People in the Heavens Are as Rich as the Enemies of the Country

I just finished reading One Piece. Let me talk about my feelings. There are some good and some bad. Overall, it is a good product. The first two chapters are very good, and the best one is probably the Lord of the Rings chapter. Sarin is just a supporting role in one chapter, but it is written very vividly, showing the rough lines of the dwarf image, and also the tenacity, and even better, it combines the gentleness of the female character. As a fast-travel novel, it is very successful if you can bring a character to life. In several other chapters, there are some supporting characters who are similar to Salin, but they all have little soul. It may be because only Salin's character can be more deeply rooted in people's hearts. The second is the first chapter, the Pirates of the Caribbean chapter. The more exciting part is that the joy of endless wealth is well written. This cannot be reflected in the following chapters. Although the Lord of Mysteries chapter is also about money, and the Harry Potter chapter is also about money, because there are too many extraordinary people in these worlds and the extraordinary systems are mature, the protagonists do not dare to spend money unscrupulously. The disadvantage is that it ends a little quickly. This is a common shortcoming of several chapters. My guess is that the author is not good at controlling the ending of the chapter. Since there are too many original characters appearing, it is difficult to write an ending that satisfies everyone, so most of the endings are written in one stroke. The One Piece chapter I just watched showed this shortcoming particularly prominently. In addition, the two recent chapters have a similar problem. The author always wants to write an ending that maximizes benefits. It's okay to write Pirates of the Caribbean and Lord of the Rings this way, because they are worlds where the original protagonists are mortals. But starting from the Lord of Mysteries chapter, we entered a world with a mature extraordinary system. The original protagonists of these chapters all had cheats and extraordinary abilities, and there were also various bug-level things in the book. At this time, I think it is not necessary for the protagonist of this book to maximize benefits, because it is difficult to explain clearly in dozens of small chapters. The Lord of Mysteries chapter is actually okay, but the Harry Potter chapter and the One Piece chapter are a bit inappropriate. Both chapters take the path of becoming an enemy of the world. The awkward thing about the Harry Potter chapters is that the protagonist subverts the world with a theory, and the subversion has formed in just a few months. I personally think this is directly making the world smarter. The promotion of an idea often needs to be accompanied by objective conditions. For example, in troubled times, everyone's basic survival cannot be guaranteed. Even if the protagonist wants to promote this idea, he still needs strong assistants, or even a team, to help improve and promote it. Also, in the Harry Potter chapter, the protagonist's nickname is the Magician, which I think is more like a clown... One Piece is even more awkward. It directly assigned a bug ability to the protagonist, and through the sea tower stone circle, he can defeat all the masters with names in the book. The elites and heroes of the original work were treated in such a way that their hips were stretched. I couldn't feel the brilliance of the protagonist's wisdom. I just felt that the writing was too stretched, as if a modern man was using a machine gun to dominate the martial arts world like Tian Long Ba Bu. If it is written like this, then I think the wisdom and strategies of the Endless Money Bag in the early stage are completely unnecessary. Even rare items such as the Sea Tower Stone can be made into the shape of a mountain, and the Sea Tower Stone can be dropped directly from the sky. The entire super mithril javelin in the Lord of the Rings world can be put inside, and let Smaug carry it from the sky straight into Mount Doom. In a world that is one or two levels above the protagonist's level, there is absolutely no need to elevate the protagonist to the level of a world king. Even becoming the king of the world can be divided into two chapters. I hope the author will not make the protagonist look like a clown by lowering the original character of the original work. In fact, the protagonist is saying, if the world is eternal night and I am the only light, the big spirit of the little person is the real pleasure. But when all the masters of the top war were imprisoned in Hailoushi Prison, and he ran over to kill Akainu, the protagonist looked like a villain who had succeeded. If you want to write a strategy, then write it slowly, consider all aspects carefully, and don't give the protagonist too buggy abilities. Endless money is actually very good. If you want to write a quick, concise and concise article, then it is best to increase the protagonist's power faster, and at the same time have a certain strategy to compete with the strong men in the world.

It was originally a masterpiece, but I lost all desire to write One Piece. It would be great to continue writing about the magical world in the same style as before. The results of your book are all due to the magic wind.

How can paper money be infinite? Doesn't the mysterious world have money printing machines and registrations, as well as banks, serial numbers, and money detectors?

The title states that the wealth of the world is incomparable, but now the protagonist's wealth is basically useless.        ，， For example, unlimited magic power with limited output, unlimited life with a single sacrifice limit, and unlimited energy without exceeding the physical limit. The point is to use it for "trading" rather than for the protagonist to directly use it to pile up attributes and smash people to death, becoming invincible and crushing them. The characteristic of this novel is that the protagonist conceals his "purpose" and uses non-"extraordinary" means such as wealth to fight against the "extraordinary" of the indigenous world. It would be boring to completely figure out the mastermind behind the scenes. Personally, I feel that the Harry Potter chapter is not as distinctive as before. What I want to see more is the Pirates of the Caribbean chapter where the protagonist is obviously weak but uses "worldly" power such as "wealth" to fight against the "extraordinary"

The level is there, and the overall grasp of the story is good. The main characters are pretty good most of the time (already better than a lot of novels). Pirates of the Caribbean, Middle Earth, and Harry Potter are all well written and enjoyable to watch. There may be some flaws but it's not very objectionable. But One Piece is really poorly written and has a rushed ending. The author's biggest problem is that the update is too slow, really too slow. The pace of writing a book is still okay, but can the frequency of updates be faster? Protagonist: Neutral, egoistic but with a certain moral bottom line. Most of the time, they are not smart and friendly. What to watch: Pretend to be a long story. Watch a different story in a familiar setting. Character Relationship: There is currently no long-term character relationship, and it basically ends when the copy is completed. There are only two tool men. Poison: Updates are extremely slow. There is a lack of emotional storyline (not about love, but various emotions). Even the regular partners are in the identity of master and servant, and there is almost no emotional communication. They are just tools. Not every story is well grasped, especially One Piece. Recommended index: ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Such a good book, can you recommend it on the homepage? Dear operating officers and book lovers, please recommend it.

I've read a few chapters. There's so much to say in this chapter.

Give me more updates, just a little bit, what are you looking at?

1. Some parts of the plot that are not very reasonable, I like to explain repeatedly, which is not only verbose, but also makes readers care more and more. 2. The gold finger is too big, and there is no sense of expectation.

You are confused. If I kill you, the money will be mine too.

Maybe you still don't know what the problem is. You are currently writing an Infinite Circle fan, and your audience is the smooth climax and pleasure. However, there are not many readers who are willing to read time-travel novels but also want to read the genre of mystery. What's more, the Lord of Mysteries is polarized in the circle. Those who like to read it will reward it, and those who don't will ignore it at all. The situation of everyone in the book club circle is: they are all light novel Infinite Circle, have no feelings for the genre and run away when they see it, and don't want to read your writing. This is very important.

Let's talk about some superficial personal opinions. If the author and book friends find it interesting, just listen to it. On the contrary, it is not a bad idea to treat it as a joke. In fact, looking at it now, it is obvious that the author is in trouble. Kavin asked for leave every three days. I dare not say how many physical factors and how many environmental factors were involved. But there is no doubt that psychological factors play a large part. In recent times, this book has not made any big mistakes in the plot. Rather than making mistakes, it is better to say that the author is trying to build a complete world of fathoms that he understands. Of course this is true. The pursuit of excellence is a rare but not so scarce quality nowadays. Some authors specialize in a certain type of work, or even a certain theme, and gradually become proficient in their comfortable field. This is also the norm for many high-quality authors nowadays. It can be seen that the author is moving in this direction intentionally or unintentionally. However, can this explain the author's current predicament? I think yes, the most important point is energy, or time. The meticulous writing method is undoubtedly the most attractive to Laobai readers, and the most important condition for this method is energy. Only with sufficient energy and ample time can we ensure quantity while ensuring quality. Only when you meet your own writing standards can you free your mind and write exciting stories. The beginning of this book is neither excellent nor unattractive, but at the moment it seems comprehensive and bland. The author seems to have fallen into the situation of a pirate chapter where the ship is turned around due to a disaster - he regrets it as he writes it, but cannot end it casually. He wants to write a perfect story, but also wants to skip this volume quickly, and finally bites the bullet and writes. I was thinking, maybe the author is looking in the wrong direction? Why is the opening so attractive? So interesting? Let me give you my own opinion. I think the biggest reason is "deconstruction", or introducing the new from the old. Think carefully, what are the successes of the Caribbean chapter? It brings a new angle to a film that, in my opinion, is lackluster. The greedy, bare-bones nobles, the cunning and cruel pirates, the common people who have humbled themselves in the dust... The style of an era appeared before my eyes. At the same time, the protagonist's ability to take advantage of the situation, seize chestnuts from the fire, and combine vertically and horizontally has pushed the pattern and courage of this story to a higher level. And this kind of courage seemed somewhat despicable after the Mark of the Dark Lord came out. From now on, deconstruction does not seem to be deconstruction, but just a simple mechanical deity, beating up primitive people... Of course, the author quickly reined in the situation and made up for it, but some of the root causes of this setting still remain. I said a bit too much and it was a bit confusing, so just laugh at Bojun...

I guess this is another eunuch book. There is no heroine, and I can't play poker with girls. I just do tasks for the sake of tasks. After a long time, I will get tired of reading.

What kind of novel is Mystery? I skipped it after reading two chapters and looked for some familiar copies.

The author has already started screening readers

(What I want to say personally) The author plans to make the sixth volume very long, but I have no desire to read it at all. The fifth volume is the same as the fourth volume. The fourth volume is okay, the writing is okay, and you can read it from the beginning, but the fifth and sixth volumes are like shriveled pancakes, hard to bite, tasteless, stuck in the throat, unable to go up or down, and it is a pity to discard them if they are tasteless. If the first three volumes weren't really well written, I probably wouldn't even remember this book. It's okay if you want to create a power system, or if you want to write a dungeon that can greatly improve the strength of the protagonist, but you choose a better-looking one. I even voted for the fifth volume at the beginning, but in the end, I didn't choose any one, and I chose a pirate who was poorly written. Forget it about writing about pirates. In the beginning, the goal was to steal the country and I thought it was interesting, but then I was forced to join the protagonist group. I became the mastermind behind a country through various mysterious conspiracies, and then came down to the earth to wipe them all out. Then why did you write those things before? ? Yes, you said later that you ended it quickly because you felt it was not appropriate. What about Volume 6? ! After all, you held a vote in the fifth volume. Although you didn't choose a single one in the end and chose a useless pirate, the sixth volume started with nothing. At the beginning of Volume 6, I thought, "Hey, it's good, it's interesting." My mouth became dry after that. You really wrote it carefully, step by step, but you are a fast writer! The length of your first three volumes and the last three volumes is almost two books. What I read about time travel novels is the excitement of different worlds and the acquisition of treasures from different worlds. Your first three volumes are exciting, detailed and have clear goals, and they also reflect the exciting point of the golden finger of "endless wealth". I stayed up late to read it, but now in the last three volumes, I would have almost forgotten about your golden finger, because I skipped through it. Your articles in the last three volumes are just like those articles that are neither exciting nor poisonous. It's true that you update it every day. I picked it up and read the latest chapter title, but I didn't have the desire to click on it. I have only heard of dnd, but I have no specific understanding of it. It seems to be a wonderful world, and then the protagonist plunges into it and becomes mediocre. Don't get me wrong, I mean the protagonist is mediocre. I only clicked on it recently to read the two chapters from Shi Gemao. Can't you really finish it quickly? This volume has more than a hundred chapters. Do you know that the similar fast-travel novel next door has been inactive because it has more than 300 chapters in the world of dragons and has not yet been completed. The readers are almost running out. You really feel like the brother in the discussion forum said that you are too pursuing the word perfection. You are a fast-moving article, not a brainless and cool article. You don't need so much perfection, you only need to be wonderful, and perfection is a kind of wonderful. Isn't regret the same? Isn't it always sadness that can be remembered by people? Why do you pursue perfection so much?

It's time to start crowdfunding your book! Which world do you want to see Tang Sen spend money in? You can write down your inspirations. The world, the goods that need to be acquired, and the things worth taking away from that world. Of course, a commodity is not necessarily an entity, it can also be a status, an emotion, a trait? The same goes for the things that can be taken away, which are not necessarily limited to a certain treasure. … If there is interesting inspiration, I will study the original work. It's best not to be too unpopular…

Once a day, create online, Come to the author and read with me. I solemnly swear that from today on, I will not watch dramas, go to work, travel, get sick, go shopping, marry, or do literature. Steel is tempered a hundred times, and it is worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the heart. Worthy of the future, as an author, I solemnly swear that I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am the keyboard in the dark, the guard on the Great Wall of Internet, I am 😃😃!

I have caught up to the latest. The Faerun chapter under the DND worldview is actually not worse than the previous Caribbean and Harry Potter chapters. The other chapters are really unimpressive. Except for a bunch of pirates in the Pirates chapter, I was lucky enough to grit my teeth and save me in other chapters. Otherwise, I wanted to quit the Pirates chapter. At that time, the perfect results were presented for the sake of perfect settlement, which directly changed the plot and design. Oh, I hope the author will work harder and don't forget the plot innovation and character design of the Caribbean and Harry Potter chapters. Reading novels is not to see the results directly, but to see the fascinating and fascinating process in the middle.

I just read this chapter and saw that a friend said he didn't want to read it and then went to read a novice novel, which made me laugh. Isn't this a novice novel? Or is it that novice writing has now become synonymous with brainless and inferior writing?

Alas, I gave you the chance but you didn't use it. 40 Monthly passes are too few. You don't have enough fans to give them to me.

What the hell is Harry Potter world? The mythical dragon couldn't defeat Voldemort? Do magicians have to rule the earth so early, or does the author believe that the world of the Lord of the Rings is a low-level world?

Damn eunuch, now more and more people don't watch the genuine version because they have watched too much eunuch and dare not pursue the drug. Fortunately, I had the foresight to stop the loss in time.

To be honest, it would be much more reasonable to add a setting plot to Goldfinger whose origin is not suspected.

If you write Western fantasy, you should write Western fantasy, and if you write Japanese comics, you should write Japanese comics. I was eating well in Western food and you suddenly stuffed me with two pieces of sushi 😥 It's not that I don't eat sushi, you know. It's that I don't eat Western food without eating sushi suddenly, you know... And there was a poll before, but none of the people who voted did not write... People have prepared their psychological expectations. Isn't this funny? Writing a book is also a process of selecting readers. Readers should look at at least two things when reading a book: first, whether they like the subject matter, and second, whether they like the writing style. In terms of style, after you finished filtering Western fantasy, you suddenly started filtering Japanese comics. In terms of carriers, you first screened those who watch movies, then asked them to read novels, and now you also asked them to like animation. Is there going to be another game later? Hey, as long as the author is happy, I will wait to see the next world 😥

As a reader who has spent money unnecessarily, I would like to give you some advice. This book is really good, but poorly finished. It may be that the early response to this book was good, and the author has become bloated and is eager to publish a new book. Then, then this book fell apart, and the new book I opened also fell apart. Ha ha ha ha

I guess the author had a small account during this period and rewrote several books, and then they were all thrown away. He had no choice but to come to Eunuch Book to continue writing 😄

I ordered it all and saw the latest chapter, Naomi. In this chapter, I expressed my concern about boring girlfriend routines. I also don't like the appearance of an inexplicable heroine. I would like to mention that the author's time is different from the reader's time. I started watching the first world and have been watching it for so long. Now I come here almost every two or three days. I am still full of expectations. I don't feel that a long time has passed. The previous world does not seem to have passed that long to me. The author should not think that after writing 400 chapters, there should be ambiguous characters.

I still can't resist reading and voting monthly, but could you please take care of the readers' mood? It's so short and so short, it's very uncomfortable. Of course, if you are really not afraid that people will run away, then just pretend that I didn't say anything

Again, it sucks, don't pay to watch it