I'm Striving to Cultivate Immortality in the Mortal World

The sense of immersion in the quasi-modern world of high martial arts is very poor, and it basically follows the academic style. Because the background is similar to the modern world, it is impossible to write about the college controlling administration (404), so I can only write about the college in a very hollow way. A college cannot be a force (a sect, a sect, a gang), it can only be equivalent to an educational platform and cannot be binding and cohesive. This kind of academy might as well be called a "Mercenary Guild" that specializes in tasks. When reading, I really can't understand the usefulness of the college. I can only use the so-called competition rankings every now and then to show the presence of the so-called competitive resources and use the so-called sense of honor to label each student as "people from a certain college" (people from the sect go out, representing the sect and others dare not touch it. Labeling the college is dispensable. Forcibly labeling is awkward). It is really that 404 restricts too many writing methods, and the author's thinking is also solidified. They are all a template. In a world similar to modern high martial arts, we have to consider the issue of technological hot weapons and fantasy cold weapons. Either we write that there are no hot weapons, which is embarrassing but still acceptable, or there are hot weapons but they are rubbish and useless, but the special effects of personal force are too bad. For example, they cannot break a mountain, but they can kill the enemy. Hot weapons can break a mountain, but hot weapons are written as rubbish. Nuclear weapons, missiles, lasers, electromagnetic infrasound waves, etc. Have all been ignored, which is really embarrassing. In a modern fantasy society with fantasy elements and various scientists, no one has developed fantasy technological weapons? Technology is not fantasy enough, just like a computer chip overheating? Can't we have a set of rune formations or something? The melting point of nuclear fusion material is not enough? Come with the rune formations, a gravity rune car, and a set of computer natal magic weapons 🤫, so the modern Gaowu world is very embarrassing. Every time I see Gaowu, these are the conditioned reflexes in my mind, and it really makes me lose the sense of immersion. Unless you write a super attractive plot so that your attention is attracted to the plot and your mind will not have random thoughts. Or it can solve these problems, or readers who first come into contact with novels will not consider the rationality of novels at all (when I first came into contact with novels, 9 out of 10 books rented from bookstores were very attractive to me. I can read all kinds of books, and I feel that the author is very thoughtful)

1. In previous lives, there were more or less people who learned some martial arts techniques, but they didn't explain it. 2. Many bad things in the past life can be improved with reference. In the subsequent development, you know the results and can change them. 3. The logic should be clear. Many times I feel comfortable when I see the master's writing, that is, many details are explained logically, and if I agree with it, I want to read it, leaving a little suspense until the end of each chapter.

At first I thought it was an ancient version, but it turned out to be a modern version modified by a demon

The loser is reborn, and then his deskmate likes the protagonist.

That sexy girl must be the heroine, I feel so weird!

I haven't read or commented on this author's new book. If you click on it and like a comment, you will be permanently banned. It's so amazing.

Watching this makes me look ten years younger

The protagonist has a lot of troubles, and the younger brother comes to the door again.

Isn't it just Calendar Ghost? Why do things always write so weirdly?

I thought you were waiting for me in heaven and on earth, but you ended up wandering around half an ancient time