Wudang Disciple: My Father Is Yu Lianzhou

In fact, the heroine and Zhang Wuji are not as good as the reborn Song Qingshu ~ Zhang Wuji is basically the same as Jia Baoyu. He has an older sister and forgets about the younger sister. He only has Zhao Min in his heart, but he is not clear with Zhou Zhiruo, Yin Zhuer, and Xiao Zhao. He is the most annoying among Yitian.

The plot is designed to make people feel uncomfortable. . . What can I say, the writing style is very comfortable, but the plot is a bit unpleasant. . The setting inside includes Yang Ruji's background of the Guo Yang family, and Song Qingshu's identity as a reborn person. So, the author, what do you want to write about? Is it the love and hatred of family and country, martial arts, or love and hatred in the great changes in the world? . It always feels like you want to write about everything, but everything is just mentioned, which makes it very unpleasant to read. . This is my personal understanding.

The author would like to ask whether it is a hundred, married, or single. The best thing is to be single. In this case, both parties will not be offended. If you are married, then leave first.

When I read Chapter 33, I felt that your writing was so messy. The introduction was very easy, but it turned out that the heroine's dead mother Yu Erxia has no fucking wife again, and Yang Buhui was in the hands of Yang Xiao again. It's so messy that it's hard to read.

However, Song Qingshu's rebirth has no purpose

I stopped reading after reading Chapter 3. Why are you criticizing Huang Rong for no reason?

I hope to be single and become a great master, like Zhang Sanfeng.

Of course, if you are a male channel, you should write about Lily. Author, believe me, I can definitely write about Lily🔥

No, I just clicked on the author's homepage and saw that they were all being serialized. I felt so cold in my heart. It's over. Author, how about opening a few less books and reading them one by one?

It's too confusing and convoluted. Doesn't the author have an outline? I don't even know what you want to write.