Grinding Proficiency from Nine to Five in Another World

When others take a break, the protagonist trains, when others sleep, the protagonist reads, when others take weekends off, the protagonist works overtime. Is this a nine-to-five job?

The story is well written and the ideas are clear, but the writing style needs to be improved. When writing a novel, it is best to use standard "Mandarin" for writing, and do not use daily "oral communication" to describe it. This will make the reader confused and have no idea what you want to express.

I'm a little speechless. This realm breakthrough is not a doubling, but something like one plus one. In the middle stage of the Suspicious Pill, all attributes are only 18 points, which is 18 times the data of ordinary people. The average strength of ordinary people is 100 kilograms, 18 times 1800 kilograms. With this realm setting, even tigers can't beat it. The barbarian soldiers with 3 points of body tempering at the beginning can actually kill tigers. Tigers The full force can explode several tons of attack power, and people can use Ningdan at the beginning. I am really speechless. This is still at the level of an ordinary tiger. There are monsters in the book. The monsters are tempered on this basis and can directly kill human Ningdan. Originally, human beings are far weaker than beasts in physique. However, with this level of data, it is a miracle that humans in this world have not been destroyed!

Dear readers, if you encounter typos, just point them out in the comments. I've changed it several times, and I really can't see some of it.

I have read more than 50 chapters, and I feel very tired. The plot is too tight, the senses are not comfortable, and the rhythm is too strange. I suggest reading a new book on Eunuch. The author's writing style is still good.

Author, there is one more scholar in your panel. Please change it. I can't stand it because of my obsessive-compulsive disorder, and it's too uncomfortable to read.

I suggest that the author read through the sentences he wrote to see if they make sense. There are many places that I read for a long time but I still don't understand what they mean. The preface and follow-up are a bit inconsistent. The creativity is good, but the writing style really needs to be improved.

I can tell that the author wanted to write a good story. The plot is harmless and the setting is okay, but the writing and literary skills are still relatively poor, and the writing is very personal (only the author can read it smoothly)

I think this book can be published in Sanjiang. The three golden chapters in Sanjiang are directly poisonous.

In fact, there was a big problem with the initial behavior. Being unconventional can't be beneficial in that kind of chaotic situation, and it can't be so calm. I've been hanging around for so long. You will only be squeezed out and tormented by the group.