On the Peninsula, Like a Shadow

I want both

Yoo Jimin has collapsed, the author should change the heroine

The whole text exudes the innocent moaning of a young and illiterate author. Do you dare to think that the male protagonist who is crazy and abusive will not even be able to eat on the table in a rich family? Baicai was trapped with a rope all over her body in front of the chaebol. What kind of person would write such a disgusting and sadistic plot! I heard that there was a plot in the middle where someone forced her to have plastic surgery and her face was changed, and then the author also teased the readers. In the beginning, the character Ka Yoo Jimin was the female protagonist, and the others were female protagonists. They wanted to write a single female protagonist. Later, Yoo Jimin's accident was cut into multiple female protagonists at the speed of light. The plot changed over and over again, and it was always shocking. It's a disgusting novel. I just want to read a sweet and non-abusive plot. I just want to see the male protagonist doting and protecting the female protagonists, not watching the female protagonist being abused by the chaebol.

I've read Chapter 290, and I feel very tired. The protagonist has been busy, one thing after another, and there is no warm daily life. At most, I can only use dozens of words to write about being pinched by Bae Zhuhyun. The last time I read such a tiring novel was Ergen's Immortal Ni. To be honest, the writing and conception are good, but the readers are too tired. I don't know how long I can keep reading.

After the protagonist fakes his death and undergoes plastic surgery, there is absolutely nothing interesting about it. It would be better to write that the protagonist goes to jail or runs away. The male protagonist and the various female protagonists are completely indifferent to each other now, and they are mindlessly taking advantage of each other. Author, you can read the book (I Want to Become Popular) and learn from it. Several Korean entertainment books written by this author are all about the same harem as you. The interactions between the heroine and the hero are all very well drawn. The heroine gets angry when she should be angry, and she doesn't make pointless remarks.

Damn, I still can't accept the face-swapping trend. It's also a gangster. Some people write it as Tang Jiu, and some people write it as Reservoir Dogs.

What are the first 20 chapters about? Torturing the master for the sake of torturing the master. The plot and character logic are very stiff, and the writing style is also very awkward.

Jimin is gone, Sulli Ho Ra is gone, Taeyeon Soonkyu is gone, and Seungwan is gone. I don't like these anymore. They feel a bit boring.

The suffering person is a peach in the world, the mermaid's waist has been tightened, and the little girl who was once suffering has also been accepted. Please make it easier and accept the South Korean sadistic god who is mentally suffering

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