Empress of the Second Week: There's Something Wrong with This Plot!

I haven't watched it for a few days, and suddenly found out that it was limited to free, which made me feel a little weird. It's almost all booked. Before the wedding to the empress, it was very good, including the group portraits, the description of fireworks, etc. King Qin's part is a bit weird, and it feels rushed and not explained clearly. Although there are some minor flaws in other aspects, it is generally very good. The later content is not very friendly. It can be seen that the author wants to fill in the holes, but it is a bit messy. In short, it is still a very good work. I look forward to the author's next book 🙂🙂

Brothers, are there any real traitors, the kind like Cao Cao, the kind who tried to trick the empress and finally killed him (><)

Wei Xiang

Empress

Li Yunsheng

It should be a female seater, right? I recently read through the daily guide and found that there are many introductions to female porn, some poisonous female porn, and character-based female porn. The comments in the comment area that support the author also have a childish flavor? The handling of the plot, the shaping of the characters, and the interaction between the characters also have the flavor of a female author. It's not that I have any objections to the female author (I still remember a female author's fairy tale called "Call Me Little Devil" that I read before), or that I have an objection to the female author. How can I put it? Style question? I just always feel that there is a hint of Xiaojiabiyu between the lines. I haven't read this book. Can anyone tell me what this book is like? I looked through today's daily guide, and just now I came across a book in which the protagonist was greasy, indecisive, and the plot was washed out, so I couldn't read it at all. It was all poisonous to me.

Wei Xiang

Society, I am Brother Liu

Is this bodyguard so useless that there is no obstacle before the assassin reaches the edge of the bed? You guys use solar energy, right? If the male protagonist didn't draw that piece of armor, would his heart and lungs be torn out immediately? Fast forward to the time when the assassin was posthumously named the number one female swordsman in the empire. (Open your mind and open your mind. Jpg)

The emotional line is very confusing, but the pure love god of war can't see it.

OK, now that I have finished reading, let's talk about my feelings as usual The language is very humorous and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very interesting. But I want to say a few points 1: I feel that the power gap between the male and female protagonists is a bit too big. The female protagonist is completely ignored and has no rights at all. She is almost like the carpenter emperor of the Qing Dynasty. I wonder if this male protagonist is not Wei Zhongxian? Why is there such a huge power gap? As long as an emperor doesn't behave badly, it's actually easy to win the followers of the royalists. 2: I feel like I have a glassy heart. There are maids and guards in the palace, so I kept reading. I feel a little bit sad. I feel like I am just like the guards, just to show the authority of the empress. Then this thing is really close to feudalism. I really can't bear it (눈_눈). I hope the ending is like "The Dictator" without killing anyone. 3. The heroine's character is too weak. No, I can't explain it. I feel like there is a double standard. When facing the male protagonist, she is soft. When facing the servants, I punch hard and tear her into pieces. There is no need to be serious. If you want to show the imperial power, you can implement some rice grains that will only be available in the next few years, or strengthen the army. Then the strength will naturally increase. Now I finally think of it, just like a princess, I have a vase, yes, it is a vase. 4. I think they all said that there is a problem with the supporting characters, but I actually didn't see it (maybe it's because I haven't been reading for a long time (´▽｀)ノ♪). I feel that I just don't like the male protagonist a little bit. He should be more blunt with the female supporting role, because after all, he belongs to a big family and should be indifferent to the dead. I think that this reincarnation will treat her well, and I will naturally fall in love with her. . . . Sorry, I misunderstood, she is not the heroine hehe 5. Reveal your real name on the Internet: Cui, can the author give Cui a sense of superiority? After all, we also know that your imaginary world should be the Tang Dynasty, ah, one is named Cui Yan and the other is named Cui. I finally finished vomiting and felt relieved all over. Thank you to the author for giving me the opportunity to evaluate the work.

Crazy for the boss😍 Crazy for the boss😍 Going against the big wall for the boss😆😆😆

I don't know why I created the characters of Su Wanwan and his brother? What do you want to express? I can't express anything, it's a failure among failures.

If you haven't read it yet, here's a suggestion to Conquer the Empress. The empress must be portrayed harshly and have weaknesses. Then the protagonist pua her. The defeated dog empress was reduced to a plaything, and she tried to kill her, but the devil was as tall as the devil. However, he was successfully counterattacked by the empress, and the male protagonist was forced to flee. The empress pursued him with hatred. The pursuit was successful, and the male protagonist was reduced to a plaything. The empress was proud but fell into a trap. The attack on the heart was only the last step, and the attack on the heart was completed. The Empress is pregnant with the baby, the finale

No, I really don't understand if there is any way to use this routine now? ? ?

I came back to take a look for a limited time, but it turned out that the law of heaven came out and I changed the picture. It was really a good hand of cards.

After watching half of it, I think Wei Xiang's problem can be solved by adding a supporting character, and adding a male dead soldier who will be trained with Wei Xiang. Because he is undercover now, he is abroad. When he wants to open a new map, he can still use it.

If there are any shortcomings in the book, I hope you guys will give me some advice.

The plot is not very good. It is the protagonist's responsibility to bind the empress. How could he dare to put his life in the hands of the empress before he controls the empress? The Empress is really good at killing After the protagonist was assassinated by a second-grade assassin from the Wei Kingdom, it was outrageous for Wei Xiang, the only second-grade warrior beside the protagonist, to run around with a camera.       ，，，，       ，？

Ordinary people travel through time and their personalities and temperaments change. Are you still you? There's no point in traveling like this anymore, and there's no point in binding a golden finger either.

Finished Spreading Flowers🤭

Where can I read the two blocked chapters?

Bad reviews for having too few heroines Bad reviews for not having a harem

I haven't watched it yet, is there a cow😂👉🤡

Book friends, please interact more 🙂

Why does it feel so similar to the book about the heroine of Chicken Cross?

Except for something a little off at the beginning, it gets better and better as I write it, and it gets even better after the showdown with the empress.

Hongdu did defend for dozens of days, but the city was small and the gates were few.

After reading the free chapters and my thoughts after reading this book, emm, let's wait for the next harem book. Will I add a cool female general next time?

When will I write the next one? It seems that floods are about to begin in Tianjin. The last time was in 1984, and I am not here anymore.