Ninjas Returning from All Realms

This was never what I wanted. I never thought about letting my men attack. We won three battles together and protected the glory of Konoha. And you betrayed me, betrayed all of us. You immersed yourself in a false peace and lied to everyone. Konoha only has one chance to be saved! If you can't catch it, let me do it! Let the war burn! From the mountains of the Kingdom of Thunder to the sand sea of ​​the Kingdom of Wind, let the mountains crumble and the rivers boil! Even if I shed my last drop of blood, I will see Konoha rise again! If I can't save it from your failure, Sandai. Then let the world burn!

Some understand that counter-routine also means routine.

Can Sasuke and Naruto travel back in time quickly? I really don't like Sakura.

Haruno Sakura's title in One Piece is not quite right. According to common sense, it is "color + animal". Which color is the phantom? It would be better if it was Feidie or Sakuradie.

It is recommended that Qidian. Com remove all books that have been updated for seven days without any reason. There are too many unfinished eunuch books in Qidian. Many good titles have been taken up. Look at what the titles are like now.

"I will never allow any pirate to do evil in front of me!"

The protagonist has no character or personality charm at all. He follows the original plot required by the system tasks and has very little personal thoughts. Author, this is not possible. You must always highlight the protagonist.

The main character is too boring. This kind of theme is naturally suitable for writing about group portraits and behind the scenes of a sandbox. Try to downplay the main character as much as possible.

There are really too many misunderstandings in the author's understanding of illusion.

Speaking of which, I had an idea very early on. All the Twelve Xiaoqiang were killed. Ya could learn to raise monsters, Shino could raise Gu, Shikamaru could learn the shadow magic of Western Fantasy and Shadow Assassin, Ino could use mental power to do telekinesis, Xiao Li's style of Hong Kong comic martial arts, he could play with swords every day, and the two Byakugan could use super long-range attacks.

A very interesting subject matter. Eighty percent of the success of this book is due to the subject matter brought by your imagination. However, your writing style and the shaping of your protagonist are too redundant. When I encounter passages related to the protagonist, I always skip it. You don't seem to have figured it out yet. Readers come to read your book because of it. Instead of the protagonist Aoki who pretends to be smart, it would be interesting to remove the protagonist and focus on describing the protagonist group after time-traveling, and write a group portrait of time-traveling, speed up the pace, and don't have to worry about the strength of the villain, just fast-forward to fight Otsutsuki, and then all travel to other worlds in the later stage.

Danzo could go to Warhammer and become a planetary governor. In his short life, he would experience the ecstasy of enjoying power at first, and then the instinctive fear of the nature of the world. Then the pathological pursuit of power would overwhelm the fear and allow him to survive in the position of governor. Finally, he would let the mountains of work and battles temper his spirit and strip the impurities from his body. However, the planet managed by Danzo eventually fell, but this time he chose to hold on to the power sword and fight to the end, and finally died of exhaustion and returned to Konoha. [Actually, the power system of Warhammer basically has nothing to do with Naruto. The main reason is that it can create a unique Naruto among other fans]

I just want to see Sakura and Sasuke's scenes. It is recommended to take the protagonist offline.

The update was discontinued for the third time and no reason was given. What a waste of character!

What most readers hate most is that you follow the original plot, but your protagonist takes the initiative to make the plot develop in the original direction. The plot looks boring and makes people uncomfortable.

Where will Naruto come back from? You can't tell much from the introduction.

I shouldn't recommend eunuch books like Qidian. It's not a scam for me!

In other words, the protagonist is just a tool used by the author to follow up the original work. He didn't pay attention to his own pursuit and kept protecting the plot. So, does the protagonist intend to protect it until the end? Then I was invincible before the ending, and then there was a change? The main character doesn't have fun, and he doesn't write cool stories. As a reader, I can't see the fun, and I can't feel the pleasure. I think this is the reason why I feel more and more boring after reading the latest. No expectations. No matter how the original characters change, they will still die, and they will still fight in every scene. So what did the protagonist gain from it? I gained power, but I didn't use it to do what I wanted. The power I gained had to be hidden to maintain the plot. Is it like the company has a top-end computer, but it can only be used for work, and you can't use it to play games? No matter how high the configuration of this kind of computer is, how many people will find it enjoyable? I think the charm of the mastermind lies in having his own goals and manipulating the world to move towards his own goals. And I haven't seen the protagonist's goal in the latest version. Is it for a woman? For a change? To get to the top? For power? So I think this is what makes me feel more and more boring the more I watch it recently. It could also be the reason why some people don't want the main character. Finally, if you think this protagonist is good, you can talk about what makes it good. The comment area is for discussion. If someone comes to scold me because I express my thoughts, then I suggest you go to the forum to find someone to complain about.

Weasel went for a walk around the Divine Eagle to protect his family and country, and died at the foot of Xiangyang City. Obito went to Inuyasha and asked for the Four Souls Jade to save his fellow demon girls, but died under a Platycodon arrow. Hei Jue went to watch Agarwood save his mother and learn the refining method of the Sky Axe. Zhujian was forced to join the army and go to the Qin army. He rode on horseback to destroy the six countries and died of Zhao Gao's poisoned wine. Ban went to the end of Qin Dynasty, led his elders to rebel against tyranny, and died in Liu Bang's siege.

Waiting for my news...😭😭😭

The writing style cannot keep up with the subject matter, so this book is useless.

There is no distinction between priority and the author talks back.

The last one was unfinished, This Eunuch 🤭 Let's see who else dares to subscribe to the new book. If anyone does, I'll sell him health care products when he gets old.

Hey, this shows the importance of a good idea. Although Western fantasy is not what you want, you should go back and learn Western fantasy!

Why did it break if I didn't keep it for a while? Author, you are dead with tonics😭😭I always like your book

What are you doing? This book is difficult to write. Let's learn from the experience and write the next one. Good writing is often accompanied by good ideas. It's all growing slowly. Move it quickly. Some of the vests will also tell us. Come on.

A rare and good Naruto fanfic

Update quickly

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It's pretty good. Why did you stop updating? ? ?