I Open a Fishing Farm in the Unspeakable Sea

The writing is too messy. I feel like I don't have an outline and I write exactly where I want to go. Often I start to dig another hole just halfway through digging one hole. In the end, the big hole is the same as the old hole, and the old hole is the small hole. There are still holes in the hole... And it doesn't really help the plot. A typical example is at the beginning, when several forces in the fishing ground joined the professor of the University of Michigan before they could figure it out. The people at the University of Michigan were not familiar with it and then went to the Ratman Kingdom. The whole meaning is unclear. This section can completely follow the main plot to clarify the fishing ground, and gradually penetrate the weirdness and disappearance, and then introduce the University of Michigan to reveal the mystery when the protagonist is in danger for the first time. Finally, both parties reasonably explore the cave and enter the rat village to obtain key information. Isn't it better than the current mess? In addition, it can be seen directly from the beginning that the author has a particularly bad habit that he learned from someone, which is to rely on the real-life national conflicts or the hatred of the rich and the intellectual to map it into the novel to increase the sense of pleasure and please the readers. It would be fine if the home game is in China. The problem is that the home game of this book is in a foreign country. If you continue to play the game of praising and trampling... You can only say that something will happen sooner or later. Although I have been scolded a lot, to be honest, this book shows that the author's writing skills are pretty good, and the atmosphere and some plot designs are also pretty good. If you don't ruin yourself, this book can still be written well.