Marvel: I Traveled Through Time a Little Early

Author, can you check for typos?

Sorry, the character of this protagonist is a bit inconsistent with my three views. I can't stand it anymore. I originally thought it was good, the subject matter is okay, and it's okay to be a gangster and take advantage of the bad guys, but I feel at ease with someone who has no grievances against me. I really can't stand it anymore. Even if I correct it later, I'm not in the mood.

Already collapsed. Now it's all about running to other worlds to get various things. Marvel doesn't write at all. Don't say that the time has not come yet, if you write it like this, the current plot alone, the protagonist's abilities and various technologies are enough to be invincible in a single universe, then will the main storyline of Marvel be interesting in the future? The protagonist's men alone are already capable of clearing Marvel. It can be said that it has been written to pieces. Marvel itself is full of bugs, and you still write DC, and you also get the Flash's speed force and superhuman abilities. Especially the Speed ​​Force is more powerful than the Flash. This novel can be deleted, you have made most of the mistakes a new author can make, except not having a harem. The protagonist's current abilities: Naruto's chakra has multiple shadow clones and other abilities. Various magics in Harry Potter have alchemy abilities. This alchemy is described as particularly powerful by the author. The Flash's speed force, superman's abilities, and then there are the DC life equation and anti-life equation, DC mother box. Then there are a bunch of black technologies, spaceship technology, teleportation and large-scale space teleportation technology, and then there is the ability to go back in time (this ability can go back in time, and even see a product. The protagonist can see where the raw materials of the product come from and the manufacturing process, so as to learn to make this thing. For example, the thing that grows smaller and larger in Marvel's Ant-Man. After the protagonist steals that thing, he uses the ability to go back in time to directly learn how to make it.) Then the protagonist can also search for souls, that is, to view memories. It also has mirror space and various magics, including the magic of Merlin's magical world. (The protagonist borrows the magic of his wife Merlin's world, because it can lead to immortality.) The protagonist also has various longevity technologies and beauty technologies (these are not worth mentioning). As for the spaceship technology, there are a lot of technologies, which are available in many worlds. Anyway, the protagonist's spaceship technology is the best in Marvel, and the various weapon systems are also the best. The spaceship can also teleport, which is to directly transmit troops to a designated location. Do you think it is necessary to continue reading this novel?

I want to die laughing. I bet no one will read this book. It's a V, and it's more than sixty chapters. It's true that the first six and forty chapters have not even laid the groundwork for the story, but the story has already begun to fall apart. You don't need to read this book. By the way, the comments on the shelves that require subscription. 6.

You are so courageous. No one will read the first volume of anecdotes, but you will be charged for the second volume of text. Do you think you have a fan base? Even veteran authors don't dare to do this. It's incomprehensible and there's no sense of involvement at all. How dare you ask for money? Just play it safe, okay? What a reckless man

Chaos beads are really an archaeological discovery.

The writing is the same as that of a period novel, and the abilities are also uninteresting. Naruto has no training methods for his skills. He has been growing up for many years and cannot even defeat a super soldier serum. The plot is boring, the golden finger is incompetent, and the protagonist is useless.

I feel so tired now. I have been doing mergers and acquisitions. What did you write at the end? The Marvel Universe belongs to you, just play it alone. 🙂

Is this DC plot too long? Author, you need to understand that this is a Marvel novel. The free chapters originally discouraged many people. In the paid chapter, I just wrote a little story about Captain America and went to Naruto. After being told about it, I wrote a little more about Marvel's story, but now I'm working on DC again. Can't you really tell who the audience is? Are you coming to read this novel to see Naruto and DC? If I really want to watch Naruto or DC, then why not read fan fiction about Naruto and DC. Moreover, your plot is almost a copy of the original plot. It says that the protagonist does not want to reveal his strength, so it is written almost according to the original plot. Except that the protagonist puts in some effort to solve a little trouble, there is no difference. Is this necessary to write? Anyone who likes Naruto and DC doesn't know these plots. Those who didn't like it looked confused and couldn't understand the abilities of those DC characters, such as the life equation, anti-life equation and those metals. Even if you write these things, wouldn't it be enough if you write a speed version and then send a free chapter to introduce the functions of these things? What you are writing now is completely hydrology. They are all unnecessary plots and can be written in a thousand words.

The protagonist doesn't have to be a good person, or he can destroy the world, but don't double standard, it looks really disgusting.

The novice author has made most of the mistakes. If you want to read them, you can learn more.

I haven't read it yet, but I won't read your introduction and table of contents. The introduction says that if you don't like it, you can start reading it from the second volume. The table of contents shows that you will be charged from the second volume. If you really don't like the first volume, you have to pay to read it. How about screening readers? Then I'll take my leave

In that part of Chinatown, he even calls himself Zhang Fan! Sorry, I can't stand it anymore. I always feel that it is too twisted and proactive. In that era, Chinese people who go to foreign countries, especially the United States, for most of us, would think that this ghost guy speaks Chinese so well and is so easy to talk, so why don't we cheat him first!

I admire people who have been following this book, but I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 55. There are poisons everywhere 🔨 What do you mean our security personnel are all veterans who have fought in the First World War? You are writing a book from God's perspective, right? Do you want to read the memoirs of those veterans of World War I? After World War I, everyone believed that there would be no next world war. This understanding was clearly mentioned in Churchill's memoirs. This was also the theoretical source of the appeasement of Germany by Britain, France and other European countries 🔨

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading half of it. It seemed like a studio work, but I felt like the author had changed. The beginning was good, the background information was relatively detailed, but the progress was too fast, but the style and content changed in the middle. The first half of the content can be summarized in three books: Rebirth in the United States to be a tycoon Traveling through Marvel to be a tycoon I am a dimensional demon in the heavens With the writing style and framework at the beginning, any idea written is very good. The problem is that in just over 300,000 words, the outlines of three books have been crammed into it, and the content is extremely fragmented. This is not how the stitching works! Sorry, I can't stand it.

Directly persuade them to quit Rebirth of Americans, golden fingers are beads of chaos

This is another novel that allows readers to skip dozens of chapters, so why did you write the first few dozen chapters? Water word count? Who knows if the second volume is water?

That's pretty much it. He knows everything. Forget about everything. Make both black and white money. Brother, you are in trouble. Are you obsessed with money? I can't see the main line at all, which is 360 lines of investment. You know how to build an atomic bomb?

Why is this book not popular? Because the early business articles are too complicated! Unattractive

I discovered why so many novels include Japanese comics. There is a shadow clone at the beginning.