Curse of Old

Ok, after reading it, the writing is quite good, but it's a bit complicated. The plot doesn't seem to be connected very much. Although I know you will connect it later, haha, but try not to do this in the front, the editor will not like it. Maybe it's because your word count is too few, I don't see any sense, oh, of course, except for the latest chapter. I hope you can answer my chapter review and keep the topic straight. I think it's a pity that you didn't use the three golden chapters well. You wrote a lot of useless things in the front, which is a bit wasteful. Sometimes you think it may be useful and it may pave the way for what follows. But it's not like that. Of course, I'm not talking about the big things. I'm talking about some small details and some useless foreshadowing. If you mind, you can go back and change it, but as for this part of the writing, it seems to be useless. Alas, I think your writing style is okay. It combines Chinese and Western things and can cure all diseases. Although I still haven't seen why you are in the fantasy genre. I'm sorry. Did this book review disappoint you? I can also feel that I am a bit unable to speak, alas. In fact, your writing is pretty good. My suggestion to you is to read more masterpieces from medieval Europe, such as poems and plays, and learn their speaking style, because I think you may be able to use it. For example, Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? Can I compare you to a summer's day? 😜

Alas, the song has come to an end, maybe the break is to give the next book a good start.