My Bio Simulator

First set a small goal and write a copy outline. It feels like the main line of your copy is very messy. What's the point of simulation without purpose. Whether it is to observe human beings through animal vision, find inspiration, and complain about social problems; or is it to mutate and upgrade to bring legends to the world. You can't just turn into an animal, use the excuse of returning to nature to go around in various ways, and then use this to evade your obligations and responsibilities as a human being, right? Such a protagonist is a bit useless and has a low sense of substitution. Becoming a chicken, meeting Huang Pizi, and did not continue. It briefly reflects the social problems of empty nesters, but it's gone without digging deeper. Becoming a cat, your mind is full of all kinds of licentiousness and obscenity, and you are not as leisurely as a cat at all. As soon as I get into it, I feel like a cat fairy, a transformation into a loser and a problematic lady with a touch of Japanese comics. Forget it, the plot is specially designed to highlight the shortcomings of the protagonist. It's so irresponsible to lie to a little loli who goes out of the community to deliver things and then forgets about them. The psychological description of the protagonist is pretty useless. Is it so equal for young people in society to communicate with girls who are still studying? Are the mental ages so similar? What does it mean to describe so many details and the main line remains untouched? If the plot is not explored deeply and the animal you transform does not reflect its simulated meaning, then what difference does it make if you change it?

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Today, December 15, is the challenge day with 10,000 words added. 😡

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