Chainsaw Man: I Have Two Divine Powers

I didn't pay much attention to this book when I first read it. One is because of the element of chainsaw man. For me, the most attractive thing about Chainsaw Man is not the power system and world view. Restoring these things should be the prerequisite for writing a fanfic. If it were just these or even none of these, Chainsaw Man would just be written as One Punch Man or Spell Return. What attracts me most about Chainsaw Man is the character's personality charm and Fujimoto's psychotic style. I have to say that it is generally difficult for fan authors to write well on these two points. Most of them are just cool articles wearing the skin of Chainsaw Man. The second reason is because of the element of divine power. Although Naruto is one of the three migrant workers, it is definitely a classic. However, good and bad online articles all like this element, and the actual writing level naturally varies. Especially this kind of novel that introduces Naruto's abilities in other comic worlds. They are basically using the gimmick of Naruto, and they can't even understand the basic abilities and effects. Coupled with the collapse of the power system, the system is linked for the sake of linkage, and in the end, it has a bunch of abilities that have been restored beyond recognition and are disorganized, which disgusts readers. These two difficult-to-write elements are mixed together, which is almost a can reservation. But after opening the book, I was still attracted. Below I elaborate on what I consider to be the strengths of this book. The first is the author's writing about the background world of Chainsaw Man. It can be seen that the author has carefully studied the original work. Judging from the current chapters, there are no loopholes in the setting and timeline. This attitude is worthy of recognition. Although the taste is much worse than Fujimotoshu, the characters of each character have been restored very well. As mentioned before, this is very important to me (when I read the comics, I really liked the character Dongshan Xiaohong, but there are very few fanfics with her as the heroine. I have only seen this one that can restore the character so far. Although I have read less, it has something to do with it). In addition, restoring the supporting roles does not affect the creation of the protagonist. The supporting characters who are wonderful but not overwhelming and the protagonist who is complete and not reduced to a background really attracted me. The second is the author's setting of the protagonist's ability, the dual divine power kaleidoscope. The author is very familiar with the setting of Kamui. Although the setting is closely consistent with the original work, it can be said to be original. The author knew very well what he wanted to write, so apart from the pair of kaleidoscopes, he did not include any random abilities, not even chakra or ninjutsu. Just by making simple and non-contradictory changes to the kaleidoscope, the problem of painting style is avoided. The reward mechanism of the system is also very novel and does not have any fancy abilities. It does not include Kamui's ability to sew other eyes, it just allows Kamui to appear step by step in the world of Chainsaw Man. The above measures are very effective in preventing the collapse of the power system and ensuring the purity of the Kameidoscope, making it a theme throughout, rather than just a gimmick in the title. Anyway, it's quite a surprise. I am sending you two monthly passes to do my little bit for the beloved but rare Chainsaw Man fandom. I hope the author can write this book well. I also wish the author a speedy recovery.

It's the harem, don't ask. But don't collect them randomly. It depends on the character card. However, for those who have not appeared yet, I won't get the character card for now. Because I am only good at writing harems, I cannot write a single female protagonist. If I write a single female protagonist, the results will only be worse. I dare not say that the harem is well written, but at least the results will not be too bad. I cannot satisfy all readers and I can only say sorry.

Regarding the 🦔Cat book, I wrote it all. Since it was my first attempt, the pacing was too poorly controlled, and most of the content followed the original plot. That book ended when I really had nothing to write. Then I opened this book, but I was too lazy to change the cheats. If you read both books, you will find that the plot directions are completely different. It can be said that except for the double Kamui cheat settings, they are basically completely different. This one plans to write my own stuff as much as possible. I won't write too many original plots like that one, and there is nothing else to say. That's it.

Makima

After reading more than 70 chapters, I have no impression of the protagonist. I feel that the protagonist is no different from ordinary people. Fighting demons and collecting a harem is just as mundane as doing daily tasks. What's your state of mind? What happens after the protagonist acquires superpowers from ordinary people? What do you think after taking over the harem? Don't just rely on supporting characters to supplement your emotional descriptions.

Ever since Machima and the protagonist got on well with each other, the Chainsaw Man theme has lost its appeal. (Personal opinion)

Breakfast Autumn

I would like to briefly share my thoughts on this book. There are few good Chainsaw Man fanfics, but I feel that the author is not good at writing fanfics, at least not suitable when writing this book. The reason is very simple. A good fanfic author must first solve the problem of readers' understanding of the book. To put it bluntly, it is the problem of explaining the unique world view or character of the original work. Just going to Carp Demon, I met at least two readers in the post asking: Why is this like this here? 🤔's question, and the reply to their post is uniformly: If you haven't read the original work, of course you don't know 😅 Isn't this the author's problem? Shouldn't the author explain it in his own text? You have to know that unless you write fan fiction in places like the original work forum, at least 50% of the potential readers of your book in places like Qidian are non-original fans. You make them stunned. Do you think you can subscribe? The second question is that the Carp Demon formed a team with three teammates. As a result, the three teammates watched the whole show, and then the money they got was divided equally among the four, and the most important harvest - the Gun Demon Meat Slices was given to another person 😅 I want to ask: Is the protagonist a dog licker? Not caring about money and taking your rightful share are two completely different things!!!😡 Some people definitely say no, the protagonist is doing it for fame. Okay, let me ask another question: Does the protagonist kill the carp demon that must be defeated by a team as a single player, and throws the gun demon meat slices in front of the association counter, which brings him greater fame, or does the protagonist join a team and kill the carp demon as a team? If you say the former, then the question is, is the author not good enough? If you say it's the latter, then you're awesome, are you willing to work with me? 🤭 You work hard and I sleep and play games. How about we share the salary equally? I will give you all my fame🤭 Does the author understand what I mean when I say this? The most basic routine of a cool novel is that the protagonist makes a lot of money, and the worst thing is to distribute the fruits of labor fairly and equitably. If you don't hear that you can solve the problem by yourself, you bring in three losers, and you have to divide the results equally🤫 You may want to write a team flow, but the problem is that your setting is an invincible flow setting. Naruto's divine power can be used casually when fighting the carp demon, and the carp demon that ate the gun demon fragments was killed without the ability to fight back 😅 Aren't you in an invincible flow? If you want to write a team flow, you should give the protagonist Goldfinger enough restrictions at the beginning. For example, if you use the twisting power to kill demons, you need to charge it for a long time like Kakashi twisting Deidara's arm. Only in this way will your team be useful, at least it can drag monsters. At the beginning, you still had the setting that pupil power requires physical fitness. But when I saw the carp demon, I felt like it was about pupil power and physical limitations? When you encounter a demon, use Divine Power and Distortion and you're done 🤔 The above is purely my personal opinion. If you have any questions, you are right 🤫

Normally I don't care about the comment section, but when it comes to commenting, I accuse people of being shills, ask them how much they charge, and ban all comments and delete replies. It makes it look like I'm hiring trolls? Is it necessary for me to write about this kind of subject? This is Chainsaw Man, not another subject. Writing it at the starting point is like generating electricity for love Of course I saw some comments that exaggerated a bit, but what can I do? Is it possible to delete people's comments? I feel free to make comments that either criticize me or praise me, but I will criticize them when they come up... In order to avoid quarrels, I have locked two posts. In those two posts, I said that the original poster was responsible, and I deleted them.

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