My Wife Is a Passerby Villain

After reading Chapter 19, the character Qin Shimao suddenly struck me. I suddenly felt a certain charm in him. After reading so many novels, this character suddenly stood out to me. The following is the original text: "Are we clever?" Qin Shimao laughed to himself: "Our best efforts are just a little clever in your eyes?" "That's right, but we only have these little cleverness... We who can barely even have F-level talents, in your eyes In the coming new world, you can only join a group to keep warm." Qin Shimao said in a reluctant tone: "And I am just a pure ordinary person, but they still choose to trust me... In the end, all the efforts are just a little cleverness in the eyes of others." What a trick!

Seeing the progress of the later stage of Secret Realm, I really can't help it. I have never had such a desire to complain. I hope the author can see: Next, I will talk about the problems I see, the crux of the problem, and the methods of change from several aspects. The narrative flow is long, and there are many foreshadowings, which gives people The objects have many arcs, the descriptions are as detailed and real as possible, the world view is grand, and the later efforts are made. These are the characteristics and even expectations that the author wants to give to this work after reading so many chapters (stack a buff) In this field, there are two excellent works that the author can learn from: "Tianji" "Magic Calculation" and "Infinite Blood Core", although they each have their own shortcomings, the overall quality is quite good. I will compare these two works with this book and give my personal suggestions: I have finished reading "The Divine Calculation" by Brother Can Jian, and the book review has also added essence, Gu Zhenren's Infinite Blood Core In the past few years, I have been chasing them all the way, and I have never given up. Both of these books are excellent stories with exciting plots, many foreshadowings, and explosive moments. It is indeed quite painful when chasing, but it is that kind of heart-itching feeling. As a reader, I hope to see more development and grander narratives. I always hope to read more, but there are too few. But compared to this, the current status of the author is very wrong. I have read the comments section and online reviews. The reason why everyone feels that there is less content now is: they don't want to read it, they don't want to read it, that is, some of the content is not to everyone's taste at all, and some of the settings are not approved by everyone, so they choose to skip reading. In this case, no matter how productive the author is, he cannot meet the demand. , This is a very terrible thing for online works and literary works; it is also a fatal blow to the development of the author himself. The author can easily fall into a vicious cycle of self-doubt and denial to go his own way and waver again; Why? The core reasons are three problems: the author's ambiguous positioning of the book; the writing statement The attitude is not good; the rhythm control is poor, First of all, I emphasize that the author's writing style is not a shortcoming, it is even pretty good: I have read a lot of novice writings, and there are many that are worse than the author. Even the writing style of the Tianji Shensuan above is sometimes very white; Brother Jian's actual writing style is also quite good. The descriptions and classical Chinese in the restricted simulation book that he followed were all typed out by himself, which is quite exciting, but I am very cool in the group (). Back to the question, why is the writing style not a problem here, and it has even become a cool point in the book? What about the highlight? Answer: Because of the positioning! Tianji Shensuan is positioned as a novice, but he has a very excellent and complete world view, and the novice in the article can convey emotions better, trigger a more exciting plot, and make the novice himself an advantage. At this time, readers no longer care about the writing style! They have already been immersed in the unfolding of the story and the impact and shock brought by the rapid expansion of the world view. Writing is no longer an issue. Although writing can be a bonus, in fact everyone's threshold is not as high as imagined. This is the benefit of clear positioning. It can amplify the advantages and reduce the shortcomings, better convey the author's ideas, express them freely, and at the same time gain fans who like this style, and the positive benefits will come easily. The same is true for Yuan Tianzun on the fantasy list. They have a clear positioning and bring considerable benefits to their works: fans and praise. , But it is difficult to define the so-called genre of the author's works. Let me divide the author's works into two tags, love and time travel. This is the first impression this book gave me, but so far, the time travel attribute has become an objective fact and has become a background, and even an obstacle to the development of the story, so I will not list it for the time being; love is a very obvious flag, but it also faces a problem. It also hinders the development of the story and becomes an overly bloated part. This problem and the subsequent rhythm Related, we will talk about it later So so far, behind the scenes is his main attribute, but unfortunately, some of the behind the scenes I have seen so far are not carried out by the protagonist. At this time, in my eyes, the protagonist Shuangshang is often offline, and there are Shi Chaogui is occasionally normal. His intellectual aura and the painting style of the group of people around him are biased. The style is criticized: the heroine is a love brain, the school girl is a free post, and the debuff is 200% that there will be an inexplicable and arrogant girl around him. As a result, everyone will temporarily put down their complaints about the protagonist and focus on attacking this girl. This is the author's understanding of the character. I will not comment. I can only say that this may be what the author deliberately showed me, because I don't know if this is the boss behind the scenes manipulating us to think that these people are stupid and foolish, rather than true temperament. Maybe everyone feels that these characters are not realistic, but first of all, literary works are allowed to be created; secondly, we still don't know where the development will go before the dust settles. This is a very magical and interesting feature brought by the behind-the-scenes, which slaps readers in the face. However, many of the author's subsequent explanations are unnatural, too deliberate, and even off-beat, giving people the impression of hindsight. There is a kind of beauty in seeing readers complain and rush to make up for the settings (laughing) The image evaluation ends here. This is not the main issue I want to talk about. So to sum up, we found that this book has bright spots, but not many. The sugar at the beginning and the expansion of the world view are not timely enough to support the development of subsequent books under the impact of daily life. The middle period is as dull as water, and even makes people angry. It is easy for readers to run away if they are too presumptuous. Everyone reads online articles and reads them if they like it. If it doesn't work, change it. There has been a tacit understanding for a long time. Therefore, the number of comments in the middle is frighteningly low. It has completely become a stand-alone reading. Because people who came in at the beginning ran away, there is no discussion. I quite like reading comments, but I feel lost. Great fun As for the positioning problem, the general point is that there is no point of view, no center, no idea of the main line, and it is foggy Second, the writing state is not good. Note that my writing state here is not just the author's feeling, but the state in which the author is, machine write Book has four big characters. I see that the author still often reads comments and replies to comments, but this does not mean that the author really listens to some questions. It is more superficial. I think it is very necessary for the author to stop, yes, stop. It does not take long, and honestly starts from the first chapter. However, after reading the comments and this chapter, many questions are ready to come out. The status of the reader , survival rate, problems in plot performance, and the perception it gives readers, this is my personal suggestion Listening to advice is very important for new authors before they grow up. Everyone may not have written a book, but they must have read a lot. Many problems are to the point, and the perception will not deceive. Many authors think that it is foreshadowing, and it is intentional. This is where everyone can see it. , I think you just didn't see the back part. It's not that these things haven't been unfolded, but there is a problem. The foreshadowing can make people feel a little doubtful, and even a certain grudge, but it can't skew the perception of the entire book! I can understand very well how a creator cherishes and values ​​his right to create freedom, and I also enjoy the pleasure of immersing myself in writing, writing hard, and writing with great joy. Writing what you like is really the greatest joy in life! The work is the child of the writer, the trumpet of his opinions, and the most vivid and wonderful journey in his life. I believe that there are very few people who would not love their own well-written works - However, the characteristic or limitation of online writing is that it is serialized and you cannot write a book in one go. What is more realistic is that its output is extremely unstable and is affected by various factors: outline, writing status, and reader feedback. New authors do not have their own In front of the style and rhythm, even if you sit at the table for several hours a day, the output is still bleak, but have you ever thought that if this book does not survive that time, it will be eunuch This is often a big problem with the writing state. Readers are not omniscient and cannot empathize with you. I feel this deeply, which is why I want to comment. The reason is that you and I have entered the same blind spot. I have never written online articles. I have written a little offline for my literary friends and friends. I thought it was a wonderfully laid out and thought-provoking article. He told me tactfully with his eyes, what are you writing? I remember very clearly that he said to me, "Who do you want to write for?" "Oh, it turns out it's not for you! Then go and rewrite something that people can understand." I said directly that my heart was broken. The book he wrote was very powerful and many people liked it, but he stopped writing it long ago and became a lazy dog. But his vision is still there, so I have been depressed for a while and haven't written anything. At this point, I understand that the key is who this book is for. Everyone must answer that it is for others to read. You are not a fool. You should read what you have written. But there is a problem. This thing is written from an omniscient perspective, and it will be distorted from an ignorant perspective. The solution is really like what is often said in many book reviews. It's funny, "The author hasn't been very good at writing recently, please send it to me before you save it." This kind of comment makes a lot of noise. The author needs one or two old bookworms to help you check it. You don't need anyone else. Just the brother who has the most water in the book group and is the most available will be enough. One meal and one barbecue. You can bring in good help. Although I am not in this book group, everyone is probably in the same situation Finally, we talked about rhythm. Without further ado, it was just one word: delete. Delete all the content that prevents the development of the story. One is the explanation part, even if it is necessary If you want to explain, you have to introduce it smoothly. The level of detail in explaining some things in the book is almost crazy. Everyone is understanding. Sometimes they can help you figure it out in a sentence. The class representative can often tell the reason for something you don't understand in the comments. Why are there fewer representatives in the following classes? They are running away! The big guys couldn't stand it, they didn't understand the airwaves, they looked like fools, and ran away. The only ones left were the gossips and the scolders. It was miserable. Of course, there were also reasons why the readers ran away because of the character creation, but the pace really suffered. The second one was the proportion of the plot. In fact, after the plot unfolded, everyone was full of joy and ready to watch. Expand, but because the protagonist's perspective is limited, there is not much expansion. This is understandable to us. The protagonist's situation and personality are destined to make him run around in circles. There is no other way. But on the other hand, one trick can be used all over the world. It is not just one trick. Love plot, love plot, what are you doing? This is no longer candy, it is stone. Damn it, the relationship between the two is still the top priority of the story, but it doesn't mean that the writing will still be on them. As soon as the two get together, they become obsessed with each other. The male protagonist is unwilling to let the female protagonist develop and lets her be a vase. Their love brain kills their future. I have thought about how to kill the female protagonist 100 times, but I will stab her later. It will definitely feel good An excellent example is the Beast Knight and Shion in Infinite Blood Core. They are so sweet. In a sense, they are both abandoned by the world. The two share each other's burdens, be each other's wings, think about each other, and stand alone. In the last few chapters, the dragon suit came back, and they were killed in just half a chapter. The profound love between each other is vividly displayed, and all the fans applauded this couple. Putting it in their hearts, rather than putting it in their mouths or in front of their eyes, is more touching and worth it Unknowingly, I wrote so much in the middle of the night. I felt uncomfortable reading the book at first. I wanted to leave directly, but suddenly I I just remembered why I read this book, because the story of Yin Hang and An Tong is so similar to me before. My mentality, actions, language, and even the story of my first love are exactly the same. They are so afraid, so cautious, so caring, and so affectionate. The only difference is that An Tong moved Yin Hang, and Yin Hang fulfilled An Tong, but I didn't move her in the end. I lost her completely, and it was useless no matter how I recovered her. When I saw that story again, those joys and sorrows emerged again, At least at that moment, this book saved me and gave me The ending I never had, I let it go, but I didn't want to let it go, so I stayed, stayed here in this book If the author sees it, I hope to be bolder, leave something behind, and hope to adopt some opinions ——Written on 2023.11.27 Night lxy Dedicated to this book, also to lzr

I found that the author's technique is very strong and the writing style is also good The psychology of men and women in the early stages of love is very well controlled and very delicate But there are some problems. The world view of the whole book has not been fully developed so far. Some of the foreshadowing in the previous article really makes people a little confused The first half of the more than 70 chapters is mostly about setting questions, and the latter part is slowly solving the problems. This is also a disguised way of screening readers I still bear it now. If the readers who are following up have already understood the analysis, they will already feel that the decryption is more exciting. At the same time, the author is very good at breaking chapters. Although it is indeed possible to follow up, the rhythm is a bit slow. From the perspective of a love light novel, the imagination and writing style of this book can be called a "magic book" Readers who were deceived by the title of the book can also see the sweet plot they want. At the same time, combined with the expansion of the world view, they can write the book in a rich place. The traditional elements of love through books combined with new ideas, the author has finally figured it out Then sort out the power system of the book (personal opinion) Inheritance: Under the revival of spiritual energy, there are certain problems in maintaining the original identity or cultural inheritance (guessing it may be too powerful to bear), and finally can only let go Abandon this power But this power can be separated by hiding the name, separating the concept, etc., This is the inheritance of the family At the same time, inheritance has a great relationship with the real name, and the more detailed the concept of inheritance, the greater the power Through recovery, the family can know that there was aura in history, but why does the real name have to be hidden now when the aura is revived? The concept of three yellows and five emperors has disappeared, indicating that previous rulers in history may have done similar actions to hide their real names Aura adaptability and abilities: It is the traditional set, not much changed, including skills and so on It is speculated that aura adaptability is also related to inheritance The protagonist is approached by Lao Qin, saying that because the body is equivalent to 0, and he hates auras, he can install various abilities on his body, so in the future the master It will be no problem if Jiao puts various inheritances on his body This should be the main line in the future. It is estimated that the problem of the real name being hidden will also be solved at the same time. There are still many mysteries Interspersed with love and daily sugaring, it should eventually become an excellent book But update it soon! I can't read it every day!

It is a work that is very interesting once you understand it! Just read the sweets in the early stage. The key to the world view is before and after chapter 70, and then other settings in the early stage. The low-level reference, King Spare My Life, is a little easier to accept. The author has a super accurate grasp of the fear of love in Youth Society, pay attention to it! If you feel that the foreshadowing in the early stages is too long, it is recommended to speed up and skip it. Personally, I think the most important thing is to rely on the love candy to last until chapter 70! It's so sweet! A very real sweetness! (If you don't like the too real love story of a young couple, you can also skip and read the sweets at the end! The author is so good!) (In addition, the main plot has not been fully laid out yet, but it is totally worth it to follow the new book! Just for the sugar content!) ↓This is the sweetened version of me (confirmed)

I have read more than 170 chapters so far. Let me share my opinions. First of all, on the good side, the world view of this book is relatively large. Whether it is the loss of inheritance or the erosion of spiritual energy, it gives people a good sense of expectation. If the author can fully expand it and write it, I think the effect should be good. The male and female protagonists are okay, but they just feel too cool Then, there are a few considerable problems. First, I don't know if it's a problem with the author's writing skills. The male protagonist in this article seems too young. He has already traveled through time once, and he was not too young before the time travel. As a result, the male protagonist is like a 17 or 8-year-old, brainless and immature. The second point is that the male protagonist feels that he is an ordinary person, has no talent, background, and feels inferior. This is no problem, but the male protagonist is tired of being with the female protagonist all day long, and does not think of solutions when encountering problems. His escape mentality is too strong. He does not understand the knowledge system related to aura at all and does not ask about it. Qin still has Yuyu, and he does not want so many available resources around him. The same goes for the heroine. The author described her as very talented, but she hasn't started practicing for so long. How can she do it without working hard even if she is talented? Third, the author's time was too slow. It took a week or two to complete more than a hundred pictures. The content was all crowded together, and the male and female protagonists had no room to develop. This can be said to be a big failure. Fourth, the author had various misunderstandings and coincidences. If the author had controlled it well and it was not embarrassing, I would not say anything. The current situation is that the author forced misunderstandings, which gives people a bad feeling. The misunderstanding about the relationship between the male protagonist and Yuyu can be solved by just asking, but he has to make it like the male protagonist of the Nikgaru harem (PS: The author describes Yuyu not so much as innocent, but as a fool, and it feels like his mind is stuck in He looks like he is five or six years old) and the current teacher is not honest about his identity. First of all, I want to ask, what does the male protagonist want to do when he pretends to be a teacher and hangs out as a student? What a teacher should do is not to learn from other teachers. At this time, the male protagonist feels embarrassed again. What you did yourself is now embarrassing? If the author is not good at writing, don't bury so many foreshadowings. You can't be round and write clearly. Maybe there will be changes in the future. If the author can make changes, the results of this book should be good. I will keep looking forward to it for the time being.

It's a good book but the rhythm is very confusing A book friend upstairs summed it up very well. Readers read online articles just for the fun part. They kept reading for a while, and of course they felt frustrated. The author's writing is actually good. It's not that he doesn't know how to write, but he doesn't understand the rhythm of the online article. One update a day is 4,000 words. I've been reading it for a month and a half and I haven't seen the fun part yet, so I'm very anxious. There is no need to set up various worldviews. Just give out the candy seriously. The worldview is always just an auxiliary. No one will criticize the book if the main content is written well. If the main content is not written well, then no matter how rigorous the setting is, it will be useless. What readers want to watch is not just male fantasy + romance, as long as these two points are written well, it doesn't matter if the world view is vulgar or vulgar. I hope the heroine will have more scenes in the future. We will see the heroine appear every two to three chapters. If we don't give out sweets, I will be anxious to death. Sleeping together is really just sleeping together? This writing method feels a bit like the infinite blood core of Gu Zhenren. They dig holes and fill them in one go. It is more convenient to focus on one explosion. But the world view is so big that I am really afraid that the author will not be able to fill it in. I hope the author can do what he can and write the content of the title of the book well, "My Wife is a Passerby Female Villain"

Now there are more than 1,000 comments. The comments range from the praise, love and recognition when they first saw Sweet Love, to a bunch of foreshadowings that readers could not dig out and the admonitions and opinions when the chaotic world view was thrown at readers, to the frustration of the whole plot of Dogenban and the anger of readers during the medal ceremony, and then to the complaints from entering the secret realm until now. In fact, the readers who are still following this book really love this book. Whether they are complaining or angry, they don't want to see this book become a book that makes people's forehead veins pop out at the first glance Actually, I really want to know what the author's mood and thoughts were when he saw these comments?

The plot is really dragging and the pace is really slow. It's a waste of money. Although each chapter is short and doesn't cost much, use the money to watch something else. Wouldn't it be nice to have a fast pace? Also, I really can't understand the front part, and that's not how the foreshadowing is done. I'm writing a classic, so I can probably understand it if I read it word by word... But overall it's pretty good, just treat it like a light novel, and the romance part is okay.

After watching it for several hours, I finally almost finished it. The plot of the male and female protagonists is good, but I really don't understand the world view. I don't understand what the male protagonist is saving. There are also problems with his strength improvement. At first, it didn't exist at all. Then when the inheritance came out, the strength felt stronger than those who use spiritual energy, and the combat power is not the same. It's just a feeling. I feel that power is needed here, so it appears. The inheritance is incomprehensible. The more powerful the inheritance, the more it requires a certain understanding before it can be used. However, the inheritance of Hua Tuo, the protagonist, is only a blue inheritance here, while the inheritance of the Situ family is purple. For the same reason, as I said before, it is better than the inheritance of the Situ family. Only the higher inheritance of the Situ family can make her better, so they are contradictory. This kind of plot is a bit meaningless, and there are many places that are too deliberate. I simply speculate that judging from the name, it should be a daily novel, but, the author (with limited writing skills) cannot write daily romance novels, so he has to write worldviews. But, really speaking of the world view, theoretically speaking, writing a world view and then highlighting the plot of the male and female protagonists is putting the cart before the horse. Because we need a world view, we have the plot of the male and female protagonists. I really can't explain it, but the book has a good name and is quite attractive, but the plot is really not that good.

As a Qidian user for five or six years, I see the potential of this book. I hope the author can calm down and polish the story, not be influenced by others, and write his own style. Come on, I am optimistic about you.

The book is very good 1. The description is real and delicate, (sweet) 2. The emotional expression is on point, (aunt laughs) 3. The character creation is successful, (people like it) 4. The plot is reasonable and the twists and turns can be grasped 5. It has a certain value for thinking 6. It has imagination and a novel world, (insert: the background is grand and has the feeling of apocalypse prediction) Note: It is not a traditional cool article, there are many foreshadowings, details, etc., Which requires a certain degree of thinking. Disadvantages: The author cannot update 100 chapters a day. Author, cheers for you! ! ! ! ! ! ☆

The chapters before the release are quite good, especially the plot of slowly getting in touch with the heroine in school and then falling in love with each other. However, the writing becomes more and more awkward and fragmented later on, giving people the feeling of being cheated by the Crimson King and the Loser at the same time. The description of the timeline is very poorly grasped, such as the dagger man who makes the protagonist suffer. In my impression, He just inexplicably missed the show in the early stage, and then after a long period of time (at least as far as the reader's senses are concerned), he suddenly jumped out and chased the protagonist while being the Riddler. When it was over, the protagonist was crazily defeated. Coupled with such a heroine and the protagonist's mediocre characters, the entire middle part of the plot had an inexplicably depressing sense of despair. Of course, even if my appreciation ability is limited, I can still see that this is a relatively complete branch line, but the author writes it too sparsely, making this branch line distortedly mixed with many other branches that are not listed, and finally gives a fragmented and poor reading experience that is a bit unbearable. It can be seen that the author is writing very seriously, but the result of wanting everything is bound to be unable to grasp anything, especially for new authors who are not experienced readers.       ，，，，， But the author here has five, six or even more branch lines spread out at the same time, which leads to the narrative level of writing this and that. The timeline of more than a hundred chapters has only passed a few days, and the whole plot is very confusing and jumps, jumping to official forces, to aristocratic families, to foreign forces, and to sects such as Qingyu Pavilion. It can be seen that the author is very eager to expand the worldview, but this is inferior. I wonder if the author has read the famous "Lord of Mysteries". It has a grand and real worldview, but its worldview expansion is several orders of magnitude higher than the author's. For example, in the story of Tingen in "Lord of Mysteries", there are a total of four story lines, namely the Night Watch line (main line), Lanerwus (Aurora Society), Triss (Witch line), and the hidden 008 line. (As for the Secret Order and School of Life, they are more like foreshadowing and do not have a complete story line) Excluding the main line, there are only two branch lines in total, and the hidden line of 008 is only revealed in a separate chapter at the end. And the description of the branch plots is not independent of the main plot. Like Lanreus and Triss, they are both villains and even bosses in the main plot, and they all have direct interactions with the protagonist. In the description of Squid, they are cleverly integrated into the main plot and are not independent from the main plot. The world view also unfolds bit by bit in the interaction between the protagonist and the Night Watch and the confrontation with the Witch Sect and the Aurora Society.

It seems that the hero and heroine's family members are not very impressed, as well as the details of the campus. The world view and various things that the author wants to write are a bit too much and too fast. The description of the combat system has a gloomy flavor, but the daily description has a love-minded style. Both of them are very good, but the connection is a bit disconnected. I feel that in the first few chapters, the male and female protagonists are still suffering from the separation of life and death, but in the next few chapters, they are separated from the battle to describe daily sugaring. The plot is very interesting. I feel that the system and inheritance learning extraction are very attractive, but it is a bit messy and makes people a little confused. But I hope that the place where I can improve the most is the battle. The connection of the daily plot could be smoother. This is the first time I see the concept of inheritance. This method is particularly attractive. If you can control it well, the master will do it well🌸🌸

Let me tell you about your feelings after reading this novel. There is no doubt that this novel is very good to read, but the introduction of the worldview and background is a bit vague, and the author's writing is not very clear. At the same time, the direct alternation between the main line of the story and the emotional line is a bit too stiff, which makes me feel a bit disconnected, as if I was reading a fantasy novel and suddenly turned into a love story (although I also like and hate the emotional line, but the switch is too sudden and a bit too stiff). The author's ideas are good, but sometimes the expression feels very abrupt. Finally, I hope the author will update more, and this kind of sweet love dialogue is too fatal for singles...

I finally understand how to read it. If I can't catch it, I'll get mad if it breaks the chapter. Hoarding it and using candy can reduce the sense of disobedience and relieve my anger. For the story-telling part, I will give 10 more points, and you can guess the full score.

It is inevitable that the update will be interrupted, the relationship between the first protagonist's lover will heat up and the plot development will be derailed. The best case scenario is that after the emotional drama is finished, the book is also finished. The second is, outline.

I have subscribed to the latest version, which sounds pretty good. The emotional line is very sweet and the setting is quite clever. It's quite attractive. There are some flaws, but the characterization of the protagonist and heroine is pretty good, vivid, lively and cute, and it's still very nice to watch. The big problem is that the author's emotional line and the protagonist's training are not clearly prioritized. There is a lot of writing about both clues. There are large chapters with missing settings or foreshadowing (some chapters have too many scenes of supporting characters), which gave me a migraine. I feel that the author's transitions are a bit dry, and sometimes the transitions are a bit uncomfortable and foggy. Moreover, the author may not have adapted to the style of writing and the types of readers that should be targeted at writing online novels. Some readers who want to read romance or enjoyable novels come in and find that they are a little confused about some of the author's plots. And the protagonist's mental and psychological growth rate... Is a little slow. There are more than a hundred pictures, and I have a bond, but sometimes I still don't have the attitude to actively stand up to protect the bond, and I still passively "get beaten". Also, there were too many characters appearing at the beginning, and some of the supporting characters created by the author appeared once, but were thrown away by the author as background, which gave me a feeling of a messy relationship. (Although I don't know if the author will use those supporting characters again). It can be seen that the author tried very hard to create a larger world view, but the world view was too shallow. For example, the inheritance has not been completely lost, and yet another so-called believer appears. (My understanding is that spiritual energy cultivation or awakening is not the same system as inheritance, and the author did not throw out the core of spiritual energy cultivation and inheritance well: such as the strength improvement of inheritance and the improvement methods of spiritual energy cultivation and their differences) Maybe it is because of my poor understanding, some settings are thrown out, and I didn't notice it, but it just feels like a new setting has been added before one setting is lost. Overall, this book is quite attractive, such as the setting of sweet love and cultivation. Well, this is not a professional book review, not even an amateur. If you like it too much and feel that my review is wrong, please don't criticize it, but you can leave a comment to judge, but this is just my personal review. Both radishes and vegetables have their own preferences. If you don't like this book, don't criticize it. Just a scumbag

By chance, I came to Qidian. Com to read a new book. Unexpectedly, I came across this masterpiece. I read the latest chapter overnight. Cheers to the author, the writing is very good. Concept extraction is very interesting, and I am also curious about what the real background of the world is. In addition, the sweet and sleazy relationship between the young couple satisfies the singles' fantasy of love, and they are currently in a very enviable state. The protagonist feels like my favorite character that I have created so far. I really hope that like him, I can quickly sort out the context of things and make correct decisions, and be very firm when taking action.

I discovered another problem with this book Because I suddenly discovered while reading The spiritual energy recovery mentioned in the book actually does not take too long Although there are children of long-standing aristocratic families There are also many masters at the national level But there are still many people who were recruited at the same time as the protagonist The protagonist has no understanding of the world now So at the same time as the protagonist. Or just a few days ago, how did the group of people who came into contact with spiritual practice face the world? Among all the people described by the author, there is no one with the same strength as the protagonist, who is as blind as the protagonist. In the final analysis, it is still a problem with the author's writing power The world view is too big, and I don't know how to describe or unfold it When I can't write it anymore, I keep inserting new characters And the new characters that keep appearing cannot promote the overall plot. The more you write, the more complicated it becomes, and the more you write, the more messy it becomes. The world view cannot be spread, and the protagonist cannot understand it. In other words, the more the reader knows, the less the protagonist knows. The protagonist cannot make use of his own talents The readers become more and more frustrated as they watch. Fewer and fewer people are reading this book now. The author is getting bigger and bigger. Continuous vicious cycle. In the end, there were even fewer people criticizing this book, because everyone was tired. Also because the author's changes cannot be seen. It's not that the book is not good, it's very creative. Otherwise there wouldn't be so many people scolding me. Many people responded with the hatred that iron cannot be transformed into steel. But now it is getting bigger and bigger, the plot is getting more and more complex, the protagonist is getting more and more aggrieved, this is rarely seen in novels more than ten years ago. What's more, now that readers have been raised in their mouths for a long time. There are even many people who directly clicked on the full subscription, but did not read a chapter, and some people quit after watching it. I have criticized this book many times before. Some were deleted, some remained But I hope the author will write better and better.

I said I would save it before, but now I read it and I am a little disappointed The pace is too slow. I saved 30 chapters to see the progress of the main plot, but basically nothing was said. When there are too many foreshadowings, it will appear to be pretentious. Although giving out candy can be considered one of the main businesses, I feel that the author's ambition is more than that, and the advancement of the main line is too slow. As a new author, readers will not give you too many opportunities to lay the groundwork If there is no plot arrangement later, some world views and training systems are best explained again. You can open a single chapter and put it in one place to sort it out. Otherwise, too many foreshadowings may be too dissuasive and will not attract too many people Of course, if the author has his own rhythm arrangement, then just pretend that I didn't say it and grasp it.

Will I still see updates from the author in my lifetime?

Damn, this book is so damn uncomfortable to read. I want to read the rest of it quickly, but I don't want to skip it 😭

At the request of readers, I still set up character cards. But because of the characters' personalities, I made them supporting characters. The two of them are really clumsy people, and they are not popular. Maybe when you read it, you feel that they are awkward, uncomfortable, and strenuous. But this is the feeling I want to write about. The relationship between a sunny and handsome boy and a kind and beautiful girl is just someone else's story to me. And I want to write a story about two supporting characters, two passerby supporting characters who are very stupid and stupid, but they lick each other's wounds together. But limited by my own writing power, I didn't expect that the things presented would be a bit uncomfortable for everyone to watch. I'm very sorry. The current score of 12.26 Is really ridiculously good for a first-time book writer like me. Except for derivative fandoms and airborne bosses, I am the number one in daily income so far. But I feel like I don't deserve this result. I have thought about many stories before, but they are just some stories. This is the first time I have actually written them down. But this book actually made it into the top 50 of the new books list In fact, my goal from the beginning was to win if I could get perfect attendance after signing the contract. As time goes by, more and more people read this book. I began to worry more and more about how to write. Everyone asked more and more questions, and I also found that I have a lot of skills. There are many things that need attention in many online articles, but I didn't think of them at all. My writing power cannot support what I think at all, and it becomes a bit confusing. It takes a lot of effort to read in order to understand. But this is also a learning process for me. I'm sorry that I started telling you this story when I was raw, making it imperfect. However, even so, they are a story that I like very much. So I will stay by this campfire and continue talking for everyone who is willing to listen.

Conceptual arrangement and some guessing and understanding 1. The reason for the revival of spiritual energy is currently unknown. We only know that this is the setting of the original book 2. The male protagonist has a certain vision of the future, but it is very limited. After all, I have only read 100 chapters of the 2000-chapter novel. Chapter, so later the male protagonist only knows that the female protagonist will confront the original protagonist, but the future plot is actually unknown 3. For me, it is just a guess at the moment. The male protagonist once thought: In order to prevent himself from becoming the original protagonist's fun, cut off the protagonist's system We are currently I don't know when the original owner traveled through time So I guess the stupidity of the system may be because both the male protagonist and the original owner have traveled through time, and the originally awesome system (that is, the golden finger) was divided some, so the male protagonist became the so-called "0" 4. An Tong is in There are only more than 300 words in the description of the original text. There are two possibilities. One is because the original work is a foreshadowing, but I prefer the second one - that is, the inheritance of the heroine will be taken away by the original owner and then the family will be exterminated 5. The heroine is not a pure love mind. What might you think of her in the early stage? She doesn't know, it's too naive, but in fact she doesn't know anything. Because of her experience (the same as the male protagonist), in summary - lack of love (not in a derogatory sense), in the article we can find the male protagonist's cautiousness (which can be seen from the male protagonist saying sorry all the time) and the female protagonist's bigness Although the two people are just two people with character flaws licking each other's wounds as the author said, the portrayal of the two people can be said to be very three-dimensional 6. Regarding Qin Shimao, the current sense of mystery is comparable to that of the original protagonist or even worse. He is the first person to discover the male protagonist's special characteristics. He is a person with special characteristics. Before the incident where the male protagonist directly read out the inherited name happened, he discovered that the male protagonist had the nature of "0" and saw the huge value behind it. Box) And in Chapter 59, it was discovered that the male protagonist can directly pronounce the inherited real name (unspeakable). When the male protagonist pronounced China, Qin Shimao was hurt, so Qin Shimao may be a person of the country 7. The function of the things in the box is currently doubtful, I can understand the spiritual stone charms on the first and second layers I suspect that the paper, hosta, and wooden board on the third layer are related to inheritance 4567 I don't know how to make reasonable speculations for the time being 8. Reiki definition: "Reiki is based on special principles. It is officially defined by the Academy of Cultural Affairs under the Academy, and then popularized in the folk. It literally means a kind of spiritual, colorless, odorless and invisible existence, but it is everywhere and non-material. " 9. Regarding the heroine, the biography of the heroine in the original text. The degree of inheritance matching is as high as 625%, and in the Hua Tuo chapter, we found that Situ An existed in history, so we can guess that the heroine may have a special identity (1) The heroine may be the original inheritance itself (2) The heroine can It could be the reincarnation of Situ An (I think the probability is a bit small) The reason is speculated that when the original owner stripped the concept of Situ, the ones who were most affected were not Situ An and Situ Yan (they just lost their last names), but the heroine suffered huge trauma and was close to death 10 . Regarding abilities, it can be found that there are all kinds of abilities given by aura, but no one with the ability to time has survived. Generally, such a situation of collective suicide can only indicate that there will be irreversible changes in the future, so that letter has become an eternal taboo (foreshadowing) 11. Regarding special disgust: the body's constitution and aura are mutually exclusive, and special attacks on the aura contained in the human body are invalid. Example: Bixian's Painting Spirit - the poem uses a long song to be ineffective against the male protagonist 12. About concepts and inheritance (1 ) Refining a certain concept with spiritual energy. If this concept has been precipitated by history, and that history has been transformed together, it will be the inheritor of the inheritance inheritance, which can be used as a template to shape it (special aversion constitution does not exclude inheritance or concepts) (2) Generally speaking, it is to carve and shape some concepts, such as knowledge, common sense, technology, and even household customs, with aura, and gradually transform them into abilities that can be actually used, that is, inheritance. The stronger the concept, the stronger the ability to inherit. At the same time, inheritance is special. It can be inherited or learned, that is, passed on and differentiated. The problem with differentiation is that it will weaken the original power of inheritance, and the inheritance of the Situ family is currently completely differentiated (3) The author has said that inheritance is a very complicated thing compared to the first two. The first two abilities are based on spiritual energy, and inheritance is similar to the command spiritual energy (4) After the spiritual energy is revived, there are certain problems in maintaining the original identity or cultural inheritance. In the end, we can only give up this power, but this power can be separated by hiding the name, separation concept, etc. It is the inheritance of aristocratic families (Dao Xizi's point of view in the comment area) When a concept and its history are completely refined and become inheritance, then for this world, the original concept will become very vague, and then it will be automatically completed But complete refinement is only in theory, because even a pebble on the roadside may trace a geographical change hundreds of millions of years ago The strength of the concept itself, the degree of refinement, the degree of concentration of the concept, and the degree of historical precipitation. All will affect the strength of the inheritance itself, but some powerful inheritances often have different concepts. For example, the true name of the inheritance is one of the concepts The true name of the inheritance can only be pronounced by the family to which it belongs, but the male protagonist is an exception (5) Regarding the differentiation of inheritance, there are currently the following forms ① In Chapter 60, Qin Shimao asked the male protagonist to recall the allusion of Gonggong, which involves the concept of Gonggong. After the concept is refined, the original concept will be blurred and completed by the world. That is to say, in addition to family Family inheritance, currently only the male protagonist and the original owner can achieve a special type of differentiation concept ②The original owner's system ③Family inheritance (6) The concept can be erased, for example, the original owner's system can extract the concept and peel it off (7) After the concept of family is erased, people will not disappear immediately Example 1: Scarface and Burnt Man, because the remaining concepts can survive for a period of time, but there is no past and future, and they have to compete with the power to erase them Example 2: Situ Gai When the mind was stripped away by the original owner, all the descriptions of Situ Nan in the original text changed to "Nan", and Situ Yan changed to "Yan" (8) The concept is not only about abstract things like inheritance. For example, when Situ Nan saved the heroine, he used cultural relics with a sense of inheritance, saying Ming concepts can be attached to physical objects, but it is currently unknown whether there is a concrete concept 13. The special inheritance between the pyramids - Hua Tuo (1) As the only inheritance that responds to the male protagonist and is the optimal solution to save the female protagonist, Hua Tuo has its own special Sex Since the original owner has the setting to strip off the conceptual part when it is higher than 95%, it can belong to himself. Hua Tuo is currently the only one that has dropped from 95% to 2.31% (The remaining four pieces of paper are the grinding method of iron balls) (I don't know if the Situ Family Letter counts) (2) Regarding the agreement, I haven't compiled it completely yet. According to the group friends: Read 23 books Memorize all the books Finish grinding the iron ball Finally, you can choose one of the four options for Cao Cao's brain (3) We can It is found that the character Situ An exists in the history of Hua Tuo, so Hua Tuo may not only come because of the summons of the male protagonist, but may also be related to the female protagonist herself (625%) (4) Unknown part: I don't know whether the choice of the male protagonist's memory is It will affect historical memory and trajectory, but it will most likely have nothing to do with the main plot 14. Regarding the original owner, the current perception is that the system is a bit clumsy, so I guessed in 3 that the male protagonist got part of the original owner's golden fingers Has the ability to peel off concepts , when the degree of stripping reaches more than 95%, it belongs completely to oneself (currently Situ Family Letter and Qingnang Book - Hua Tuo are exceptions) Currently, he is a low-ranking Huang rank, but he is invincible at the same level. It seems that he has his own team (dogleg) 15. About Si The Tu Family In Chapter 83, there is a little ambiguity (I think). In the original text, Situ Yan said the "original" of the Situ Family. We don't know whether she is talking about the Situ Family before An Tong came or the Situ Family after An Tong came (1) If it is An Tong The Situ family before coming shows that the Situ family has weakened the family power due to conceptual differentiation (2) If it is the Situ family after An Tong came, after An Tong recovered in the original text, Andu divided part of the Situ family's inheritance and let Situ Nan I thought of the last name with Situ Yan So I prefer the latter, because there is a reasonable logical closed loop From the contract signed with the Prime Minister's Court, we can know that the Situ family is the top inheritance in Zhongzhou and a top family, but in the original owner's "Situ" The quality of the book "The Family" is only purple, which shows that its value still has certain limitations. Its top level is limited to the scope of Zhongzhou, only at the upper level of the pyramid The Family takes the continuation of the lineage as its first priority 16. About the World Line We can clearly see that the world line has changed. It turns out that the secret plot where An Tong and the original owner met should have happened later, indicating that An Tong should have been alive. However, after the last change, if the male protagonist An Tong had not been stripped of the Situ Family Letter last time Death should be inevitable at that time. I guess there are the following situations (1) Butterfly effect: ①The male protagonist's time travel affected the original protagonist's plot, causing the original protagonist to draw Situ's family letter I think this possibility is the smallest one, because currently Among the characters previously known to be influenced by the male protagonist (An Tong, the two people in the car, Yuyu, the Situ family, Qin Shimao), only Qin Shimao may have an intersection with the original protagonist in the original world line, but it is unlikely because Qin Shimao and the male protagonist are from the same school and not the original protagonist ② Group friends speculate: Maybe An Tong did not succeed in inheriting the Situ family in the original book (2) The system is deliberately targeted: After discussing issues about the system with group friends, we speculate that the system may have some kind of conspiracy, (we will not describe it here, the details will be discussed in The system will be described again later for a unified overview) The system may be intentionally eliminating the impact on the world line. Since An Tong's character has been changed by the male protagonist, it means that the plot of An Tong and the original protagonist's confrontation in the secret realm may go wrong (in the new world During the line, I guessed that the system would arrange for other people to collide with the original owner) But this would overturn all my guesses about the system above 17. About the system (1) Group friends' guesses (original words) The original owner gets the system, and This system is a tool used by some people to train a thug. They selected the original owner. In order to cultivate the strongest thug, they erased all time superpowers. And because they had wiped out all time superpowers, they no longer had much power. They have little power left on the earth, so they cannot obliterate the male protagonist explicitly. They can only obliterate the male protagonist through history. However, if it is to be carried out according to Gaia's model, a way to survive must be left. As for the reason for erasure, because of the appearance of the male protagonist It's Gaia, who was specially brought from other worlds to prevent herself from being weakened and deprived, in order to resist the original owner's plan to stop this person or organization. This makes sense at once. I feel that the original way to gain power is through collection. Negative energy, this will inevitably lead to some very funny operations in our opinion, because we are bringing in the original owner, and at the same time, that organization has achieved the ultimate, very good, so the male protagonist should not have any big setbacks along the way. From our perspective Come and have fun (2) My views are actually different from those of the group members But one thing to declare in advance is: after discussions among the group members, we found that when the male protagonist went through Hua Tuo's agreement, history was deliberately making it difficult to erase the male protagonist General Conclusion: History wants to correct the male protagonist ① The beginning of such speculation is actually An Tong's behavior after the original protagonist stripped Situ's family letter. There are many signs that if the male protagonist did not summon Hua Tuo, An Tong would definitely die But in Chapter 84 of the original work, the male protagonist Expressing worries about whether the heroine will take the path of the secret realm in the future Please think about it carefully. This point shows that in the original work, the heroine was always in a safe state before meeting the heroine. So why is the heroine's experience mode completely different in the original work and now? ②During the discussion, the group friends and I had a disagreement here, but I agree with the possibility of both guesses at the same time, so I will elaborate here in detail My guess: In this regard, we need to understand which of the characters currently connected with the male protagonist are likely to be related to the original protagonist in the original work Youzhi: Teacher, but the Taoist class is not open, and there is no intersection Yuyu: The possibility is unknown, but it is extremely possible It's tiny Situ Family: There is no possibility Qin Shimao: In terms of seriousness, the possibility looks high, but it is actually close to 0, because the male protagonist and Qin Shimao met in school, but the original protagonist has already entered the Taoist class The last one is the female protagonist we have ambiguity with. In my guess, the female protagonist should have nothing to do with the original protagonist, but after discussing with the group friends and actual investigation, I found that it is not impossible that the female protagonist was in the same class with the original protagonist. Yes, so at present it seems that the change of the female protagonist has led to the change of the world line ③ But I think this possibility is not very big I prefer the word "correction" The essence of the history of the original world line is the content of the book "It doesn't matter, I will run away", but due to the appearance of the male protagonist, the female protagonist's experience has been changed, and the "uniqueness" of the future has been broken. "History" is to maintain the "uniqueness" of the future. "So I tried to erase the male protagonist Example: The male protagonist has history and can make things difficult when fulfilling his agreement with Hua Tuo If based on this, according to the existing plot, it is impossible to erase the male protagonist and then follow the original plot Because if so, the system should not take out the "Situ Family Letter", because whether the male protagonist will be erased or not, the Situ family and An Tong must be gone first. What about the subsequent secret realm plot? So I think: the system maintains the "uniqueness" of the future, which is to make the world stably move towards the ending in the book, so it doesn't matter if the content is different, as long as the important plot is similar ④Contradiction This view is consistent with what I mentioned in point 3: "The stupidity of the system may be because both the male protagonist and the original protagonist have traveled through time, and the originally awesome system (that is, Goldfinger) has been separated. Some, so the male protagonist becomes the so-called "0" contradiction, because in 3 the system is more of a tool for the original owner to show off, and in this view, the system has another label: it can be controlled by history, and has undergone great changes subjectively ⑤Doubt I think the history here may not be the history included in the inheritance, but may be more like "world consciousness"

Everything can be explained and explained, but author, have you ever thought that it is very abnormal for a book to require you to explain frequently in chapter reviews? This is already a problem 😅

Thank you to everyone who listens to my story. I also really want to interact with you. But in order to reduce drama, I never include it in the chapters. Please read, collect, recommend, etc. There is no character card, something awkward that everyone will mark at a glance. But these are very important. Without these data, it is really difficult to get exposure. Only with exposure can we recommend 😭 But I will definitely write this book. Although I am a little greedy, I always hope that more readers can see this book. So, I hope that everyone will have a comfortable reading condition and please support me. I believe I can tell this story well. "If it is crazy and harmonious, I will try my best to use other channels to present the original content."

Let me complain about some of the problems I had when reading this novel First of all, the author's character creation is really good. He can establish a character in two or three chapters or a few paragraphs. For example, in the first few chapters, the content of these chapters not only highlights the characters of the male and female protagonists, but also makes their love fall into place naturally. Another example is Qin's sentence "If your life is in danger or you are even short of money, then it must be my problem and I will apologize to you." He directly set it up for others. But I don't know if the author wanted to show off his skills or what. Later, he created too many characters, spent a lot of pen and ink, and gave a lot of supporting characters that in my opinion should not have so much plot at all. It looked very messy. There is also the ABCDEF level. This level was first mentioned by Shi Qin in Chapter 19. I was still a little confused at the time, thinking that the strength was divided into Xuanhuang and Xuanhuang, and the talents were A, B, C and D. Where did this ABCD come from? I later learned that abcd is a division of strength, but I still don't know, how strong is A level? How strong is level B? It's not mentioned earlier in the novel, and the protagonist doesn't ask anyone else. However, this hierarchical division still appears frequently. So when I watched it in the early stages, I was mostly confused. It wasn't until Chapter 188, when the secret chapter was about to begin, that the protagonist got an explanation from his senior sister. In the novel, the author explains why the protagonist does not ask because he is afraid of stepping on thunder. I immediately 🤔🤔🤔 had questions in my mind. Although the protagonist in the novel has low self-esteem and a love brain, I have always felt that the protagonist is still a bit clever. As a result, you told me that I watched more than 100 pictures of grading that I didn't understand and felt extremely uncomfortable, just because the protagonist didn't dare to ask 😅. If that's the case, that's it. But not only does he not fit the character of the protagonist, he doesn't even fit the logic of the novel's worldview. In the eyes of others, the protagonist is a special character, or an ordinary unsuitable character, or at most, he is a newcomer in the eyes of others. The protagonist doesn't know that this is normal, so why wouldn't he dare to ask? And others don't dare to ask, so it's okay to ask An Tong? An Tong didn't ask. You can also ask Qin. The protagonist basically has no secrets in front of Qin, and even the inheritance was given by him. So you didn't even dare to ask him a question? There are also Sima Nan, Yu Yu and so on. There are so many people you could ask. He was stunned to hold it back. The protagonist really doesn't ask. Then doesn't the protagonist join Qingyu Pavilion to learn the knowledge of spiritual energy recovery? Doesn't Qingyu Pavilion teach it? Speaking of Qingyu Pavilion, when the protagonist went there, I thought the world view was finally going to expand. As a result, I still don't know what the protagonist learned in Qingyu Pavilion. Then one of the protagonist's instructors went to Dogen's class for military training. I don't think there is anything wrong with this. What makes me think there is a problem is that when the military training was over, he even forgot about his job as a teacher. It just looks a little uncomfortable. (Mainly because others used the fact that their class had no teachers to ridicule their class, but in the end it was discovered that the blame belonged to the protagonist, which made people angry, and immediately felt like the protagonist was a pig teammate.) Then there is the Yin family. This was established by the two people the protagonist picked up casually when he went to Sima's house to save the heroine. But what I'm confused about is that after the protagonist took these two people in, they never appeared again. I can accept the protagonist giving them two powers, but the two of them are stronger than the protagonist. But I can't accept the two of them saying they are loyal to the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist has no contact with either of them. It wasn't until the protagonist's senior sister came out that I learned that they had established a Yin family, and even their disciples were qualified to be teachers of the Daoyuan class. When the two male protagonists were passing on the inheritance, I thought the male protagonist was finally going to have a disagreement. In the end, there were only two chapters, and it was still the same. There is also the original owner. When the protagonist rescued An Tong, I saw that the author wrote that the original owner did not even look down on the inheritance of Nuwa, Pangu, and Emperor Yan, and he also had some law-level abilities. I thought he was so powerful, which gave me the feeling that it was difficult for the protagonist to beat him. As a result, during the Secret Realm chapter, you told me that he was not even a mysterious person. Moreover, An Tong was in danger because the original owner drew Situ's inheritance. At that time, I was still nervous for a while, thinking that if the original owner drew the inheritance of the twelve zodiac signs, would the 12 Zhizhi of the Central Plains be gone? As a result, I didn't even mention it later! It's as if the original owner no longer uses the system to draw prizes. There is also the problem that I couldn't enjoy reading this book at all. It's okay if the protagonist doesn't have any strength in the early stage, just keep a low profile. But later on, the protagonist has to rely on Qin and the Situ family. The protagonist must be powerful and belong to two or three inheritances. If you want money, you have the dozens of spiritual bricks given by Qin. The result is still not satisfying. It even gives the impression that the protagonist is poor. It really makes me feel more and more uncomfortable the more I watch it. The last time I felt so uncomfortable while reading a book was when I was reading "How the Steel Was Tempered" in which Paul Chakkin broke up with his first girlfriend. It really makes me more and more angry as I watch it. In short, the author's characters and writing style are very good. It's just that this novel has too few exciting points. Moreover, when I read the introduction, I originally thought this book was an invincible book, or at worst, a genius one. As a result, the more I read, the more angry I became, but the writing made me want to read it, and I even doubted whether I had become an adult. 😓😟

The author has always been the king of painting. Other authors' painting is "I will definitely add more updates next time", but this author is "This is a foreshadowing, and it will definitely explode next time". When Yihang was still in school, I saw him saying in the comment area: The plot would be better when it comes to Daoyuan class, but the plot in Daoyuan class is the most poisonous. Then I saw him again and said: It starts to be the same as the introduction in the secret realm. Now in the secret realm, it is the same old routine and the same poisonous point. He Now it's time to say that the secret realm is over... I wouldn't have known that my poison resistance was so high if I hadn't read this book. It bothered me for a long time when I watched Master Lonely two years ago. Now I can even spend money to subscribe to catch up on updates and vote for him monthly. Why is this still happening? Because this book is so beautiful and makes people want to read it, I hope everyone will read it. I go to hell, and you will go to hell too.

I just finished scolding, now let's talk about my true thoughts. Currently, I saw the protagonist being beaten by passers-by at school for about 119. The relationship between a man and a woman, one week, the love period, no problem, both men and women are newbies, all kinds of misunderstandings, worry and panic, understand, but so far, they are still like a couple with the blessing of the two buffs of "sexual attraction" and "first time in life", but the two people have not really experienced anything. To put it simply, it is too stream of consciousness, more outrageous than falling in love in junior high school and high school. The last such outrageous situation is called flash marriage. OK, the second question is the level system. There are four levels in three levels, a total of twelve levels. The protagonist is on the last level. For now, there are superior and inferior levels at the same level. However, this division is too uncontrastive. It highlights the situation where a protagonist may not know more than the reader, or even the reader knows too much and is more confused than the protagonist. Chapter 100, two encounters and one training ground, one standout, cowardly to the bad guys, ruthless to the good guys without respecting martial ethics, with one of the best inheritance, the scene was like watering flowers and burning a stove. Cultivation matters were controlled by Qin's psychological suggestion. He was clearly in a situation where he and his girlfriend were burdened with their wealth and lives, but he didn't dare to take action against those who threatened him. Instead, he wanted to run away. One hundred chapters, the worldview has been crushed to pieces, everything stops at the very surface. Does it take a thousand chapters to start to finish? I'll read another 100 chapters. If by chapter 200 the protagonist is still a shrunken egg, I'll go back to the book review section to curse.

Let me talk about my personal feelings. I saved the content for more than a month. Now I see the scene where Shu and other students are fighting near the medal ceremony. From my perspective, this book is starting to go downhill. There are so many hidden points buried in the front that will be explained later to pave the way for the rest of the story. However, after almost 200 chapters, there are not many things that correspond to the previous hidden points. The most uncomfortable thing was during the medal ceremony. I could have revealed my identity directly, but I refused to do so. Really, I almost lost my breath at that time. Also, when I fought with the D-level student later, the protagonist had experienced a life-and-death battle. If nothing else, how could he be defeated just by his combat experience? Later, in order to introduce new characters, the battle was forcibly terminated. As a result, the protagonist not only failed to show his strength in front of others, but also lost an exciting point. To be honest, I can say that I am a true fan of this book because it has almost zero interesting content from the beginning to now. I can understand that the author wants to create a real world. The real world is indeed not like the novel where you can pretend to be cool everywhere. But the problem is that this is a novel. We readers have a lot of pressure in reality. At least for me, reading the novel itself is to relieve the pressure. It relieves stress, but this book only brings me frustration throughout the whole process. Every time I see the protagonist feeling frustrated, I think, it's okay, there are so many foreshadowings in the front that will come up later, but I was really angry during the ceremony. I started chasing this book last year, and now I thought the protagonist could finally stand up, but you gave me a hard time, which is why I published it. Of course, there are still more than ten or twenty chapters that I haven't read yet. I hope it can surprise me, and I will continue to follow it.