Infinite Alchemy

The writing style needs to be improved. Paragraphing (emphasis) is important! About three or four lines per paragraph is a reasonable range, preferably less than more. A long paragraph of text will be uncomfortable for readers to read. If you read a lot of online articles, you will find that everyone is a fan of segmentation. Especially, it is best to segment the dialogues, otherwise it will look very confusing. Therefore, it would be better to revise the first three chapters. There are a few typos, emmm, I must have not checked before uploading, but this is not a big problem. From the story point of view, it follows a relaxed and refreshing route, with compact nodes and no flaws. The characters are humorous, the protagonist is vivid, and the world view is set at a normal level. Too young to see anything else. Come on, author!

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Don't stop updating for 6 days~

Don't stop updating! ! ! 6 Days

Save it for collection! Welcome to collect and return to read Detective Pete