Card Simulator

I like the author's creativity and setting very much, but the core of the novel is the plot. It is impossible to rely entirely on an unlikable female protagonist to drive the main line of reality. After fighting against the heroine's family of origin, the next villain after the superiors relies on beauty to cause trouble. No one likes their partner to go out every day and make enemies for them, especially the protagonist's invincible personality. How to promote this relationship? Is it all based on profit? This way of causing trouble is only suitable for the traditional Long Aotian who has a personality that causes trouble. Moreover, the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine is not deep, there is no foundation, and the interests are not very big. The promotion of this is very strange, and the connection is established very forcefully. It is better to directly set the original person to be the leader of the true love fan, and the last wish pushes the hero to accept the relic challenge, etc. At least the logic will be smoother, or the intersection in childhood will be forgotten when he grows up/travels, and it will not be so awkward to get along with. At present, it seems that the female protagonist is specially designed to help the male protagonist upgrade, and the growth rate can keep up with the male protagonist. She is not a flower vase, but the character and story are not set well, and she is more suitable as a tool. For example, if she wants to use means to enslave the male protagonist, she will be counterattacked. It is reasonable not to cultivate feelings in this way. In short, the current main plot relies on an unpopular woman, and the way it is promoted is too outrageous. I hope to turn this woman into an upgraded tool as soon as possible and find other ways to promote the plot. Leave it for a week and then come back and take a look.

Deliberately designed to look like a real person, it poisoned me

If you can't stand it anymore, why don't you insist on praising your Shangguan Qianxue? All the plots related to Shangguan Qianxue are very inexplicable, which lowers the perception. The protagonist is usually quite normal, but when he meets Shangguan Qianxue, he immediately loses the judgment that a normal person should have (even setting the cards to look like Shangguan Qianxue). The plot development is not what follows Shangguan Qianxue. The emotional line is just pretentious, as if he can't stand the unreasonable troubles and wants to drive her away. Finally, a situation arises and he is forced to develop an emotional line with the official Qianxue. He even designs a talent for her to awaken specifically for the protagonist. Do you really think this character is very likable? Moisturized

The interpersonal relationships and plot of this book are all a mess. I don't know what the author actually wrote in this book

After reading Chapter 10, don't be fooled. It's so poisonous. I'd rather watch the cuckold's movie than watch this.

How to put it this way, the protagonist has to start the simulation a few days before the entrance exam after traveling for more than ten years, and this simulation is guaranteed to make money. If you fail and die in the simulation, you can actually spend 1 point (almost the same as free) to resurrect, and if you fail, you still get points. The only thing consumed is mental power (which can be recovered by sleeping). The only thing that costs money is the base holy relic, and the holy relic is relatively cheap. It can only be said that the protagonist is quite hung up. After reading so many simulation articles, I have never seen one that can be resurrected after simulated death. Can't you try it again if you are at a loss? You have to resurrect for free to make a steady profit

The poison started from the follower Ka Qianxue, and by the time the love letter ended, I was already poisoned and died. The content of the love letter is only suitable as a side story, and it would be really confusing to use it as the main plot. I don't know if you have an outline. Anyway, I feel like I'm letting myself go a little bit, so it makes sense to stop recommending it. You normally write some college content and then go to the front line to earn military merit and finally save the world and you can finish the book. If you have to write some plot that has nothing to do with strength, I don't understand it.

Well written! Only the design of Qianxueka was a little bit toxic, but I later came around.

When simulating this novel, can the main character be a little bit less 🐮? Others can accept it, but he can't accept it if he is criticized 🐮

It was fine at first, but after more than 40 chapters, the plot fell apart. The opponent was outsmarted, and even the protagonist was outsmarted and gave up.

The card settings in the early stage are too strong, and most of them will be weak in the later stage. They are also poisoned at the critical moment. Isn't it good to concentrate on playing cards?

Your introduction attracted me... But your past works left me wondering what to do... I'll wait for half a month before talking about it, give me a look

Do you have to summon the card girl to write a card? The protagonist is the logistics, so the cards are really nothing like that. You can't open your mind and learn Yu-Gi-Oh mode. For example, when the protagonist is pretending to be brave, he starts a battle and sets the action. He shouts at the second point to summon the beast card White Tiger, activates the fusion card to fuse the summoner himself, evolves into the Khajiit form, activates the weapon card Storm Thunder Hammer, special evolves the Khajiit knight form, activates the magic forest effect of the field card, increases the combat power of the beast system, and activates the cruelty. Isn't this fusion system as good as summoning those beautiful girls? The beast master turns into a tiger man and attacks the enemy with a cruel smile in the jungle environment with a pair of hammers. Coupled with the use of attack skill cards, the tiger's sky-blasting hammer does not fill up the picture, it looks extremely violent.

The real-life plot is too stupid, and the character of the key male protagonist does not show any characteristics that a male protagonist should have. Instead, he is written like a villain and a minor character.

So far, it's okay. There are no SB poisonous points unique to the academy stream. I hope there won't be any in the future.

The writing is quite good, but to be honest, it's a pity that the goblin didn't start a tribe and became cannon fodder. You see, after rebirth, he has memories. If he goes back and forth to expand the tribe, he is no better than a mage.

Changed the plot? Wasn't it like this yesterday?