I Became the Big Boss in the Players’ Eyes

Brothers, give me more chapters to write, otherwise I won't be able to copy your creative ideas...

The main character's level is too low, it's not very interesting. You want the protagonist to be invincible, but you also want to slow down the pace. I recommend you increase the total level so that you don't have to suppress the protagonist so much. In an entire other world, you can't expect the protagonist to be only level seven or eight, right?

I wonder if the author thought the name "Ghost Eye" was funny? If it were just a nickname used in private, that would be one thing, but this is its official name? Such taste is hard to understand. A strong sense of disharmony, full of incongruity.

I read two chapters. The subject matter is good, but the writing is so-so. The author especially loves to use jokes that aren't funny to show off their humor, which I can't accept. I'm leaving. It's clear the author intended to write a comedic, nonsensical work, but being funny for the sake of being funny is pointless. The author is trying hard to be funny, but there's really nothing that makes anyone laugh! Do you really think your writing is humorous, author?

To make this book better, you can start a thread in the chapter comments or the comment section. I will read them all. Please don't use too much cryptic language, as I won't understand what it means...

Too much nonsense

Leaving aside the writing style, I just don't understand why the author insisted on creating such an overpowered character. A game promoted by the UN, played globally, attracting global capital, and ranked over 8000 globally—that requires the elite of the elite, the biggest spenders of all. Don't bring up treasure or anything like that; that's a flimsy excuse.

The writing is a bit weak. Judging from the title of the previous book, I guess it hasn't transitioned from urban to modern fiction yet, and the writing is somewhat lacking. However, it's still acceptable. When will you change the protagonist's name? Mike, Xiao Tian, ​​if you're writing a Western fantasy world, even just changing the name to Xiao Si-ge would be fine. It's too abrupt for Xiao Tian to appear among a group of NPCs with Western names.

Why does the novel's opening and title remind me so much of "I Became the King of Villains in the Game"? I've only read the first few chapters, I'll keep reading and see what happens later.

Currently, the recommendation source on Qidian (a Chinese online learning platform) is based on how many people are following a book. In other words, turning to the last page of the latest chapter of a book is considered completing the follow-up reading! So, please, my lovely readers, take a moment to turn to the last page of the latest chapter every day! Thank you!