Versatile Mage: Start by Getting the White Tiger Pendant

I skipped reading and followed this book for a day or two Mainly because there were some poisonous points that kept me from getting into it Sometimes I was embarrassed to do other things, and I calmed down before continuing to read I sorted out some of the poisonous points in the early stage ˙There is too little characterization of the protagonist's sister, giving the impression that the protagonist and his sister fall in love with each other inexplicably ˙The plot of Mo Fan and others was postponed for a year, and then the protagonist went to Mo Fan's plot (I feel that compared to the postponement , it is better to advance the plot of the protagonist a year and add more original plots) ˙The protagonist always talks about keeping a low profile and then pretends to be cool, as if he is afraid that others will not recognize him (he seems to have done an interview in the middle) ˙The protagonist's combat power seems to be invincible and the combat power rises too fast, and there is not much writing about the improvement process, so it looks like the protagonist suddenly becomes stronger and the magic power seems to be endless ˙The author's writing style is still a bit naive ˙The protagonist will suddenly say some very OOC dialogue, such as suddenly pretending to be cool or something (mainly because the protagonist's character was a bit boring in the past, and then suddenly pretending to be cool in front of strangers, such as when he was in school) ˙ Basically, it's all about plot, and there's very little about daily trivial matters. As a result, the shaping of the protagonist group is quite boring ˙In the early stage, the overall plot was just that passers-by questioned the protagonist, and the protagonist appeared to be a saint and slapped him in the face ˙ The protagonist had an affair with other people in the early stage (Tang Yue), and there were signs of a harem story (not sure) Mainly because this book has been shared before So I had high expectations for this book But in reality it looks like It's just average The poisonous points above are just for the early stage (I didn't read it later, and I have no motivation to read it) Anyway, if you can accept the above poisonous points, then this book is worth pursuing😥

It is recommended not to include two lines from an ancient poem when the protagonist is showing off. It is very embarrassing. Some of the battle descriptions have a fantasy fairy tale feel. It is very dramatic. A woman's love will flutter at every turn. There are many redundant descriptions. It feels like watching a pornographic novel. It's like this, very low, and there are some logic problems. For example, in the scene with the fire spirit species, the protagonist directly said that Tang Yue was chasing Chao He. When they first met, he told Tang Yue that Tang Yue was poisoned without any explanation, but Tang Yue stopped asking after that. It felt like the supporting character was seriously degraded. So it's smooth, and I hope the author will improve it in the next book.

(Disclaimer) The author of this post: The deacon who has fully subscribed to this book, the lv24+ junior VIP only subscribes and does not reward free prostitutes, and has not received any other operating funds except for the era of high martial arts (Translation: I have read this book and no money has been confiscated in this post😏) Write in front: After adding to the bookshelf, click the ellipsis after the book title and select "Details" "Love", pay attention to the introduction below the completed word count and the badge wall on the left: As the name suggests, it was the first full-time mage book on the Internet, and some people said: "Oh, why is my screen dirty..." 😃 A major problem in current full-time mage fandom is that the combat power and plot of the post-academy, especially super-level, have both collapsed, resulting in rapid discontinuation of reading or even unfinishing after it was released. But this book is different. I personally think that the most exciting part of this book is the super-level part, that is, the quality of the later part of the book is extremely guaranteed, which is one of the reasons why it can become a masterpiece of fan fiction. I can guarantee the above content with a dog head, and will talk about the following content 🔨 Summary of advantages: 1. The combat power system is reasonable The author is proficient in primary school multiplication, and will not multiply 2 where it should be multiplied by 3. The performance of skills at each level is in line with the original work. It is truly not a magic modification but a fanfic. At the same time, the discussion area also has an overview of magic and realm settings provided by the boss, and the environment for discussing combat power is relatively harmonious. 2. The new system/plug-in setting is reasonable (As can be seen from the title and previous chapters, it is not a spoiler) The new system added for the protagonist in this book is the gold system, and the plug-in is the white tiger pendant. Compared with other fans, it is relatively conservative. The gold system does not have the expressive power of collapse, and the author did not add settings from other animations and other works, so it is relatively friendly to the original party. As for the author's own magic names and specific realm settings, the author will open a free chapter every 100 or so chapters to explain after the protagonist enters a high level, so the reading experience is good. Summary of shortcomings: Since it has been a long time since I wrote this book review and I finished reading it, and the impact of this book on me is that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages, when I recall the shortcomings, there will inevitably be biases and omissions, and I would like to ask my book friends to correct them on my behalf. 1. Preliminary plot Another difficulty in Versatile Mage fan fiction is the control of new ideas in the early stage, especially for the start of Bo City. The handling of junior and intermediate levels in this book has been criticized by some readers. Personally, I think the reasons are mainly due to the following two points: ① Free chapters and early subscription chapters are important parts to ensure readers follow up. Readers themselves have high requirements for them, and too many new settings in the early stage of Versatile Mage fan fiction can easily lead to the collapse of the plot and combat power. ②The author has never written a full-time mage fanfic before, so in terms of early writing experience, the author only has more writing experience in other works than the authors of unfinished fanfics on the market. Therefore, it is normal for there to be some flaws in the early part, and it is also prudent for the author to adopt a relatively conservative writing style. 2.Harem or stallion? The choice of female protagonists in Versatile Mage fanfics is also a frequently discussed topic. Some people like no female protagonist, some like single female protagonist, some like multiple female protagonists, some like it if it is a female, and some open the browser just looking at it 😍... Ahem, cough, cough, in general, we still have to face all kinds of readers and authors with an inclusive and respectful attitude. This book has multiple female protagonists (3: Lu Mei, Ding Yumian, Tang Yue), and the author likes eldest sisters. For this type of XP, readers who meet the requirements can of course enjoy it, while readers who don't like it can change the book (after all, it is already finished, and the author can't change it no matter how much you say). If you want to try a new taste, of course you are welcome 😁 In general, come here I said, as the only full-time mage fan I have fully subscribed to, the quality of this book was quite reliable and even amazing to me at the time. Readers who don't like many new settings are especially welcome. This book is worth your subscription (95 chapters on the shelf, 660 chapters completed). Of course, correspondingly, when you think that you frequently encounter poisonous points during the reading process, the most correct way is to exit and delete them all in one go. It is undoubtedly the best method of revenge to realize the author's single loss and the reader's single win🤓

I really need to stock up. After saving for a long time, I ran out of them after a while. After seeing this, let me talk about my rough opinions about this book ①The writing style is really good, the writing ideas are smooth, and the original setting is very detailed ②The description of the curse system made my eyes shine, and I couldn't help but think of a sentence in Forty Thousand Years of Cultivation: "Only monsters can compete with monsters, and only monsters can defeat monsters" (Although this sentence has a derogatory meaning in the 40,000 years of cultivation, it should be appropriate to put it in all French reviews) Cursed substances are dark substances, and if the curse system's gain and resistance reduction effect can reach the level of the Dark King, then it is really awesome. I am very much looking forward to how the protagonist will get the armor. Is the ancient king a curse? ③I don't know if the "Tai'a" in the gold system is considered foreshadowing, but even if it really becomes Tai'a sword, it seems that it is not enough. I'm really looking forward to the characteristics of the other metals that will be fused ④The protagonist is planning to create the ninth realm of qi and blood. How should I put it, the setting should be incomplete. Can the effect of a simple tidal spirit seed plus white jade paste reach the first realm of qi and blood? I don't quite understand why the tidal spiritual seed's effects can be applied to a human body. Maybe I didn't look carefully enough. Does Professor Yuan have a more specific name? Can he reach the level of scientific research of Feng Zhoulong?

I know why Thunderbolt has become popular since Undead. You are not popular. You are already a fan and you still don't remove the original CP. It's too pretentious. Only 5% of the fans still like it without removing the CP.

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Full-time mage fan fiction is actually the most difficult to write. The character of Mo Fan is so well created. Mo Fan is more like the epitome of most ordinary people. He has the small flaws that most people have, and he is also a very charming protagonist. He talks about being greedy for life and fearing death. Once he encounters injustice, in the face of strong oppression, moral kidnapping, and life and death, he will only make those evil faces pay the price they deserve within the scope of his ability. He is a He is a person who dares to love, dare to hate, and actually takes action. He is very passionate because he writes about the desires of ordinary people and their struggle against fate The protagonist of this book is also very well portrayed. He is flesh and blood, emotional and meaningful, and the three appearances are very upright. He does not deliberately vilify and suppress the protagonist, nor does he force the CP to make some disgusting descriptions. Instead, he creates through reasonable analysis of the original plot, follows the original setting and plot direction, and writes a different and wonderful story.

There is also the realm of the God of Dharma. It's not just the forbidden curses of cats and dogs, but it's the God of Dharma, okay? It is clearly mentioned in the original book that if the archangel is the messenger of the magic priest, then Mo Fan is the god of magic. At that time, there was no rebate fusion valve and demonization to achieve the complete forbidden spell of elemental and dimensional magic, so he dared to call himself a god. This was a plot that was clearly mentioned when the last twenty or thirty chapters of the original work were about to come to an end What kind of forbidden spells for cats and dogs are you here, and the forbidden spells of single systems are called gods? In the previous two or three hundred chapters, you were copying the original work down to the last detail. Why are you so casual about such a big setting issue now?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: What really makes me keep reading is that this novel does not tear apart the heroine of the original novel (because there is no need, the beauty of Full-time is to face the darkness) and some unique growth experiences that can face difficulties with the original protagonist (such as the disaster in Bo City), rather than like other Full-time fans who fall in love with each other and have a harem all over the world, which is purely a money-grabbing fantasy, straight up and evil❤️. I took a look at the comment section, and there were actually people who said they were writing about fanfics but they still didn't break down the CP to write about fanfics. I laughed a little in my heart and said a few words. I want to read something like this. Is there any harem story on the Internet? I watch Zongfa fandom to make up for regrets, not to create a harem. What I want to see is that someone will face Mo Fan when the demon system is born. It is a pity that Ye Xinxia was slandered by the temple and thrown into prison and Mo Fan tried his best to open the demon to rescue her. It is a pity that Feng Zhoulong who created the fusion magic glove was killed by Su Lu. I am curious about the emperors of the Bermuda Empire, the Far South, the Sahara Desert, the Kunlun Mountains, the Pacific Ocean, the Amazon and other places. Since there are these emperors in famous places, what about other places? Everest? Dead Sea? Cordillera? And what about the totem sacred beast? And the Forbidden City evolved into the Forbidden City Palace Master, the Holy Palace of the Potala Palace. What is exciting about Full Time is the resistance of civilians to the corrupt high-level officials, the fighting moments between monsters and evil, combined with the imperial monsters derived from famous places around the earth, and the unique totem sacred beasts of China. This is what I appreciate most about Full Time, not the emotional dramas. If you want to open a harem, just fantasize about it yourself. I am not saying that this book is very good, but it may be able to make up for my inner regret about working full-time. There used to be a book that could make up for it, but it's a pity that the author of that book didn't update it anymore, and the ideas were messed up and unfinished.       ，13，， It's best if you don't write it like a harem again. It's really unnecessary for Tang Yue to be kissed there. 🌹🌹🌹

It's too intellectual. People don't need evidence at all. As long as they think the protagonist has a motive and have a little suspicion, killing a mid-level mage with no background is just like playing. The left and right brains are fighting each other. I said before that I should keep a low profile, and then I immediately start to pretend to be cool and become famous on the Internet. And you are fighting and reciting poems at the same time. Are you a primary school student? You are so middle-aged.

I am a fan of Quanfa. I am occasionally irritated and have a lot of middle-level talk. As a senior level Shennong, my evaluation is average. If you are particularly book-hungry, I suggest you ignore the poisonous points, which will be good for your mood.

Let me talk about some of the bad points I see in the Versatile Mage fandom, my personal opinion. 1. I think I quite like the character of Mo Fan. I also believe that not many people hate this protagonist, so I think it would be too bad to seize the opportunity of the protagonist, because the author can arrange the golden finger by himself. Think about the novel natural talent, and then the special effects of the soul seed that we have never seen before, or specially design a special contract pet. As long as it does not deviate from the framework of the original work, there are many interesting points to write about these protagonist settings. For something like this, which can be completely arranged by the author himself, he has to rob the protagonist of the opportunity, and it is not robbed of Tang San. Mo Fan still has a very charming personality, so there is no need to rob him. 2. Other power systems are also poisonous. What keywords did we use to search for the Versatile Mage fanfic? Isn't that just using Versatile Mage to search for fan fiction? Isn't it because I like the world of Versatile Mage and these settings? Adding other power systems is really a headache, and it looks messy. Why is the full-time summoner the best? To be honest, the derivative character written in this fanfic is on the encyclopedia, which is really awesome. But do they have a system? Do you have any copies or substitutes? They have dug the deepest into the original work. They have studied the setting of the original work and deduced it in line with the original setting. Therefore, their content comes from the original work. It does not rely on the system to assemble a bunch of things that are not a power system at all to reduce the dimensionality and attack. This kind of writing about dimensionality reduction and attack is really meaningless. It is completely self-promoting, and it is also embarrassing and self-deprecating. 3. Fans writing about harems and stallions are not too poisonous, but if you spend a lot of pen and ink writing about the detailed process of stallion, it will be poisonous. You can't beat what I specifically found on the website. Can you write in such depth and detail? If you write it, you won't be able to stand up to it. How can you compare it? So there is no need to write it in too much depth. Just give it a quick brushstroke and let readers know that this female character has been pushed down and taken into the harem. That's fine. In the original novel, Mo Fan has two wives, and Ye Xinxia can take them both. Mo Fan relies on his childhood sweetheart to take over Ye Xinxia. This fanfic protagonist can also do it, because the first chapter of our opening chapter is usually the day when the magic is awakened. The previous ten years can help the author save money. There is a lot of foreshadowing, but Mu Ningxue's words are really hard to accept. In the original work, it is really not easy for Mo Fan to get together with her. Other female characters can be accepted casually without comparison, but Mu Ningxue has already been compared with the original work. What does the protagonist of the fanfiction rely on to accept Mu Ningxue? As many readers have said, why should he? The coming together of Mo Fan and Mu Ningxue is indeed the most detailed and difficult love story in the original novel, so why should other fan fiction protagonists? I believe that many readers will be touched when they read Mu Ningxue's confession in the original book, "Full of expectations for the rest of my life." Anyway, I was touched.

It took me two hours to finally come up with a few that are readable. There are some minor flaws, so don't look too closely

After reading about 50 chapters, I feel that there are a lot of poisonous points. I mentioned that you were low-key but the disaster in Bo City was so outstanding. I was afraid that the Black Holy See did not know who you were and still conducted a live interview. Are you kidding me? It's okay to be pretentious, but if you overdo it, it will look disgusting. And there are a lot of strange words. It's obviously a spirit, why is it called a spirit? Not only this, but also the names of the undead vessels are very strange.

It's so outrageous. I posted some pornographic pictures in the group and they kicked me out. You don't want me to post pornographic pictures. Tell me, I won't post them next time and you kicked me directly. What's going on? I paid to watch it anyway. I only posted this once in that group. Then there was no warning. They kicked me out. Then I want to join that group again. At that time, I found that the management directly blocked me, and I couldn't join the group. Even the management's own QQ account was blocked by me. It was unbelievable. My brother hates porn so much that he didn't even say a word to me. He just kicked me and told me that I can't post next time. I'm too lazy to complain. I've been really angry these past two days.

To be honest, this plot is too far-fetched. It has been a long time since Salan died. They can find other reasons. They insist on making such a plot. I am speechless.

I have followed 200 chapters. The author's writing is very good, but unfortunately I can't stand it anymore and it feels uncomfortable to read. Mo Fan in Uncle Luan left such a deep impression on me that I couldn't accept the fact that a lot of what Mo Fan had experienced was taken away by the protagonist. For Mo Fan, if he didn't experience those things, he would no longer be the Mo Fan in his heart. In addition, I really don't understand why there can be such a strong mage without going through desperate situations or experiencing huge hardships, even if he is a genius, even if he is an inheritor. Too exaggerated, too exaggerated😅😅😅

I made the mistake of voting for recommendation and voted for 4 monthly votes. . .

What did you do🤔

Why don't all the full-time mages accept Ye Xinxia? I just like the character Xinxia.

Tang Yue

After reading this book, I suddenly felt that those stallion books were better than stallion books.

A very good new book, the water type is weak in the early stage, and it is passed perfectly. The metal type has no supermodel, no system, and the failure is not outrageous. I have seen the high-level peak of the combat power around 400 chapters and it has not collapsed. It is very good. If it doesn't end later, it can be ranked among the top three in this series. If possible, add supporting roles.

Why does Yu Jian have to write a poem? Not only is it awkward, but it's also pretentious. I feel like this is a point deduction.

More emotional scenes, Ding Yumian is so cute😍 A small monthly ticket is offered

Why does the protagonist of this book awaken whatever element he wants?

The group is gone, what did you do?

The protagonist's sister is so talented that she feels like she is no worse than Mo Fan in the early stages.

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