Fruit Fairy

The setting of Goldfinger is actually quite novel, but the author's focus is really problematic. Most people are attracted to Goldfinger. Actually, after reading Chapter 33, there is still very little description of Goldfinger. The inexplicable creation of a weapon spirit root and strange skills make it completely unattractive to continue reading. Moreover, the refreshing setting is really strange. Being accepted as a disciple by the city lord and directly becoming a young master makes people feel happy when reading it. It is too cliché. There are also some inconsistencies in the setting. It took a lot of effort to set up an array to hide the mutated cantaloupe and easily collect the jujube saplings into the golden finger space. Then the cantaloupe vines should not be collected together, but find a remote place such as a mine to wait for it to mature, and then be chased by mountain spirits and monsters. It is more enjoyable for the protagonist to fight wits and courage to break through. Anyway, it is like a stick in your throat when reading. The behavior of the characters is really illogical. I read that the author also mentioned in the comments why they were not re-synthesized in the city lord's palace. It is difficult to understand. They are already the young masters of the city lord's palace. So why don't they make fruits? Various fruits and vegetables can be an opportunity to collect an unlimited supply. Anyway, it is really confusing to read and a bit disappointing.

I just read Chapter 11, and it's the halo of the protagonist who is sure to be saved from the catastrophe at the beginning and who is destined to succeed. I prefer to be more stable in the early stage and write more about how to become stronger. Not interested in the fact that every encounter must be a dead end.

I want to see Xiu Xian, but you should do it

See Chapter 40. Not to mention whether the writing is good or not, I personally find this kind of stone fairy and eunuch fairy who cuts off all his emotions and desires to be boring. It's really unbearable for a person to turn himself into a eunuch just to live a long life😱 Everyone has desires, eating, drinking, having fun, emotions and six desires are all human nature. Even if he is seeking immortality, he should be seeking immortality for something. This stone fairy and eunuch fairy don't know what to write about! I don't understand!

After the protagonist became rich, he told the city lord about the spiritual fruit planted in his hometown. It would be nice to transplant it here. Why did he spend so much effort hiding it? It felt so stupid.

I hope the author will write more plots about farming in the sect as much as possible in the future. Nowadays, most of them are about chance and hegemony. I'm tired of watching them. I hope to see plots of the fairy mountain-I-call-the-master type.

The introduction of Goldfinger is pretty good. I'll help you read it first, and then read it carefully when the number of words increases.

Why do time travelers have feelings for their original parents? This is very strange and extremely poisonous.

With this volume of updates by the author, it is difficult to keep up with this book, and fewer and fewer people are pursuing it. In fact, the setting is very innovative, and it was quite satisfactory at the beginning. However, it failed to satisfy most people's expectations from the moment we entered the city. The first dungeon was even too advanced.

Congratulations, you have been able to keep the clouds clear and see the moonlight, finally signed the contract and put it on the shelves. I will give you support for your first order.

Plug-ins are very interesting, but it's a pity that they don't focus on plug-ins. They write about commonplace topics and some of them don't kill the interest of reading.

After you rewrite it, which chapter should I start reading from?

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I have a few questions: 1. Why doesn't the protagonist plant a few more cantaloupes after he arrives in the city? Don't say you don't have time, it's impossible. How long does it take to eat a cantaloupe, synthesize it, and hand it to your mother? 2. The protagonist has been practicing for three months since he started practicing, and he is still not hungry when he wakes up. . . 3. Just stop hiding. What are you hiding? What's there to hide? The city lord has almost given you his heart and lungs, but he still doesn't trust you, which is outrageous. It's not like the whole city announced it and told the city lord what happened? An old man in his 80s, who had been walking outside until he was 30 years old. He had been in the spiritual world for more than ten years. He also built a city with his own strength and served as the city lord for more than 30 years. Will such a person have trouble with his brain? Can you talk nonsense and be unable to keep secrets?

The layout doesn't look very comfortable, it's too compact. This issue is very important.

Why do I think the prophecy of the protagonist is actually a poisonous point in some sense.

I got to know you because of Yuanbao before, but now I can finally see the moonlight. Congratulations on signing the contract and putting it on the shelves. I support you with your first order. Come on.

74 Chapters written in almost half a year? I said the introduction looked familiar, but when I saw the time, I wrote it almost half a year ago. The number of words is not enough for an online article.