Qingluan Immortal Clan

One thing to say is that it feels too bland. As a protagonist, you should at least be a lucky person and have more opportunities. This protagonist does not have a small space to carry around, no advanced inheritance, no natural treasures, or treasures from the ancestors. It seems that the protagonist is better than others in that he has a high talent for making talismans and a fast cultivation speed... Although he is a native, the system is small. It's normal to not have this kind of time, but I think it is necessary to give the protagonist some tricks. For example, the protagonist of the Korean-style fairy road who is also an indigenous person has a precious gourd that can transform spiritual water and purify elixirs... I think, since the protagonist has a high talent for making talismans, it is better to give the protagonist some big opportunities in making talismans, and develop a method such as forming natal spiritual talismans, and using talismans to prove the Tao! Use the natal talisman to replace the golden elixir, and you can turn into a talisman with a wave of your hand, and the talisman is also ever-changing. For example, for example, talisman soldiers, imagine that when the protagonist enters the realm of becoming a god, just draw a few strokes, and there will be thousands of troops, wouldn't it be beautiful! Quite the style of beans becoming soldiers (fog) (›´ω`‹ ) But, it's true even if it's ordinary. I think the relationship between the protagonist and the family, the kind of mutual support between the protagonist and the family, the kind of family affection within the cultivating family is also very well written, and the author's writing style is also quite good. At present, the plot does not seem to have any poisonous points, but the one who is Da Zhuang feels better than not being named... The name Da Zhuang always has the feeling that he will be a cannon fodder for the protagonist in the future. Overall, I think it is okay to watch, but it is too bland 😂

The fight after Chapter 70 is really unbearable, I wouldn't have ordered it if I had known better. The fight between the two during their Qi training period was nothing more than divine consciousness. It was 3v3, and all the teammates around them started fighting. The protagonist and the boss of the opposite party were saying "I have a drink" and "I have a drink too", pretending to be literary youths. Why does this dialogue from an idol drama appear here? Then the people watching around called it "genius, genius". Did they really want to embarrass the readers to death? I knew what I was going to do next, and then I saw the description of "banishing the immortal", hahaha, I couldn't complain anymore. It feels good but not so good, and it's really embarrassing. Fellow Taoist, farewell.

It's a family thing. Alas, it is a pity to see the family flow.

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I always feel that the combat power is a bit broken in the future, killing people across a large and small realm, and buying foundation-building pills should be done during the foundation-building period to be safer, right?

It's good and smooth, and it's easy for me to read "Eternal Life in the Immortal World".

The protagonist is basically invincible at the sixth level of Qi training, and his combat power is probably reduced. What is the reason why the protagonist has high combat power? After the physique is improved by one level, and the sect recruits people with two spiritual roots to start, it is not worse than the protagonist, right? At least the disciples with Tianlinggen qualifications among them are no worse than the protagonist, right? The protagonist's skills have improved by one level. The Yuanying Sect's skills are at least two levels higher than the protagonist's skills, right? It's better to raise it to the second floor. The protagonist's spiritual talismans will increase to the second level. The sect must have more magic weapons and spiritual talismans than the protagonist by more than single digits, right? According to this calculation, the protagonist can be invincible at the sixth level of foundation building. The genius in the sect can definitely beat the early stage of foundation building at the sixth level. Then in the later stage of Qi training, when it reaches perfection, there will be another small qualitative change, right? Seven levels, eight levels, nine levels and ten levels are perfect, what level can you achieve? Being invincible under the pill formation is not too much, right? What about after building the foundation? The sect's genius in the early stage of foundation building should be able to compete with the ordinary early stage of pill formation, right? If you build a pill in the later stage of foundation building, it probably won't be a big problem in the early stage, right?

In the later stage of Qi training, the pills saved for one month are more than 2,000 spirit stones. This fifty-thousand pills of foundation-building pills is really a lot of money. After all, if you don't take medicine for four to five years, you can have money to buy foundation-building pills. There are only a few people building this foundation. I'm running away. I'm like a fool in the later stage of Qi training. I take medicine to speed up the upgrade. I don't save money to advance, right? If I have money, I buy medicine and take it. I don't upgrade to foundation building. I just maintain the situation where I can be the eldest brother with only two foundation building in the family. It's also very 6+1.

If you have any suggestions, you can leave a message. (ps: After reading the previous chapters on the 11th, it seems that the building in the building will not remind you in the background of the Writer Assistant, especially the Q reading messages. It does not seem to be displayed here at the starting point. If you have any suggestions, please leave a message here.)

Alas, this book is quite good. It's just that you, the author, like to take days off every now and then, and your updates are still slow. If this continues, your results will become less and less. It may take at most 5 days to reach the usual number of clicks per day. The most important thing is that your book should be at least about 600 chapters long. Only then can it be completed. If you're like this, take three or four days off a month. Updates are slow and infrequent every day. The number of reads will only become less and less in the future.

Three days of fishing and two days of drying nets, the rhythm of a eunuch.

The routine is right. The plot is not outstanding enough. In summary, it's just plain.

Alas, I have read 41 chapters, and I feel that the author's skills are too poor. It was okay at the beginning, but there are many areas that are lacking. I have only read chapter 41, and that's all. Do immortal cultivators still have to salute mortals? They have to bring spiritual objects back, and they can't practice. How can they take them without exploding to death? There is another biggest problem. A mortal city only has 100,000 mortals. Shouldn't it be more than 500,000? The most important thing about Qi refining and cultivation is that all I see are pills. I think when you first start practicing, you usually eat some spiritual fruits, mainly to cultivate the pills as a supplement. Spirit fruits are the main thing because there is no erysipelas in the spiritual fruits. I will continue to read, but I don't know if I can continue reading. I suggest the author to read Qinglian Peak. I hope to work hard. The writing is more rigorous and careful. Those who read the book are not mentally retarded.

Including but not limited to supporting characters, exercises, alchemy talismans, sects, stories, etc., You can propose them and the author will select them appropriately.

If the lifespan is too short, it will easily collapse. You have to know that the later you practice, the harder it will be. 250 Foundation building is okay, but the golden elixir is only 500, which is very uncomfortable. You can increase the golden elixir's lifespan to 600-800.

The setting of the elixir is rubbish, the effect is too poor but the price is very expensive. I have to take elixirs all the time to gain a little bit of cultivation. The auxiliary effect is too low, and it is not worthy of the title of the top of the hundred arts of cultivation.

I can't stand calling the spirit beast Da Zhuang. It's even more disgusting than those called Xiao Huang and Xiao Bai. If you don't know how to name it, why not just call it Green Scale Python?

I recommend a book called "Sun's Journey to Immortality". It talks about the steady flow of time and the gradual accumulation of family immortality. I only follow it. It details the accumulation of three generations. It is only in the protagonist's generation that it is possible to attack the golden elixir.

This is the first time I have read a novel about metal cultivators, but the writing is still very broad! !

"Humanity Continent" is too difficult for newcomers! Please support me.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]