National Star Hunting Era

Let's take a look at the follow-up. As long as there are no major poisonous points, the writing is cool, the IQ is online, the killing is decisive, not watery, the plot is not cliche, and the writing is good enough. You can still read it. Generally speaking, no matter how much you brush yourself up, if your writing doesn't look good, no one will read it.

When I read Chapter 41, I found it too cliche and a no-brainer. I couldn't stand it without adding anything new. (The setting is currently just the same old way of killing monsters and adding points, which is not interesting) If it gets better in the future, give me a kick.

If you want to say what level this book is set to be, it is the level of severely disabled people. Anyone who knows it will understand it. The poisonous points I posted will be deleted and banned at any time. If you see it, remember to say it ambiguously to prevent others behind you from knowing.

After taking a look, I found that the settings are quite impressive. Your ability to forget as soon as you write is a masterpiece! ! !

I just read the first four chapters and I felt pretty good. But after that, I was completely stunned. From the first to second level of transformation, the attributes can change from ten to a hundred.

It is recommended that the author pay attention to numerical issues. The average adult's attribute is 1 and the limit reaches 9.9, Which is reasonable. Is it too exaggerated for you, a newly evolved evolver, to jump to 100 at the first level and 500 at the second level?

After reading Chapter 47, I found it very ironic. The protagonist is said to be a genius, but we all know that he is cheating. Why I feel so ironic is because of the setting, the first level of practice - talent. The first step here is gene seeds. In my opinion, those geniuses have the background and resources. (Talent cannot be changed, which is very despairing; but talent can be changed, which is even more desperate; in front of this first level, I don't know how poor children can change their fate against the odds) In Chapter 10, I have published a chapter review. Regarding this hunting test, I defaulted to it as the college entrance examination, and I only saw the martial arts part, and I did not see the literary part (from I think writing is the only way for poor children to change their destiny. The development of science and technology also requires this aspect.) I really hope that the author can improve the setting of this aspect (not talking about poor children, how much resources do even the middle class spend to send their children to top universities) I also hope that this book will get better and better.

Come on, author! The setting feels like a lot of writing and it would be better if it was streamlined.

After reading Chapter 32, another famous scene of jealousy appeared.

What are you writing? We are college roommates again and we are jealous again. Brothers are out of date! There is absolutely no desire to read any more.

Come on, it looks great. At least it meets all the requirements of Shuangwen. It will be updated soon.

Can anyone tell me how much he can get back if he smashed it himself?

The data is big, but the strength is not high. There are a total of five ranks in front of the strength gate. Each rank is nine levels, and each level also pays for the middle and late stages, which is equivalent to level 135. It is a piece of cake. The protagonist is currently in the middle of level six, which is equivalent to level 20, and it becomes more and more difficult as it goes up. How long does it take to suppress the strength? The protagonist is given an awesome enemy not long after the start. Is the villain so stupid? The protagonist has such a good opportunity in the star world and does not come to trouble. He forcibly reduces his intelligence.

No regard for rationality at all, pure rubbish

So Braille Silver Alliance? Great God!

To be honest, there is really no big poisonous point, but the writing is too mediocre, not much can be read, and the story has no appeal at all. The three golden chapters are sparsely written.

A million words will be rewarded for just over 100,000 words. With so many good reviews, everyone who understands will understand.

Long suite building. You can leave various information such as identity, name, strength, etc., And the author will join if appropriate. (I can't guarantee you will definitely choose, it will be based on the plot in the book)

I just finished college and I really don't want to watch it.

I really don't know. Isn't animal transformation anti-human? Just for this one thing, he and the forces behind him will suffer, so why kill someone to silence them?

Wc, a big boss rewarded me with 10,000 yuan Airborne Silver Alliance

The writing style is not very good and too novice, and Wudi Wen is not like this either. . . . .

The heroine's name is catchy, and it reminds me of carefree memories such as personal bodyguards.

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Shennong tested poison. Forage. There is no big poisonous point, and there is no small poisonous point for me. This varies from person to person. There are some clichés, but the writing is pretty good. The plot has no ups and downs. Development in college. In general, you can read it