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It was good in the early stages, but The King really didn't make sense. As soon as The King came out, I lost all desire to watch it.

At first, I thought it was a plot set by myself, but it turns out that the author is obsessed with the King? In the second half, all the characters are kings. With your setting, you don't have to forcefully add a king and you can write it. It feels weird when I write about The King. How should I put it? Your setting doesn't fit well with The King. When I read it, I felt disconnected and awkward. Although the author also writes about games in this book, generally the benchmarks of this type of novels are those open games, such as Warcraft, Legend, and Genshin Impact. Suddenly a king is added, and the sense of immersion is directly reduced. It feels like an original novel turned into a fanfic

The king really didn't have a sense of involvement and slipped away.

It's not good to write about the king. . .

How many people did the king persuade to retreat😅

Hey, the King is really hard to watch as the main plot.

The writing was okay, but I was embarrassed when the king came out, and I slowly got used to it after that. I originally thought that the protagonist was single and had no relatives, but unexpectedly he had adoptive parents and a girlfriend. Although it was to expand the plot, it was still a bit unbearable to be on the verge of poisoning. Sure enough, I still like the orphan protagonist in game writing and there is no female protagonist.

Coke is corrosive water, why is it a life potion?

In the plot of Longevity Without Borders. The villain is bad enough, so when he is killed, it will be tragic enough. It's just that it's so frivolous that it prevents readers from releasing their emotions, which is a bit poisonous. It would be much better to add a sentence like "Being cut into pieces by Lingchi, dying in endless pain and regret." Or play the old trick of "Only one of you two can live" is fine. In addition, because of the setting of the respawn point, you should actually make foreshadowing in advance, either by killing monsters and exploding, or as a reward from this list, there is a prop that can forcefully change the respawn point of others. Cooperating with the villain, because of the setting of the respawn point, he said to the protagonist "It's useless if you kill me, I will be resurrected elsewhere, and you are waiting for my revenge..." It formed a routine but a very useful little point.

This author is an old eunuch. None of his books have more than 300 pictures. Please don't follow them.