A Certain Marvel Plane Magician

Ah. . . . . I have read 7 chapters so far. The writing is acceptable, the creativity is not too new, but the use is good. If you are attracted by Xingyue readers, you can take a look in advance. Except for Heida, it does not match the content of Xingyue, and the character Heida in the article is more like an original character with the appearance and power of Heida than Xingyue. The background of the Marvel world is not pure. In addition to incorporating some other movie and animation characters, the painting style also seems to be integrating some Western fantasy and light novel styles. Friends who like these styles can take a look. Overall, it feels like a book with great potential. Unfortunately, it's not the type of novel I like to read (this is my problem, not the author's), but I have already invested in it. Good luck, author. Above

An indigenous pig's foot, what's there to see?

After reading your introduction, to be honest, Xingyue's heroic spirit cannot be successful in Marvel, unless it is at the level of a crown. Although Marvel's magic requires a price and a medium to activate, it can be said to be a bit tricky, but as long as you are willing to pay the price, you will not lack the world-destroying level. The magic, like the aliens that appeared in the Battle of New York, was overwhelming. Ordinary heroic spirits couldn't stand it. As for magicians... Let me put it bluntly, they are not very reliable. Even top magicians may not be able to defeat the Hulk. You may still be bullied by the black braised eggs.

Uh 🤔 I took a look at your profile and your posts. To be honest, it's quite pretentious. You only looked at the names of your first two books. You should want to be original, but they are not good. So follow the market you look down on and write Marvel. Fans have story lines after all. Adaptation is always simpler than creation. You want to enter the market but you are pretentious. You have become a native. I made up a so-called trick. I wanted to have some special features but the setting was not good. It's not the same. I stepped on the indigenous trap first and then stepped on the setting trap. The writing routine is average. Please stop making trouble. If you want to write a book, just be honest and original. Come and eat tomatoes like me. What kind of fandom are you here to play? How many books are popular among indigenous people and have no characteristics or writing? It would be more meaningful for you to just think about writing and design your own original work.

I've read your first two books, The Eunuch, and I'm a bit dissatisfied with them. Also, it is written about the original people of Marvel, and there is no sense of empathy. I guess not many people like it, because when we read novels, we want a sense of immersion. Personal opinion.

This is the popular science about Marvel's magic setting that I have seen elsewhere. I hope it will be helpful to the author's writing The setting of magical power in Marvel: The "magic" of the Marvel universe is a means of utilizing specific cosmic energy and extradimensional power. Its essence is beyond the scientific scope of all known technology-oriented intelligent races. It is often used to simulate other forces, such as reality distortion, mind control and elemental attacks. There are four main sources of magical power: ● Personal energy - the psychic and spiritual power developed by esoteric ritualists and mages themselves. (Psychic energy, energy manipulation, astral projection, thought casting, etc.) ● Magical energy of the cosmic environment - By definition, this comes from Eternity, usually involves steps of casting a spell, and is limited by the dimension in which it is located, and may not work elsewhere. Mages can harness this power to achieve many effects, such as teleportation and energy waves. ● Extradimensional Magical Energy - Use extradimensional energy to summon the existence of magical dimensions and the power gained by objects. They have different physical and magical rules from our world. Unlike the previous two, mages usually need to plead with these beings, through sacrifice or commitment. ● Magic Objects - Magic may also come in the form of powerful objects, such as Cyttorak's Crimson Gem. These are often created by powerful mages and extradimensional beings, and have varying uses and powers. The Supreme Mage is a title awarded in the Marvel Universe for "exercising mysterious or magical skills that are more powerful than others, or controlling environmental magical energy from the world or dimension that is more powerful than others." According to the definition, there will only be one Supreme Mage in the world at a time. The current Sorcerer Supreme is Doctor Strange, who has held the title almost continuously since surpassing his mentor, the Ancient One. Mage Supremes are functionally immortal and do not age or succumb to disease due to the trials of Death, however they can still be killed and are strictly prohibited from summoning the power of Vishanti to fight death. The Sorcerer Supreme has access to Vishanti, Octessence, and other sources for nearly unlimited power, and is also granted powerful magical objects such as the Eye of Agamotto, the Orb of Agamotto, the Staff of Watoomb, the Cloak of Levitation, and tomes of knowledge (such as the Book of Vishanti) to help the Sorcerer Supreme hone for his or her mission.

A boring book. Again, the bad guys cannot be beaten to death. The force of blowing up half a building can't kill the rhinoceros, so I'm speechless.

This is the image of a sister!

This is another two-dimensional chuunibyou-style Riddler protagonist and supporting character. Can't those of you who watch anime be more sunny?

Harry Hart: Elegance never goes out of style

Chapter 16, I don't quite understand. There is a bookstore, and you, an ordinary person, take in a female magical warrior? , I found a magic book inexplicably, learned magic and became a magician, wandered on the street, and met two Riddlers who said that aliens are coming, are you going to protect the earth? Fighting with Loki, this strength is quite fascinating.

At present, the protagonist seems to have no characteristics, and the description of all aspects is very vague. He is just a native who has gained super powers. The setting is also very strange. What is the magic trick? I don't see where the special indigenous person the author mentioned is represented? Since you are writing about indigenous people, you should write the background well instead of asking readers to find various information. I have heard of heroic spirits, but what are they? What is a Rhino Man? Don't you explain these things clearly when you write about indigenous original works? Don't you think it's awkward? The readers are not your elders, so there is no reason to find the information yourself to read a book. This point lies in the indigenous identity, but the way you write it is very problematic. Writing that indigenous people are actually omniscient, right? The natives just don't ask for anything and get what they want. They don't have any curiosity, suspicion and autonomy, right? Write it well so that others will be confused. You must also explain the plot advancement. Don't appear and disappear suddenly. It is up to the readers to figure out the cause and process. People who write books about riddles really have riddles, causes and processes, but there is no fixed result, leaving room for imagination.

"Fool"

It's a purely self-motivated article, and those who can catch the airwaves will probably like it.

I don't hate the indigenous protagonist, I even think it has a more layered story and can be better integrated into the story. But I don't really like the shape of the moon 😂 To be honest, I'm a little tired of looking at this Arturia, and it doesn't really appeal to me.

Is the author a fan of Geeks in Disguise? Funny magic mixed with a dash of neurosis. Anyway, the early stage was confusing.

Asking for votes (crawling)... Asking for comments (squirming)... Asking for interaction (howling)... Uh (gulp)

A very interesting book It has a unique style and is biased toward unit dramas. It is very interesting to read.

Magic exists in our world and uses means to deceive the audience's sight, hearing and touch. Magic is a supernatural means that does not currently exist in our world. I don't know why there are so many psychos who forcefully refer to magic as magic.

How can I put it, I can only say that it's weird that it's not suitable for me.

When I read a book, I usually look at two conditions: First, is there a character card? Is there something on the character card that readers don't know what it's called, temporarily called character comments. If there are character cards, especially character cards with character comments, they are generally good books. Second, look at how many posts there are. The more posts, the book is usually better. The better. Those with more than 1,000 are usually good books. Even if they are not good, they are only a handful of cases But this book... Meets the first condition, which is also the first condition I rarely see, but it does not meet the second condition. It is even far lower than 100. Generally, those below 100 are novices... It's... Quite magical

The creativity is really good, but the narrative technique is becoming more and more unbearable. The writing style of a hammer in the east and a stick in the west is too uncomfortable to watch. It looks like I have written everything, but nothing is written clearly. The protagonist's power and source of power have always been written in a fog. You don't call it magic. You also summoned Transformers and basically relied on guns to fight. You might as well just write about magic. Originally, it could have been written with reference to Lord of Mysteries, but now it looks like it was written in a completely different way. If the writing is not strong enough, don't leave any foreshadowing. The transitions are also very stiff and the more you write, the more chaotic it becomes.

Self-healing text, it only depends on fate

It's really easy to write about Marvel or DC and then incorporate a bunch of things from other world views. At least I haven't watched every movie, comic, or anime. If you write something that no reader knows, how can you make people want to read it?

Generate electricity for love? It's hard to make money every day from this book.

This image seems more appropriate

Why doesn't the author put it on the shelves? I think the writing is quite good.