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Damn it, you're a bastard, let me spend money to buy tap water. Goodbye

The previous writing was quite good, but in the end, in Chapter 6, I was given poison directly and almost didn't send me away 🙂

The recent plot is really baffling. The author has watched too many domestic fairy tale romance dramas and always engages in some bloody plots. Obviously, as long as he explains his situation a little bit, he can put the heroines at ease. He will make them worry about life and death, waste manpower and material resources for him, and even do some dangerous actions. He must be mentally ill.

I originally thought it was a novel about incense becoming a god, but when I saw it, it was another novel about trying to become a god in the underworld, so it was just a different story. . Nothing new.

Lightning protection! After seeing Chapter 6, I subscribed specifically to complain. It's not impossible to put a dog leash on the protagonist at the beginning, but can the logical loopholes be filled? Will the merit points be deducted for subsequent deaths due to the protagonist's decisions? The opponent only needs to force innocent ordinary people to kill the protagonist, and the protagonist will be intimidated. I am speechless.

I thought it was okay, but after reading a few chapters, the poison was amplified. Others wanted to kill the pig's feet, but the pig's feet were explained to others that they should be treated as others, and they were also cleansed by others. Do you think that in ancient times, rich people were the names of people, and ordinary people were just dogs, who could be bullied at will, not human beings, dogszz

Is it another start where you're going to die, but you can't die? An article like this is quite interesting in the early stages, but I really can't stick to it in the later stages.

To be honest, I would rather read about becoming a god after death, but I guess this book is about the protagonist dying and living again, living and dying again, half-dead, wanting to die, and just hanging on like this. The book is a good book, but it's not my cup of tea.

The first point is about following the trend. If some readers hadn't pointed it out, I wouldn't have even realized I was following the trend. But for the book "Death as Home", I had only glanced at it when it was new, but had not read it carefully. Before I wrote it, I even forgot that I had this precious book in front of me. (The idea for the novel actually came from an American comic novel a long time ago. I can't remember the name. I just remember that after the male protagonist dies, he can return to the earth, and then the protagonist tries his best to die...) I don't dare to compete with the masters, but I guarantee that the plot will definitely be different! Old readers all know that I have been plagiarized, and I would never commit plagiarism under any circumstances! The second point is about whether it is an old-fashioned plot, where the protagonist wants to die but cannot die no matter what. The focus of this book is actually not that the protagonist wants to die. You can tell from the introduction that this book will actually use a lot of pen and ink to describe the heroine. I want to try to write a few lovable female protagonists, and the protagonists will not die a few times, all to promote the plot. The third point is that some readers would like to see the plot of becoming a god after death. In fact, the protagonist does not need to wait for death to become a god. In my outline, the protagonist is similar to Wei Zheng in Journey to the West and Bao Zheng in the novel. He sits in the court during the day and becomes a god at night. I could write about this plot in the next few days, so I might as well just tell everyone. The fourth point is, why waste time writing so much? Isn't it good to use more braille? Because I feel that this book has performed very well, and the reviews from readers who have read it are also good, but the increase in collections is not as good as the same period. Thinking about my introduction, it is indeed a bit similar to other people's great masters. It is really not very interesting to read due to preconceptions, so I will explain it here.

Not to mention the plot, as I continue to watch, I feel that the god's setting is high-end, but in fact it is quite useless. He has been promoted to a third-level high-level priest and cannot solve the physical problems of a mortal. His expressiveness in many abilities is also quite poor.

First of all, the title and introduction, what you wrote makes people think that this is about accumulating merit and becoming a god, and then becoming a god But when you get to the specific content, the merits and evil deeds actually need to be added and subtracted, only the remaining ones are useful, which makes people very uncomfortable. It's cool, and sometimes the merits are more than the sins, and sometimes they are less than the sins, up and down The protagonist is dead or not, always saved for various reasons. It takes so much time to really want to die, and then it becomes what the author said. You become a god at night or something, then you just say it directly in the introduction or at the beginning of the novel, it will make people feel like you are trying to sell someone else's head The protagonist has always emphasized that he does not rely on golden fingers and must follow his own heart. Something like that, you have been using it very well. Without it, you would have died a long time ago. Merits and sins add up and subtract, and merits can easily become negative (that is, less than sins), so why accumulate merits? Just commit as much evil as possible and become the greatest official in the underworld.

When women cause conflict, it used to be okay to watch, but now I can't stand it for some reason.

How long does it take for the protagonist to die? , Isn't it like other novels that sell dog meat with sheep's heads?

I thought it was an upgrade story about ghosts and gods, but I didn't expect it was about the Liaozhai Dynasty assisting in the struggle for hegemony. I felt lonely after reading it.

It's boring. How come you, a person who wants to be a god, follow others to conquer the world every day?

The most annoying thing is the joint merit. One line of merit? It also depends on which monks did it and which ones the merits will be given to. Not just one lineage, just this lineage has merits and virtues, which can offset death. The murderer must die, so the monk must die, and those who deserve punishment must be punished, not offset by joint and several relationships Otherwise, it is no different from corruption. There is an umbrella to get merit from above, and it is offset by being a bad guy below. It is better to destroy this world

The author asks, is the protagonist a human being or a heavenly being? Why is saving people a meritorious deed? As far as the world is concerned, there is no difference between human beings and all things in the world, right?

Let me make it clear that this is not an argument, but an expression of deep love and responsibility. Although the author uses an imaginary background, properly conforming to ancient historical facts before using a similar ancient Chinese background is definitely beneficial to increasing the reader's sense of immersion and writing style. The reader will also feel that you are writing with care. I just saw The Salt Merchant, and as a high school student taking history, I couldn't stand it anymore. Have you seen Dream of Red Mansions? Lin Daiyu can bring out hundreds of thousands of taels of silver even if her family is poor. During the Wanli period, Yangzhou salt merchants' income was more than 7 million taels. During the Qianlong period, the total "profit" of Yangzhou salt merchants exceeded 15 million taels, and they could pay 7 million taels in light tax per year. "The Unofficial History of the Qing Dynasty" records: "During the Qianlong and Jiaqing Dynasties, Yangzhou salt merchants were the most luxurious in the world, and those with less than one million were called small merchants." Chapter 7 of the original text: For such a large Yong family, tens of thousands of taels can only be called a beggar. Secondly, the author has forgotten a more important issue, which makes me suspect that you had no information about Yangzhou Salt Industry before writing the book. I am writing about the salt industry where the main character is the Yong family, a salt farm with tens of thousands of salt workers. But Yangzhou does not produce salt at all. Yangzhou salt merchants made their fortune by transporting salt. It was only possible to have hundreds of ships and carriages, and a caravan of tens of thousands of people, but it was impossible to produce salt by oneself. If the author wants to write according to the normal mountain topography, Yangzhou does not have the conditions to support tens of thousands of people to produce salt (the Yangtze River is a freshwater river!, And there are not as many salt wells as Zigong there) The above are some of my opinions. I am very interested in the author's subject matter, but I hope the author can be more serious about the details. This will not only make the readers comfortable, but also help the author himself to improve his level and income. Thanks

I thought it was about cultivating immortals and slaying demons, but I didn't expect that it was about fighting in palace battles. Withdraw, withdraw 😅

After writing more than 20 chapters, the protagonist is worried about this and that. He has a body that is so sick that he could collapse in the wind. He is even disgusted by the fourth-grade Yins. He really doesn't find anything interesting about it. He has lost such a good golden finger in vain. It is useless in the right place. His body cannot be cured. He cannot die. He cannot live happily and suffer. It is too useless. I should abandon it...

The Golden Chapter Three is very good, but I was a little disappointed after reading it with high expectations. I originally thought it was a Shinto business stream, but I didn't expect it to be the same old one. It's a pity. If I had just died and succeeded the mountain god, and started writing slowly from the little god, this book would have become a big hit. It would be a pity.