Grinding Proficiency from Nine to Five in Another World

While others rest, the protagonist trains; while others sleep, the protagonist reads; while others have weekends off, the protagonist works overtime. Is this what a 9-to-5 job is?

The story is well-written and the plot is clear, but the writing style needs improvement. When writing novels, it's best to use standard Mandarin, rather than everyday conversational language. Using colloquialisms will leave readers confused and wondering what you're trying to say.

It's a bit speechless. This breakthrough isn't a doubling of strength, but more like a one-plus-one. Even at the mid-stage of the Doubtful Core realm, all attributes only increase by 18 points, which is 18 times the data of an ordinary person. The average strength of an ordinary person is 100 jin, so 18 times is 1800 jin. With this realm setting, you can't even beat a tiger.

Dear readers, if you find any typos, just point them out in the comments. I've corrected them several times already; some I honestly couldn't spot myself.

I've read over 50 chapters, and it was exhausting. The plot was too tense, making it uncomfortable to read, and the pacing was strange. I suggest abandoning it and starting a new book. The author's writing style is still quite good.

Author, you've added an extra character to the "Scholar" field in your panel. Please correct it; it's unbearable for my OCD, and it looks really uncomfortable.

I suggest the author read their own writing aloud to check for fluency. There were many parts I read for a long time but still couldn't understand; some parts were disjointed and incoherent. The concept was good, but the writing style really needs improvement.

I can tell the author wanted to write a good story. The plot is fine, and the setting is acceptable, but the writing and literary skills are rather weak, and the style is very personal (only the author finds it smooth to read).

I think this book could be published on the Sanjiang Literature City website; some of the top three chapters there are absolutely mind-blowing.

Actually, the initial behavior was highly problematic. Being unconventional in such a chaotic environment wouldn't bring any benefits, nor would it lead to such tranquility. Simply drifting along aimlessly for so long only resulted in being ostracized and tormented by the group.