The Phantom Thief of Hearts in Detective Conan

I hope that the protagonist will not drag others into the Phantom Thieves. If so, I hope it will be Morgana from the original work. There is no need to deliberately describe the interpersonal relationships of this character. More importantly, it can be well coordinated as a pet cat. Although the plot of the companions in the Phantom Thieves in P5 was originally very interesting, wouldn't it be strange to drag a Conan character into the Phantom Thieves? Moreover, multiple partners feel that it will affect the follow-up, and it will be very troublesome every time to cooperate. The most important thing is that it is difficult to write well. If the character of Conan assumes the identity of the Phantom Thieves, then this character will have a lot of descriptions of the Phantom Thieves, which can easily lead to OOC And if you include too many P5 characters, it will be too far away from the plot of Conan, so I feel that it is better for the protagonist to act alone.

My evaluation is that it is not generally good-looking. As for the female protagonist, is there no female protagonist or only one female protagonist? (Forget it about the Conan fan harem, there are too few written like this) I have to choose the heroine, and I personally will definitely vote for Xiao Ai, but I guess many people are tired of seeing Xiao Ai and don't want Xiao Ai as the heroine, so how about adding a P5 character Wu Jianmiao? The big sister with short hair has a good personality and looks similar to the male protagonist of the original P5 work. And if you are injured, it would be convenient to have a doctor who can keep your secrets, right?

The bonds of people are true power! Stop worrying about that Zhongmo fight, let's have some coop

Single heroine or no heroine, don't have a harem, the last Conan fan who had half a lover is no longer good, don't do that thing with this one

Why are you thinking about writing a love line? It is not recommended for newcomers to write a love line right away, because most of them are not good at mastering it. If they can't write this part well, adding a heroine will be a failure. You can't see that the plot of She Jingbing has become more complicated after adding a heroine. I think it's pretty good now. The author has his own ideas. We're only at the beginning of the chapter and there aren't many cards yet. We can definitely develop slowly.

Author, you need to figure out whether you want to write a p5 fanfic in the context of "Conan", or a Conan fanfic wearing Amamiya Renpi. If the focus is on p5, the bond, friendship, team, and the core "resistance" of p5 must not be missing. But I really didn't see any of these elements in your update. It's not that the protagonist can't be frustrated, but the recent content has no content at all. The plot logic is complicated and confusing. I want to quickly enter the next stage without any foreshadowing. The writing looks very impetuous at first glance. The author really needs to calm down

The name attracts readers. P5 players may stay because of the content, but it will be difficult for non-P5 readers. However, I still feel that it is a bit of a trick, because it looks like it only borrows the skin of Conan. There are no mazes, no guns, no partners, no coop, and the content of the battle of wits and courage between the monster thief and the policeman (fog) in Conan that I most want to see is not included. Generally speaking, the writing is not strong enough and the plot is not attractive enough.

After watching Moon Shadow Island, the protagonist's character plummeted, like he fell from a trickster to a novice superhero. Can't the protagonist become a complete Joker? What's interesting about watching Conan is the interaction of the plot and the participation of P5 abilities, rather than having the protagonist to fight monsters and upgrade step by step.

The first part is pretty good, at least better than the next door book Conan: The Phantom Thief of Hearts.

I read various discussions about female protagonists, doesn't Koizumi Anko look good? The same extraordinary existence, and it is easy to dismantle the cp of Yijid and will not cause a scolding war. She is still an invincible beautiful girl except that sometimes she is off-line.