After the Second Episode Collapsed, Something Was Wrong with My Ex

It's best not to have too many heroines. Six, seven or eight is enough.

The original title of this work is "After the Second Zhoumu Collapse, My Predecessor Cultivation". For some reasons, this book title is not allowed to be used. So the review was changed to what it is now. I couldn't think of any other book titles to replace it for a while, so I just gave up on it. The original introduction is as follows: Why does Master look at me more and more wrong? Why does the little junior sister want to post with me all day long? There was also a paranoid female assassin who smiled and asked whether she should choose her or kill all the other women... ... Travel through ten years. After Jiang Jue awakened his memory, he discovered that he had traveled through time to a game of cultivating immortals. Play various endings in the past life and open countless archives. But—— Who can tell him why his former 1v1 Taoist partners coexist? ! Faced with the "Taoists" who came to the door one after another... Jiang Jue wiped the cold sweat from his forehead. "Don't panic... Don't panic... I really don't panic!" ———— For some reason, the introduction was reviewed and deleted, and it became what it is now. It can only be said that it is very difficult to survive in the harem now. Not only do you have to consider the review, you also have to cater to the government and be careful about reporting. ┐(´-｀)┌Some people just can't stand the existence of harem literature. I know how to write emotional scenes one by one... And some plots may have to be read later to be understood. The pacing is slightly accelerated so that everyone will not be separated for too long and forget the previous plots. There will always be a Shura field, but not everyone will have a Shura field when they meet... You have to consider the character of the character, and you can't just have an Shura field for the sake of the Shura field. In the next book, I will pay attention to the issue of foreshadowing and try not to write anything... Let's just keep it straight. ▄█▀█●

It's smaller. The pattern is smaller. Wouldn't it be better to go to all the heavens and worlds with Qin Ke?

The first is a short story about meeting a girl every few chapters, which is a bit like a small sitcom, and the plot events feel a bit too daily, the description is a bit flat, and it lacks comedy; The follow-up suggestion is to give the protagonist a main task that is at least important, and then all kinds of helplessness along the way; meet all kinds of difficult women; He runs, she chases, he can't fly It's easy to have comedic effects, just recall the conflict between the first episode and the first encounter.

The plot is not bad, but it lacks the completion of the character story. You can refer to "I Time Traveled After the Ending of Love Saint". After all, it is the same type of subject and has many advantages, but the characters have low IQ. You can refer to "The Madam Let Me Die in the Third Night", which contains detective work, decryption, and burns the CPU. In addition, there are also points worthy of reference in terms of plot. I hope the author can work hard.

There are already four or five harem authors on my bookshelf this month. Authors, you have to hold on! Must be strong!

After reading for so long, I noticed the title of the book again. The title of the book does not match the content of the book very well.

Author, is your main position not at the starting point?

(ಡωಡ) It's interesting, please come on, author.

It's well written, but there's no publicity.

I suggest the author to publish another book. This one basically didn't gain any exposure after being sent.

Wait a minute, I discovered a blind spot. There is no physical description of the characters in the first two chapters😭. I can only imagine what they look like through their names, speaking styles and some side descriptions😭

Gu Zhanmei's death is really hard to come to terms with.

How do you like this book that is recommended by the new book?

To be honest, I feel like the protagonist doesn't really have a heroine that he loves, and the story is too emotionally bland. The writing is quite smooth.