One Piece: Girl Group Unparalleled

I'm really looking forward to (๑˙ー˙๑) some suggestions I can't help but I really like the subject matter, but the author must be a newcomer, right? The rhythm of the work needs to be optimized a little. Efforts are rewarded. The plot can be autonomous in terms of rationality and logic. It is suggested that the plot of the practice process can be added. Practice is also a process of running in among the members. The character's temperament and story can be shown to everyone in the same way as a variety show. The key points that make a variety show popular are also applicable to the plot. Readers will just accept this. Especially sailing itself is a very good road plot. Formal performances should be more cautious, just like boss battles. The plot should be designed before and after, with causes and consequences. Are there any setbacks in the middle? The setbacks are due to the plot and need to be perfectly expressed. This is the result of cultivating the character. It should be able to show that the character truly falls in love with the performance because of the protagonist, or because of other reasons, such as loving the protagonist, and performs with all his strength. Sweat and tears have always been an important selling point of girl groups. Without this point, there is a lack of soul. It must not be just a profile, it must be a positive description. Effort is something that cannot be ambiguous in a good work. The process and harvest of hard work must be sincere, and readers will buy it so much that they may even be moved to tears! For these goals, the bells and whistles can be reduced. If there are, express them well, but don't add too much to prevent them from overshadowing the show. I think the subject of girl groups is great, and I'm really looking forward to it. I hope to see touching works.

Come on! The next Hyper Dimension Pirates book is yours!

This author's writing is great! The characters are good, the plot is good, and the main settings are also very innovative. I have never seen such an interesting pirate novel. Author, you have to work hard to update it. I will definitely subscribe and support it when you put it on the shelves! 😃😃😃 Well, I can't edit anymore, I'm actually the author's account 😅😅😅

Collect corpses, collect rags, recycle scraps and throw them into the cremator.

It can be from Pirates or other anime. My initial thought was that except for Magima, the other members are all from Pirates. Because there are too many girls from other worlds, I am afraid that I can't grasp them, and Magima will be diluted. However, if I think about it carefully, there are not many girls in One Piece who can join the girl group. If you can add 1 or 2 anime girls from other dimensions, it will be fine.