Dragon Raja: Lu Mingfei Returns from God of War 5

You're writing about Kratos, the god of war who tears gods apart, not Lu Mingfei! I only saw Lu Mingfei in the book, and I just don't understand what's wrong with him. He's been through God of War 1-5, and his style is still so obvious. To put it jokingly, I feel like I've always lived in his shadow.

First of all, I have to say that the author's portrayal of Kratos's character is terrible. Kratos is usually indifferent, but he gets angry in battle. His personality and experiences make it virtually impossible for him to join an academy like Cassel, which has a dubious background, especially since Cassel wants to use him to slay dragons.

I think even Atreus would be better than the protagonist's pathetic state; you've brought shame upon Kratos.

It completely failed to capture the essence of Kratos; it felt more like writing about a pathetic kid named Lu Mingfei wielding Kratos's weapon.

He's already a god of war, why would he need to go to some crappy academy to be a henchman for a bunch of mafia families... He has no class whatsoever.

Tsk, when will Lu Mingfei's fanfiction finally shed its original Dragon Raja flavor? The brilliance of fanfiction lies in the conflict between two worlds, especially since this involves a dragon and a war god. It should be a violent, tumultuous plot, but instead, it insists on following the original Lu Mingfei's pathetic, pathetic character.

This is amazing, and the background even matches the Dragon Clan. It's like they're going to wipe out the Dragon Clan! However, the author should probably avoid writing any plot points that weaken the characters' strength, as that would be incredibly stupid. The point of watching God of War is to have fun, so weakening the characters would ruin the experience!

The Mingfei Universe has gained another powerful general, and it's none other than the bald-headed Kui!

If that's the case, then Lu Mingfei is practically an incurable skin condition. No matter where he comes from or what he's been through, he's all just background noise, unable to change the original label of Lu Mingfei. So what's the point of writing fanfiction? 0.01% Secondary interpretation + 99.99% Original work obsession—isn't that just a blatant assembly line?

After reading dozens of chapters, I haven't felt any change in Lu Mingfei after the series of events involving the God of War. Lu Mingfei has been gone for hundreds of years since he finished dealing with those messes, yet he still acts like a child. Does the author have a female senior he couldn't have?