Dragonborn at Hogwarts

The setting is very thoughtful and the writing is not bad, but the plot arrangement is extremely unreasonable and forced to reduce intelligence in order to advance the plot (for example, the mother inexplicably left the protagonist alone to go shopping while she went to get a beauty treatment, even though she had been assassinated before; for example, the protagonist who knew nothing suddenly ignored the parents and decided to take several other furheads to Knockturn Alley, please be reborn)

How to clear the level when the protagonist is Harley? Looking for this teaching: Harry has been wandering around for half his life and has never met a famous teacher. If he never abandons this teaching, he is willing to be his adoptive father! Then just wait until he kills everyone

Hermione and Draconis fight on the train when the protagonist enters school. The scene where Scabbers removes Dracolis's clothes is quite disturbing. It would be fine if Scabbers were a real mouse, but he is an old and ugly old man. After all, Draco became a girl after the author's magic change. Is it really okay, author, to arrange the plot this way?

After looking at your pictures, they are really not as good as mine

Delaica Malfoy

It's so painful to read these twenty chapters. The author doesn't know how to create the protagonist. The previous page said that the protagonist is mature, and the next page starts to be stupid After being stupid, he starts to praise the protagonist's maturity. Does the protagonist's advantages only exist in the narration? And after so many chapters, write more about the Dragonborn. Let's try some old stuff to make it exciting! It's so painful to watch, Dragonborn my Dragonborn, magic my magic

It is recommended not to set it as a time traveler... Your character design is completely separated from the plot. It is better to change it to aboriginal... Even your setting of aboriginal is unreasonable, such as the confusion spell. You really like to write plots by insulting the protagonist's intelligence...

This is the picture of Harley and Malfoy that Midnight Animals left in the comment area outside

I don't see the psychological quality that a time traveler should have. You might as well write that the protagonist is a local, and you have decided to write a cheat using a scroll, so don't make the protagonist know nothing. The first ten chapters are very frustrating, and I don't know how the rest of the writing is, so I won't evaluate it. I will only evaluate the first ten chapters. I can guarantee that very few people can survive the first ten chapters. . . . I still endured the frustration and continued reading. I couldn't bear it anymore and only came to comment.

The main character is so rubbish. He is said to be a dragon. His body is so weak. He can roar like a dragon. He has no other special abilities. His relationship with the female character is really fucking speechless. He is like a dead eunuch. Either accept them all or accept one. Otherwise, don't write any gender-swapped characters.

What about the Dragonborn stuff? ? ? ? I just let Dragon Roar go three times, right?

It's really weird. She clearly knows that someone is trying to harm the protagonist, but the protagonist's mother actually leaves the protagonist to go for a beauty treatment, and arranges for someone to follow her. It's just written by force. It's a bit useless.

Abba Abba, forcibly combines the world view of The Elder Scrolls with Harry Potter. . . This is a big problem. The Elder Scrolls is a very high-magic world that defies heaven. Although it cannot be reflected in the game, in the later stages, the Genbao and Alduin are world-destroying existences that can sink the continent with one blow. Not only the root treasure, but also some powerful warriors can cut apart a continent with one sword. Do you think anyone in the world of Harry Potter can resist?

It starts with a loser, and then there is some mysterious pursuit, 😅

Chapter 29: Toxic, if you haven't seen it, run away!

Lyanna Forrester

Does this protagonist have a brain? Did you use it when you went to Knockturn Alley?

There is basically no change in the plot, the protagonist takes Ron's place, and Hermione takes Harry's place. Pulp

By the way, isn't the protagonist not a fan of Kazakhstan by design? Why does it feel like the protagonist doesn't know this or that? It doesn't feel like a Harry Potter fan at all. You might as well set it as someone who has only heard of it, like the part about checking the driver's license. What's so surprising? Is it surprising to people who know Harry Potter?

Just one chapter is enough for anyone to read. If the foreigners next door see it, they think we look down on it. Five more chapters.

Harry Potter😁

Why did the ending end like this? I still wanted to see Harley's first love and interaction with the protagonist. This is it.

There is Dragonborn in the title of the book, but I have read more than 140 chapters. There are really very few real Dragonborn parts, and there are really many typos in the back. If it were a free chapter, I would definitely not say anything, but it is unreasonable for you to pay for a chapter. I didn't type these two words, so I left the English word "ij" there. To be honest, I am not good at it. I kinda thought I was reading a pirated version. The author felt that he wanted to write about effeminate Potter and Malfoy, with more emotional stuff. I didn't care about this. After all, I also wanted to read some emotional stuff recently, but you have to write some Dragonborn stuff. I've read more than 140 chapters and I haven't seen the protagonist let go of the dragon roar a few times. . .

The structure of the novel is okay, but the heroine must not be Harry, otherwise it will make you sick to your stomach. There is a reason why it cannot be popular. Adaptation is not random editing. I remember there was an author who wrote an Eastern version of the wizarding novels corresponding to Harry Potter.

Harry Potter

There are so many typos. Didn't the author look back when he was writing? It feels like typing by voice

I have a question, where did the dragon soul come from when the protagonist roared out for the first time? You must know that dragon roar does not have a dragon soul as a skill point, and you cannot roar without having this ability. Jianyu Dragonborn is the incarnation of Akatosh's fragment. As a fragment of the god of time, traveling through time and space is as common as eating and drinking. Is it certain that when the protagonist roared to death that rhinoceros, it was the dragon soul provided by the future protagonist as energy? This involves time paradoxes, something Barry Allen is very familiar with.

This female character is good and that female character is also good. It's hard to tell who is better. It's hard to beg the author to write a big letter. The female characters live a happy life with the male protagonist. Book friends who have the same hobbies as me like me and those who don't have the same hobbies as me just pretend they didn't see it. Don't curse. Last time someone scolded me and I was banned for a year.

I want to read Dragonborn's book in The Elder Scrolls

Arthur