The Wizard Who Walks in the Heavens

Forget about "Journey to the West". If it's a wizard, it's best to just write about the Western world. If the Eastern ones stand together, the whole system will be very confusing.

The writing is too messy, and suddenly a dream wizard pops out of you. There is no foreshadowing in the early stage, nor any side description.

Everyone is numb. Inexplicably entering a dream. There is no item level setting either. And the description is not detailed enough. Too simplistic. The cheat at the beginning was noticed by the third-level wizard apprentice. There are also types of wizards that have not been introduced. I chose a dream wizard for no reason, and there was a cp for no reason when I was in the dream. Have you finished reading what I said? Is there a feeling of chaos? Exactly like your book.

The concept is okay, but I feel that the system (main line) is a bit redundant. It is better for wizards to explore independently. Plug-ins can also be changed into talents to travel through dungeons. It feels more acceptable. Just my humble opinion, I hope the author writes better and better.

I feel like this is a chaotic group. Will anyone really like a protagonist whose memory is constantly being modified and whose spirit is molested?

The more I write, the more chaotic it becomes, with a hammer here and there.

It's so messy... I just finished a dungeon and I haven't even digested the harvest, but events keep happening... I'm really not interested in watching it... The biggest attraction of this type is the joy of completing each dungeon and reaping the rewards later.

An inexplicable and chaotic feeling. Weird!

Author, do you know the transition? It suddenly jumps, and the people watching are confused.

I hope the author will slowly develop the plot and characters. There are very few books about wizards traveling through the heavens. I haven't seen any good writing. Come on,

May I ask, author, does this book have a female protagonist? The protagonist's behavior is, I'm just here to ask.