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No harem! ! ! ! ! ! There should be fewer emotional scenes. After so many years, there is really nothing that is not embarrassing.

Slightly creative, but with little description and no visible effect. I have read almost 10 chapters. There is no main line, no story promotion, just the protagonist practicing, what the protagonist is thinking, the protagonist talking, and nothing else. If you break away from the shell of the Harry Potter novel, this thing can be renamed as a word game about cultivating immortals. Anyway, it is: the protagonist is meditating and practicing - the protagonist is practicing magic - the protagonist is in class - the protagonist is thinking - the protagonist encounters magical animals, the favorability value is +1 - the protagonist meets the plot characters, the dialogue... No more, is this a novel?

Not bad, so far, but I want to say that what readers of HP fanfics want to know most is whether it is a nanny story and the problem of the heroine (the problem of Hermione's Wife of All Worlds)

I never thought of magical animals turning into humans 😅😅😅

The most two girls can do is fuck each other, no better, Hermione is too cliché.

Sometimes first person, sometimes third person. After reading two chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore.

Has the author entered the palace? 🔨🔨🔨

Doesn't the protagonist think about how to cast spells silently without a wand?

It's been 10 days since the update, are you a eunuch? What a pity

The author has stopped updating and won't be planning to become a eunuch

The Irish team's seeker was called Lynch. Krum used a fake move and hit the ground, his neck almost broken.

The writing is very natural and smooth. It is better than many Hogwarts fics I have read before. Unfortunately, the author is a new account and there are so few people.

I really don't understand what era you are in and why are you watching this?

After reading a chapter, I got stuck in the bug. I absorbed the first ray of purple air from the rising sun. The whole plane. After it was dawn here, I started flying westward after absorbing it. 🤭

Will you remember this eunuch book someday?

Actually, I don't understand how Harry Potter practices?

I didn't read much, so I just read the first few chapters, and I'd like to express my feelings. The writing was a bit dry, and the main character cultivates what the main character does. There was little connection and polish in the middle, and it gave me a skinny feeling.