Xuanjian: Become a Talent from the Demon Sect

When I first saw the title of this book, I was immediately interested. After all, it contains two cutting-edge masterpieces with hundreds of thousands of subscriptions. I am watching both "Gou Zai Chu Sheng Demon Sect Becomes a Talent" and "Xuan Jian Xian Clan". Combined with the turmoil a while ago, I really smiled knowingly when I saw this. 🤭 Then the introduction involves Wu Yong's style of "sending friends off" of level 8 Gu Immortal Wu Yong in The Insect Chronicles, which is barely out of the ordinary, and belongs to the best of hundreds of poetry anthologies. The plot and characterization of Xuanjian are better than those of Best Friends. The complexity and richness of the system of cultivating immortals and the world view are as complex and rich as those of Lord of Mysteries.

The author is very good at everything he writes, but he loves to argue. For example, in the scene where you and Yuan Tuan exchanged blessings, the logic of the protagonist's behavior was extremely unreasonable. I see that when you were arguing with other book friends, you still acted like you had written nothing wrong. If you write a work like Xuanjianliu, which is full of pitfalls and hooks, and you still have this attitude (meaning that you do not accept reasonable advice from readers), you will have big logical problems sooner or later.

My writing ability is limited, so I listened to readers' suggestions and made some changes. Readers who have made comments and found that they have been changed should know this. I responded to some suggestions but did not change them, and there were two disputes among them, Bomu and Zhu Shu The Bomu part was actually something I had a premonition about, and it was definitely controversial. If I didn't change it, it was because the outline was not easy to change. At that time, the original work of Wusheng Xixiang had not been written yet The second reason was because the problem was not serious. Strictly speaking, the two hundred years of Wusheng Xixiang were just like a background board. No matter from the original plot or logic, it would not be the protagonist. Third, the Li family in the original work also acquired a lot of magic skills on their own. I think that after the protagonist leaves the Qingchi Sect, there should be other channels for obtaining magic skills, and he also has his own small opportunities. Even the original plot of this opportunity is based on the plot of the original work. Derived from Dinghe's original characters, we strive to minimize the controversy The second one is Yuan Tuan's Zhushu. According to the deduction of my outline, the wishing tree's wishing technique is not easy to come up with. You must first obtain the Baomu technique before you have the capital to trade. I didn't expect this controversy, and the focus was also very surprising. The protagonist was too anxious. From the perspective of my writing, one is the protagonist's eyebrows. If I say that if the Zifu comes to see it, it is reasonable to find the witchcraft, and in terms of transaction, the original Yuan family has also been traded to the Li family. Second value matching, I did give the profit to Yuan Tuan, but considering that it does not involve the protagonist's fundamental interests, Yuan Tuan is about to die, and the concession will benefit the friendship between the two. It should not be a big deal, and the concession is not much. Similarly, these two plots, plus the plot of foundation building, are connected together and are not easy to change at all. Judging from the number of likes on the comments, Bao Mu's problem is bigger and Yuan Tuan's problem is smaller. If readers have good suggestions for modification, I will modify it immediately. Finally, it's about the issue. This is also the most troublesome thing for me. Because of the author's special status, his reply to the readers will put a lot of pressure on the readers and will be regarded as an insult to him. The key is that if you reply and don't change your opinion, then it's over and the readers will be absolutely disgusted. That's why many old authors don't reply, don't read comments, and don't modify their articles, because from experience, they know that this stuff is useless Readers will vent and read what they should read. If you want to reply, it will be even more annoying to argue with readers, which will make readers angry. But think about it, does not replying or commenting really respect the readers and respect the work? Look at the original work, Ji Yueren. He liked to reply to readers in the early stage, but later he didn't reply at all. He must have learned his lesson. I have also learned a lesson. There are many readers who are actually very kind and like your book. If you discuss it with them and then go too far, they will delete the review and leave. To be honest, there was such a reader a few days ago. It took me three days to recover, and I couldn't help but doubt my choice. And there is really no way to write a book. Internet articles have thousands of words a day and are updated daily. There is no way for a responsible author to be free from controversy and loopholes. It is too energy-consuming to revise.

Sorry, this is the title of the book. You need to cultivate your practice.

In the world view of Xuanjian, where you are in prison, it is useless to read the original work if you have high talent. You need to be able to survive. I originally thought that the tree next door was strong enough to eat dead people, but I didn't expect that your wishing tree is even more outrageous, with an unlimited number of wish-making mechanisms.

The biggest threshold for other fanfics is that they cannot understand it if they have not read the original work. If they describe a large number of original plots and settings, it will be unfriendly to the original fans, the largest audience. However, we Xuanjian are different Xuanjian's original work readers still cannot understand the original work. After all, we are the same as readers who have not read the original work hahahaha

After all, the protagonist was born on the lake and his surname is Li, and he is inseparable from the remnants of the Yue Mansion. The later he gets certified, the less chance he has. If the protagonist is born in Persimmon and gets certified again, even if it cannot change the overall situation of Luoxiading, other adults will not be able to play Mingyang's little games casually, so There is a high probability of cultivating upwards and carrying magic weapons to counterattack and cultivate downwards 🙂 Unless you plug in the certificate directly, or steal the chicken certificate before Persimmon is born, you must be very strong just after you get certified, otherwise you may be beaten and killed by a group of people as soon as you board.

The last few chapters have been a battle between left and right brains. The reason is that the author has been suppressing the realm. In the final analysis, foundation building can't do anything at all. He can only write about psychological activities. Although Zifu is also a prison, Zhenjun will find a prison for you and allow you to make some small moves as long as the general direction remains unchanged. I just want to ask the author, has he really thought about the protagonist's position after Zifu and the adults' arrangements for the protagonist? Compare the book next door to Muchi and Xiu Binghuo. They both quickly rose to Zifu, and then the adults each had their own arrangements.

The protagonist Jin Dan is not easy to delay. Once he is dragged to the Shizi Zi Mansion or even born, the upper cultivator will not let a person named Li from Hushang have the opportunity to change the overall plan. Even if you are a Zhengmu Sword Immortal, even if you have a high probability of setting off fireworks If you have any signs of changing the Mingyang Bureau, just die. After all, the upper cultivators and the Yin Division in the original work are too shameless... The upper cultivator will reverse the attack and the lower cultivator will not give him any chance.

After re-reading it, I found that it was indeed fed with pills to build the foundation. His talent was mediocre and has been revised However, among the four sons of the first generation, Li Chijing was the most talented. At home, practicing at the same time, Li Tongya was far inferior to Li Chijing. There is also a bit of the original talisman that is very strange. It has nothing to do with the cultivation qualifications, so this needs to be considered separately.

If this novel is summarized in terms of percentages, 60% can be called Xuanjian's reflections, 20% can be called psychological description, and the remaining 20% ​​is to advance the main plot. I'm not sure whether there is 20%.

Why not change the name to Xuanjian: Gou works as a talent in the Demon Sect, eats two traffics, refines chickens and cranes at the same time, and copies the public promax fruit status in vain.

As a person who knows the plot, especially someone like Xuanjian, one should not plan in advance and arrange every step. There should always be an outline. The protagonist always feels it like a normal fairy tale, and then finds a lot of reasons to rationalize his plan. Personally, I have a very bad opinion.

Author, do you like Li Chijing very much? I saw that in the latest chapter, you gave me some advice on how to modify the exercises, brought him to make connections, improved his conduct, and also gave him resources and magic weapons. The key point is that Li Chijing's talent is just average. In the original novel, he relied on elixirs to build his foundation, and he's not very close to you. The Li family has kept secrets from you and is wary of you at all times. If you keep writing like this, it's really going to turn into a nanny novel!

The protagonist has a pleaser personality, and Goldfinger is a schemer to improve himself, but he still feels indebted to others for helping others. The main plot line has always been around helping the Li family, regardless of whether it is good for him or not, he keeps sticking to it and licking it, and he still feels that he is indebted to others.

To put it bluntly, you, the author, are writing as a fan. You don't need to build the general framework. Your task is to insert Li Shengye into the plot in a reasonable way, and then write it happily. Why are you so slow to update, two chapters in one day?

Unable to continue, he is currently down to second place in this track.

After reading it, I felt awkward. The protagonist was guarded and separated from the Li family. The Li family did not give him any use (the plug-in does not require that he must save people. Wouldn't it be better to get along with the situation and let him die when he encounters a life-or-death situation?), But the protagonist talks too much from time to time to affect the future for the so-called saving people (the protagonist is not the Zifu at this time, shouldn't he wait for the Zifu to start trouble). The identity of the key protagonist is that of the Li family with the highest level of cultivation. He is like a guest rather than a leader, which is very strange.

Everything else is the opening of Zifu, or your opening of Fetal Breath is so friendly to me who has never read the original work. I would like to ask, is Ning Wan really at the top of Xuanjian's must-eat list?

I can't even stand the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, let alone this one.

Respect the original work and don't be mentally self-righteous and self-centered. Regardless of the writing style, the work will not be bad.

The comments are really savage. They always say that the protagonist is a nanny helping the Li family. If you don't have a reputation for repaying kindness, see if Ning Xiaoxiao is willing to accept the protagonist. If you don't help the old turtle of the Li family, how can the Li family be willing to give you the witchcraft? Is the sixth-grade witchcraft just cabbage? What was given to the Li family? Aren't they all useless to you? Even if you buy and withdraw the resources, can you buy sixth- and fifth-grade spells? 😅

These are the only four books where the character dialogues don't look awkward. Currently, Jimu is far ahead. The more you go, the more you can read.

In fact, I can probably guess which chapter made readers disgusted. In [Chapter 61: Enjoyable], I originally wanted to write about the Li family gradually letting down their guard against the protagonist, echoing Li Mutian's final words: "As long as one of the Li family's children escapes, they can make a comeback. Don't imitate the Yuan family." When I was writing it, I found that a large paragraph took up too much space, and I suddenly thought that Xuanjian had acquired the function of escaping into Taixu, and what would happen was not up to the Li family anymore. For the sake of omission, I will summarize it with the sentence "Don't be afraid of the Xuanjian being taken away". At present, I have made minor repairs and changed it to the following version.

The protagonist should become a monk, take the final step to reach heaven, and directly make great ambitions everywhere. First, he cashes out his credit report, and then slowly pays it back after becoming a golden elixir.

Some people are curious about how much they can get for the first order. This book should be considered the first among Xuanjian fanfics. Let's take a guess 🙂

The protagonist should practice his own unique golden elixir. In case Ji Yueren is slow in writing, in order to prevent elbow strikes, the protagonist directly uses the wishing tree to create his own golden elixir method. When Shi Xiu first started practicing and upgrading, he realized the golden and earth Dharma by himself. After all, Ji Yueren didn't write about it. He almost wrote about practicing the golden nature and sitting on the throne. Just like Zifu is an immortal base that is lifted up to the rising sun and transformed into supernatural powers. As for Zhengjin, magical power is refined into gold, and the rest is gone. No details. Considering that Shangyuan said, break the golden elixir. I don't know if there is. So, I suggest that you write your own one as soon as you can. Anyway, there are so many ways to conquer the Qi and nourish the nature, such as the Heavenly Fetus Demonic Way, the Witch Way, and the Zifu Golden Pill. Create one of your own, probably if the intention is right and it can be connected with the rest.

Just now when I was replying to other book friends, I suddenly thought that if the protagonist: borrows the virtue certificate of wood, Xunfeng borrows the virtue certificate of gold, Gangfeng borrows the virtue certificate of water, Jifeng borrows the virtue certificate of water, Jifeng borrows the certificate of Shaoyang, Jingfeng borrows the certificate of Shaoyin, Shuofeng creates the five avenues of wind by one person, then he is at least the level of the Three Mysteries Lord, right? 😰.

The vastness of the world, the vastness of all living beings, rebuilding the order of immortals, gods, and humans, cutting down mountains and destroying temples, returning the heaven and earth dug away by the cave, understanding the wonders of the wishing tree, using the power of human wishes to slowly repair the world, and referring to the wishing tree to guide others to achieve happiness, wealth, and longevity, the vastness of the Shinto and Immortal Ways, repairing the longevity of all beings in the world It feels like I must have a mysterious master level after completing this set. Of course this is just my immature guess, for reference only

I've read Chapter 29. Why is it all about commentary and not even 20% of the protagonist's own content?