After Becoming an Immortal, My Hometown on Blue Star Contacted Me

It doesn't matter if the navigators are all women. The mounts are still female. The key point is that it doesn't matter if they are women. You set it up for others. You write two sentences for this one and three sentences for that one because you are afraid that I will remember it, right?

Writing about how awesome the protagonist is, the protagonist I see is like a barbarian who only has brute force and no skills and can only use his eight punches.

Personally, I feel that themes like the rise and fall of civilizations should not be put together with gender at all. On one side, it is the rise and fall of civilizations, and on the other side, the love between children. The sense of separation is very serious. Let's put aside the Shanghai Fortress, there are women everywhere, and their appearance is described. The description of the appearance of the usher that appeared in the first few chapters made me vomit.

Originally, the model of navigator and guide was relatively new, but in recent chapters, it has fallen into a pretentious and slap-in-the-face routine. Although it can be said that it can be learned quickly, this behavior is undoubtedly screening readers. Water doesn't matter, but you have to be interesting. If water is all about routines, then you won't have the desire to pursue it. I hope that next time I think of this book, I can see that this book is even better.

Can the author stop being in the water plot 😅 After the article was published, except for the awesome title, the actual content was all about various water/tourism games. Let me analyze the watershed. In the first 50 chapters, the city lord saw Zi Qidong coming out to kneel down and worship the saint. I thought it was a big climax. I was so excited. What was the result? ? ? What did the author write? 1. The city lord dare not call him a saint for fear of unrest in the mainland. 2. The city lord is a waste and has been devalued. His kneeling down did not cause any sensation at all. Summary: Forced pretense with no one to support him The next 50 chapters are even more ridiculous. No one knows that Liu Xian is a saint, and then a bunch of little monsters come to make all kinds of jokes. If this continues, I guess it will be another monster-fighting upgrade stream. I am afraid it will reach a thousand chapters. Liu Xian's identity as a saint has not been exposed yet. What's more, it's the realm of Hedao! The reason why I say this book is watery is because it has no main plot at all! ! ! First of all, is Liu Xian's Hedao realm invincible? Can you defeat the demon that invades the earth? If he is invincible, then there is nothing to say (you can't even go home by yourself, and you are too weak in the Hedao realm). If he is not invincible and cannot defeat the devil at all, then why is the protagonist still leisurely wandering around the continent doing system novice tasks? Why don't you think of ways to improve your cultivation quickly? Besides, if the protagonist is invincible, is it necessary to play tricks with others? Can you directly and forcefully expose your saint cultivation and crush yourself! Besides, the latest picture of Liu Xian becoming a demon is even more nonsense. I don't care about the etiquette of this event, just because I want to find a way home. The teachings of saints are hindering me, so I have to slowly spend thousands of chapters arguing with Confucian saints 😰. In addition, it goes with the words of the new Taoist priest who introduced me: We Taoist priests act casually. When the mood is good, we can help the world and save people. If the mood is bad, I will not care about you even if you die in front of me. Plus a sentence from the protagonist: If my parents weren't on Earth, I wouldn't bother to care about the life and death of other people on Earth when the demons invaded 🥵 So I don't know if the three views of this book are correct or not. I only know that the author forced you to write a weak point that the protagonist's relatives and friends are on the Earth. Moreover, the demon gods are about to invade, and those who are recruiting are still hiding it for fear of social unrest. There is no sense of urgency at all 😅. Besides, the earth has no spiritual energy. It's just a matter of practice 😒

What should I say? Yahweh is a monotheistic religion, and even the Messiah is also called the Son, and cannot be called God. Even the angels who are equivalent to the true gods of polytheistic religions cannot be believed in. You say you believe in Yahweh, and at the same time you say that you will return as a god.

The price system that began to collapse: According to the description in Chapter 16, based on the price comparison of land, slaves, and women, one crystal coin was about 10 taels of silver in the Ming Dynasty. In other words, one acre of land costs 10 taels, a slave normally earns 20 to 30 taels (in non-disaster years), and a decent-looking person earns more than 100 taels of silver. That Tianwaitian Academy charges 300 days of gold per person per year, which is 300,000 taels of silver per person per year. This college is so famous that even if the enrollment is not large, there will still be hundreds of students. We don't know what the academic system is at the moment. Based on the minimum number of students in the hospital being 500, the annual starting fee is about 150 million taels (150 million) of silver. Based on the average fiscal revenue of 15 million taels in the Ming Dynasty (30 million taels in the Qing Dynasty), the annual income of this college is at least about 10 Ming Dynasty, 5 Qing Dynasty, or even more. It was more than the total global fiscal revenue during the same period of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. A college can charge so much money, so what is the scale of the Great Summer Dynasty written in the article?

At first I thought it was a mindless and invincible article. Finally, as the world view expanded, I discovered that there was additional content. It was a good outline, but the Blue Star line was a bit stretched, with not much content and low quality.

Author, this plot twist in the new chapter would be a bit uncomfortable in a novel, because you have just started to see how the protagonist develops in another world, and here you start to confront the darkness. I know you want to write both sides together. This way it will feel like a movie or TV show. However, it is very difficult to write this way in an online novel, because your novel should not be about group portraits or behind-the-scenes scenes. Writing this way will distract the reader, thus losing the sense of involvement and satisfaction. I was pretty good at writing step by step before, but I don't know why I suddenly changed my outline.

The part about Lady Bones is really a bit discouraging. If you want to write a salvation story, you should have at least some empathy, but how you can choose to forgive when facing Madam Bones is incomprehensible both emotionally and rationally. She is here to kill the protagonist, and the protagonist gives her an opportunity. She treats human beings like ants and kills them at will. The protagonist can pretend to be invisible, just because she chose the skin well. Death from poison