Game of Thrones: The Escape Game

I added this book to my bookshelf after reading the comments in the comment area. The quality of this book is quite outstanding among Thrones novels, but the author's operational ability is still quite poor. While asking for follow-up orders at the end of the chapter, he also set the comment fan value to 100, which is completely contradictory. I read this book review after reading 50 chapters. There are too many things that should be criticized in these 50 chapters without even a single comment. It looks like a poisonous weed that has been deleted and criticized. Setting a fan value of 100 is undoubtedly a stupid approach. Generally, readers passing by will abandon the book immediately when they see this threshold. Unless there are already a large number of authors with long-term fans who are equally subscribed, the fan value set should be 1 even if you want to filter invalid comments. Back to the content of the book itself, the biggest obstacle is complexity. Fifty chapters were written in the first three days of the plot. There are more than 100 names of people and places. Even old fans of the Game of Thrones TV series will find it too much. The original work itself has a lot of tasks, and a lot of new characters and players have been added. Many of them not only have names, but also nicknames/new codenames. People watching are confused and often can't figure out who a character is when they see it. If you want to attract new readers, you shouldn't throw out too many characters at once. New readers won't be able to tell how many castles and families there are in this area. If it is to attract Game of Thrones fans, then it should not introduce the "original text" in long paragraphs, which will make people feel that it is watery. Also, the character of the protagonist is likable, but the author will add a lot of psychological descriptions, which are so annoying that it seems hesitant and scheming. There are so many psychological descriptions about killing a person that it will take several pages to turn, and negative comments will accumulate. Then the author directly comments in the chapter to tell everyone to be patient and continue reading, which is comparable to a spoiler. Even if the ending is pleasing to the eye, the psychological description process is boring. Then there is the later issue. I learned in the comment section that the book was stopped and rewritten once when it came to the Dragon Mother. In fact, this is a normal situation because group travel novels basically start high and then go downhill. There are many books that started to go downhill when they encountered the Dragon Mother. For example, "Game of Thrones: The Holy Flame Monarch" and "The King on the Wall of Desperate City", the book collapsed as soon as the Dragon Mother appeared, and became a flower vase with nothing to write about.

I haven't read your previous version, but this book alone is pretty good. I finished all the forty-four chapters in one go. It was so satisfying. I forgot how long it had been since I read such a beautiful online novel with normal intelligence. Among the few fanfics in Game of Thrones, none of the first thirty chapters can compare with yours. I saw some chapters complaining about the slow pace, but I saw no basis for it. Whether the pace is slow or not has nothing to do with the time in the past, but with the density of events. As of now, there is basically no hydrology, not even in daily life. The protagonist's long-form reasoning is logically rigorous and promotes the progress of events. How can it be said that the pace is slow? Some readers cannot express their opinions clearly. I think they are not complaining so much about the slow pace as they are complaining about the "slowness" of always writing original works and not being involved in the original plot I am looking forward to the next development. Anyway, as long as it doesn't drop significantly, I will definitely book it all. Achievements have too many factors. Don't think about getting rich when writing fantasy. Comparing scores in Game of Thrones fan fiction is of little significance. Those Long Family Ao Tianwen and group novels that used to be in high-quality products are probably going to die now. Novice fan fiction is out of date.

This post is used to collect some opinions and suggestions about this book from some readers. I hope it can be more detailed.

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It is a good book, but the reading threshold is too high. 95% Of the plot is not in Westeros. The original protagonist has almost no role. I personally can't keep up with the plot of Pentos. These people may appear in the original TV series but basically have no impression. Also, there is relatively little interaction between other players. The plot has indeed been greatly changed at a macro level, but the sense of the plot between each other is not strong. It feels more like a tool to modify the original plot. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the plot design and background settings. It is a pity that the content is too high-key. If you are not a hardcore fan, you really don't know about many settings. Just like the Yin land where the author originally designed the decisive battle, I didn't even know there was such a place. I feel like we still need to balance the understanding of Binghuo between fans and readers.

This book is well written by the author, but it was delayed by the name. If it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't have discovered this book. The writing and plot are pretty good. Come on, author. I hope it will be released on the shelf. I hope it will be more popular. If it is not satisfying, I will leave the monthly ticket to you.

The writing is quite good, although there are some minor flaws, but the overall quality is very high. There is nothing you can do about poor grades. Fan fiction is inherently deficient. What's more, although Game of Thrones is famous, like Warhammer, it is essentially niche. Most people don't really catch a cold. Many people take the title of a book to Game of Thrones and won't click on it at all. Many people who like Game of Thrones left after seeing the original plot, which can be said to be a disservice to both ends. In addition, as a newcomer, it is normal for my grades to collapse after I have stopped updating for such a long time. I hope the author can learn from this lesson for his next book, prepare it for a while before publishing it, and save more manuscripts. Writing now and publishing every day not only cannot resist risks, but also cannot guarantee quality. Also, has the author thought about what to write in his next book? Personally, I don't recommend writing fanfics anymore. I think the biggest advantage of fandom is that it has a ready-made world view and characters, so it is less difficult to create. But for a high-level writer like the author, it is a kind of constraint. I think I can try history, urban business war, unlimited streaming and other themes for my next book. Especially for unlimited streaming, I have an idea that each copy is like the mechanism of this game in this novel. It is a map where some people are placed to generate new bodies to complete tasks, either in a battle royale or in competition with each other. Competition can take many forms. After the dungeon ends, you can retain some abilities based on your points, and you can also exchange your lifespan, as well as various privileges, such as spending points in the next dungeon to unlock new identities and new abilities, advance to the dungeon, etc. However, in fact, the difference in size and strength still remains within a certain range, which leaves room for wits and farming. The dungeon setting can refer to some IPs, such as Game of Thrones, Lord of the Rings, Star Wars, Warhammer, etc., But the characters and plot must be original. In fact, I think everyone knows that the plot is a failure. In fact, it can be understood as the plus version of the current book. The advantage of writing it this way is that it can be written very long. If you don't want to write about the battle of wits in your next book, you can also write about the upgrade flow, and the results should be much better. In fact, due to the brain-burning reason, the audience of the battle of wits is relatively small.

This is the only Game of Thrones fanfic I have found that describes places outside of Westeros in detail. The story is also very exciting. I look forward to your unfolding of Yi Di's story. The only bad thing about this book is the name. It will definitely be better if the title is changed. Come on!

Fanren Xiancao I came here from the Daily Guide. I wasn't interested in the name at first. The introduction made me click in, but the whole description at the beginning almost made me give up. I had an idea: "The whole novel is just the story of the protagonist in the game world, and the characters in it are also nihilistic and have no meaning to his "real" world." After reading a few chapters, there are some parts where the preface does not match the postscript. Should it be that the author has slightly changed the previous plot? My understanding is that a group of protagonists are dragged by a certain super civilization and thrown into a world to film a reality show. To be honest, the subsequent plot is very consistent with the theme of this "reality show game", and it is easy to create conflicts, but this beginning is really poisonous to me... You may not be able to see the end if you watch it again. I have read eighty chapters so far. The writing and plot design are very reasonable, and the protagonist's IQ is also online. It feels like a ruthless person who doesn't talk much, which makes me look forward to the plot of Long Ma. But I don't know if the author can still grasp the angle of view enlargement in the later stage. There is also the butterfly effect that has only been invisible for a month. It should also show up in the later stage, right?

I feel like I've read all the Game of Thrones fanfics on Qidian. This one is the most reasonable one. What's even more rare is that the author's writing skills are pretty good