Anime Crossover: This Friendly Conversation System Is Way Too Friendly

What kind of character is this? His (tu cao, a form of witty retort) isn't even witty; it's just plain rude and foul-mouthed. I even suspect that the author created the world of Cardcaptor Sakura just to ruin readers' fond memories and disgust them.

Of the character designs for the main character, I think the first one is better; it has a strong youthful feel.

This is a pure retelling of the original work, devoid of any original creativity. Throughout, it's filled with slurred remarks and meaningless phrases. After reading about twenty chapters, the protagonist's motivation and core objective remain unclear. It's less a novel and more a highly emotionally charged summary of the anime's plot. As a writer, this style is completely unacceptable. I hope your next book will address these shortcomings.

Recruiting Tomoyo is fine, but separating Sakura and Syaoran is very difficult. After all, the tragedy of Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle was essentially caused by Clow Reed, which even created a time loop that can't be rectified. Thinking about it this way, we can understand why Sakura grew up happily in Cardcaptor Sakura. Would Clow Reed really allow the protagonist to separate Sakura and Syaoran?

The more I watch, the more useless the protagonist seems. He's only useful for daily dialogue; whether he's there or not makes no difference in capturing the Clow Cards. The main character has absolutely no presence.

Tomoyo is a little girl. Don't always portray her as someone with a deep and scheming mind. She's just a little girl in her early teens, and you're making her sound like a psychopath.

The premise isn't very good; the protagonist's constant sarcasm and sarcastic remarks are really annoying.

The author is either gay or a fujoshi (female fan of BL), and every time Li Xiaolang appears to look at the male protagonist, Li Xiaolang has to blush. It happens every single time, without fail, and it's so awkward and disgusting to read. A few times would be fine, but it keeps happening! 😒

The male lead is from Nantong, and he's already been seeing Chengshi (a man).

They came for Tomoyo, but it seems uncertain whether they'll accept her or not. I think I'll wait and see.