My Game Connects to Real Teyvat

The sauce suddenly bubbled up, and it came with chicken ham sausage, spicy cabbage instant noodles, French bread and Wangzi milk. People gathered around to read the great book and give the author a big CALL, ^_^

After reading Chapter 12, I couldn't help but complain! The author doesn't eat every day, he just likes to eat full stops, right? ! 😡😡😡 There is no period in the dialogue between the characters, and almost every paragraph has no period at the end. It makes me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder. I wish I could lock you in a small dark room and write the period for a year in a row. 😡 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . "A period should be added at the end of the conversation." A period should also be added at the end of each paragraph. Author, have you seen it? Do you know my pain? 😆 The end will never end, and the eyes will be broken! 😆 Author-chan, why are you doing this! 😆

I saw the words "Resurrection, my love!" In the introduction and I couldn't stand it anymore. I thought of Douluo inexplicably.

Very novel setting, I have been following it for a long time I just hope to write more about game plots and less about real-life plots.

The writing is very similar to the dialogue of Genshin Impact characters, which perfectly meets the age rating of 12+

Emmm, the subject matter of this second-generation article is indeed novel, but the author has not grasped it well. You have not only transformed the protagonist's thoughts, but also the thoughts of the original Teyvat people such as the emperor. It's not that it can't be done, it can only be said that you can't do it yet, and you can't do it yet. At least in your latest chapter, I don't see that your skills have reached the level that supports your sublimation of the novel.

What are you doing? Are people here to see you write this? You feel like your grades are so good, right?

I feel that the author's Teyvat is still too young. It would take several months to complete the plot of Mondstadt in the plot. It is really awkward for you to save the Wind Demon Dragon in a few days.

It looked okay from the front, quite happy. It would be better if the keyboard and mouse were changed to a VR stealth game, otherwise some operations would be inconsistent with the keyboard and mouse. Also, they kept saying that the emperor was causing trouble when he faked his death, and then he was in trouble for a long time. Also, when a Yuan Miao suddenly appeared, he was very confused. I don't really want to chase him anymore.

The idea is good, but the writing is not very good

Where is the promised happy person? Why aren't you happy enough? If there is such a golden finger, As a fun person, let me tell you about my fun The first big play is called, Parallel World, that is, the protagonist uses his own abilities to imitate others, such as the optimistic Mr. Lu, looking for control over his sister! Rock King Diji! What a simple thunder cannon! A middle-aged boy with abilities from another world, and some other things I won't say much about. The second act is called culture shock. This is very interesting. It's like a super tester seeing a cannon. There are many kinds of culture. Just think about it. You can even make a mobile phone and show some black history →_→ For example If this is not fun enough, ask him in front of the real Sora who is real, and then use words or the ability to talk about another world to make him deny that he is real, and think that he is just a person created by the player. All memories are false, and the meaning of existence is just because I want it to exist, so I won't say more, I won't say more.

When I read the introduction, I fell into deep thought... By the way, are all Genshin Impact fans so curly? There are all kinds of fan fiction out there. Start searching for Genshin Impact, there are a bunch of fans. All kinds of strange things.

Fushe Yaksha said that everyone is defending the two-hundred-mile front line of the Stratayan Abyss, which can tell how big Teyvat is. Two hundred miles away is still within the scope of the Stratayan Abyss map. Also, in the Genshin anime, there are also Qiuqiu people with wings, alien Qiuqiu people. I hope the author can write something of his own and not copy everything from the game.

Kanria disturbed the foundation of the world of Teyvat and came into contact with the abyss, so it was destroyed. Even if they are not civilians, if you want to be resurrected, don't do it now. . .

I have received many comments saying that I am enjoying myself. I just want to say... It is indeed a bit of amusement Some people say that the number of things I do is too little and that it will gradually increase in the future. I am a new writer, and my writing is indeed a bit bad. I will learn more about the writing methods of those excellent works in the future. I wrote a lot of foreshadowing before, but I didn't handle it well, so it was a bit watered down. Thank you everyone for pointing out these problems. From now on, I will cover all the dry stuff. The foreshadowing is revealed implicitly in the dry plot, and I won't write this kind of chapter that consumes everyone's patience and subscription. If there is anything in the work that people don't like, I will try my best not to let them appear again. If there is anything that you like, I will also add it. I hope everyone can point out the author's shortcomings and make the work move in a direction that everyone will like and be satisfied with.

After all, it looks good (left

The author's setting is that the real map is only 60 times larger than the game? Is the author serious?

Friends, a new book is about to set sail. Please give me some recommendation votes and help push it. The author is here to express his gratitude.

I'm going to move you to the group "Karma"

It was fine before Chapter 130, and it looked pretty good. But after Chapter 130, the setting of JOJO started to look a bit wrong. There were a lot of typos, I was confused, and some of the language was not fluent? Anyway, I feel like it won't work well starting from 130, so I just subscribed to the latest chapter (Chapter 188).