then I kept reading. The monthly ticket was given once, and the other tickets were basically given to the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but I still kept reading this book. Overall, it is recommended

The protagonist is a reborn person with mediocre IQ and mediocre skills, and his knowledge is useless. He can't live for three days without a cheat. It's a pity that this cheat didn't play its due role.

After it was put on the shelf, this book was not worth reading. A book about martial arts and immortality can actually prevent people from dying, and the whole world will be at peace. Turn to immortality, which is a replica of martial arts. It is a school, teaching and educating people, full of justice, no casual cultivators, no fights, and no villains. I don't know what you are writing about. It's just like the results of the school class, the college entrance examination, the whole sect is harmonious, and a newcomer doesn't know anything. It's okay, just wander around, visit here, visit there! It feels like the whole world belongs to his sect, and there are no enemies there. Why don't you give up? The sect is here just to make you immortal?

Why doesn't it work? In fact, you can see it in the front, but you become a low-level person after working hard for so long. It's okay to just get a start. The person who was far inferior to the protagonist before turned out to be better than the protagonist. The author is afraid that everyone will continue to watch.

Why! What a great book, the writing and plot are good, the story is step-by-step, and the creativity of Goldfinger is also very good, why is it so bad? Isn't the age of novices in the Internet literary world over?

In the later stage of writing, I ran away to cultivate immortality. Most of the time I wrote it, I was still in the period of refining my Qi.

The protagonist doesn't think it's safe to live in a house in the officials' area of ​​the city, so he runs out of the city every day to wander around. There's a lot of ice! Writing bandits is as inflexible as NPCs. Bandits are usually outside teams of powerful people or have protective umbrellas. What if people directly spend money to buy the gate guards to prevent the protagonist from entering the city? Is it okay to directly bribe the protective umbrella to arrest the protagonist and sell him to the bandits? What should I do if the boss of the gas mirror is blocked outside? Either he practiced martial arts painstakingly in the city's martial arts hall to improve his strength, or he went into the mountains to hunt exotic beasts to increase his strength. If you don't suffer from both, you are a waste.