Game of Thrones: Battle Royale Game

What happens when the score is full?

I added this book to my bookshelf after reading the comments in the comment area. The quality of this book is quite outstanding among Thrones novels, but the author's operational ability is still quite poor. While asking for follow-up orders at the end of the chapter, he also set the comment fan value to 100, which is completely contradictory. I read this book review after reading 50 chapters. There are too many things that should be criticized in these 50 chapters without even a single comment. It looks like a poisonous weed that has been deleted and criticized. Setting a fan value of 100 is undoubtedly a stupid approach. Generally, readers passing by will abandon the book immediately when they see this threshold. Unless there are already a large number of authors with long-term fans who are equally subscribed, the fan value set should be 1 even if you want to filter invalid comments. Back to the content of the book itself, the biggest obstacle is complexity. Fifty chapters were written in the first three days of the plot. There are more than 100 names of people and places. Even old fans of the Game of Thrones TV series will find it too much. The original work itself has a lot of tasks, and a lot of new characters and players have been added. Many of them not only have names, but also nicknames/new codenames. People watching are confused and often can't figure out who a character is when they see it. If you want to attract new readers, you shouldn't throw out too many characters at once. New readers won't be able to tell how many castles and families there are in this area. If it is to attract Game of Thrones fans, then it should not introduce the "original text" in long paragraphs, which will make people feel that it is watery. Also, the character of the protagonist is likable, but the author will add a lot of psychological descriptions, which are so annoying that it seems hesitant and scheming. There are so many psychological descriptions about killing a person that it will take several pages to turn, and negative comments will accumulate. Then the author directly comments in the chapter to tell everyone to be patient and continue reading, which is comparable to a spoiler. Even if the ending is pleasing to the eye, the psychological description process is boring. Then there is the later issue. I learned in the comment section that the book was stopped and rewritten once when it came to the Dragon Mother. In fact, this is a normal situation because group travel novels basically start high and then go downhill. There are many books that started to go downhill when they encountered the Dragon Mother. For example, "Game of Thrones: The Holy Flame Monarch" and "The King on the Wall of Desperate City", the book collapsed as soon as the Dragon Mother appeared, and became a flower vase with nothing to write about.

I haven't read your previous version, but this book alone is pretty good. I finished all the forty-four chapters in one go. It was so satisfying. I forgot how long it had been since I read such a beautiful online novel with normal intelligence. Among the few fanfics in Game of Thrones, none of the first thirty chapters can compare with yours. I saw some chapters complaining about the slow pace, but I saw no basis for it. Whether the pace is slow or not has nothing to do with the time in the past, but with the density of events. As of now, there is basically no hydrology, not even in daily life. The protagonist's long-form reasoning is logically rigorous and promotes the progress of events. How can it be said that the pace is slow? Some readers cannot express their opinions clearly. I think they are not complaining so much about the slow pace as they are complaining about the "slowness" of always writing original works and not being involved in the original plot I am looking forward to the next development. Anyway, as long as it doesn't drop significantly, I will definitely book it all. Achievements have too many factors. Don't think about getting rich when writing fantasy. Comparing scores in Game of Thrones fan fiction is of little significance. Those Long Family Ao Tianwen and group novels that used to be in high-quality products are probably going to die now. Novice fan fiction is out of date.

This post is used to collect some opinions and suggestions about this book from some readers. I hope it can be more detailed.

The map is here

It is a good book, but the reading threshold is too high. 95% Of the plot is not in Westeros. The original protagonist has almost no role. I personally can't keep up with the plot of Pentos. These people may appear in the original TV series but basically have no impression. Also, there is relatively little interaction between other players. The plot has indeed been greatly changed at a macro level, but the sense of the plot between each other is not strong. It feels more like a tool to modify the original plot. It can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into the plot design and background settings. It is a pity that the content is too high-key. If you are not a hardcore fan, you really don't know about many settings. Just like the Yin land where the author originally designed the decisive battle, I didn't even know there was such a place. I feel like we still need to balance the understanding of Binghuo between fans and readers.

This book is well written by the author, but it was delayed by the name. If it weren't for the book shortage, I wouldn't have discovered this book. The writing and plot are pretty good. Come on, author. I hope it will be released on the shelf. I hope it will be more popular. If it is not satisfying, I will leave the monthly ticket to you.

The writing is quite good, although there are some minor flaws, but the overall quality is very high. There is nothing you can do about poor grades. Fan fiction is inherently deficient. What's more, although Game of Thrones is famous, like Warhammer, it is essentially niche. Most people don't really catch a cold. Many people take the title of a book to Game of Thrones and won't click on it at all. Many people who like Game of Thrones left after seeing the original plot, which can be said to be a disservice to both ends. In addition, as a newcomer, it is normal for my grades to collapse after I have stopped updating for such a long time. I hope the author can learn from this lesson for his next book, prepare it for a while before publishing it, and save more manuscripts. Writing now and publishing every day not only cannot resist risks, but also cannot guarantee quality. Also, has the author thought about what to write in his next book? Personally, I don't recommend writing fanfics anymore. I think the biggest advantage of fandom is that it has a ready-made world view and characters, so it is less difficult to create. But for a high-level writer like the author, it is a kind of constraint. I think I can try history, urban business war, unlimited streaming and other themes for my next book. Especially for unlimited streaming, I have an idea that each copy is like the mechanism of this game in this novel. It is a map where some people are placed to generate new bodies to complete tasks, either in a battle royale or in competition with each other. Competition can take many forms. After the dungeon ends, you can retain some abilities based on your points, and you can also exchange your lifespan, as well as various privileges, such as spending points in the next dungeon to unlock new identities and new abilities, advance to the dungeon, etc. However, in fact, the difference in size and strength still remains within a certain range, which leaves room for wits and farming. The dungeon setting can refer to some IPs, such as Game of Thrones, Lord of the Rings, Star Wars, Warhammer, etc., But the characters and plot must be original. In fact, I think everyone knows that the plot is a failure. In fact, it can be understood as the plus version of the current book. The advantage of writing it this way is that it can be written very long. If you don't want to write about the battle of wits in your next book, you can also write about the upgrade flow, and the results should be much better. In fact, due to the brain-burning reason, the audience of the battle of wits is relatively small.

This is the only Game of Thrones fanfic I have found that describes places outside of Westeros in detail. The story is also very exciting. I look forward to your unfolding of Yi Di's story. The only bad thing about this book is the name. It will definitely be better if the title is changed. Come on!

I feel like I've read all the Game of Thrones fanfics on Qidian. This one is the most reasonable one. What's even more rare is that the author's writing skills are pretty good

Fanren Xiancao I came here from the Daily Guide. I wasn't interested in the name at first. The introduction made me click in, but the whole description at the beginning almost made me give up. I had an idea: "The whole novel is just the story of the protagonist in the game world, and the characters in it are also nihilistic and have no meaning to his "real" world." After reading a few chapters, there are some parts where the preface does not match the postscript. Should it be that the author has slightly changed the previous plot? My understanding is that a group of protagonists are dragged by a certain super civilization and thrown into a world to film a reality show. To be honest, the subsequent plot is very consistent with the theme of this "reality show game", and it is easy to create conflicts, but this beginning is really poisonous to me... You may not be able to see the end if you watch it again. I have read eighty chapters so far. The writing and plot design are very reasonable, and the protagonist's IQ is also online. It feels like a ruthless person who doesn't talk much, which makes me look forward to the plot of Long Ma. But I don't know if the author can still grasp the angle of view enlargement in the later stage. There is also the butterfly effect that has only been invisible for a month. It should also show up in the later stage, right?

More than two months of story about clones. In Westeros, clones are still used. The protagonist doesn't have any of his subordinates, right? In the latest chapter, I use my subordinate's body to fuck a woman. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm already dead from the poison.

I have ordered it all, and I hope the author will continue to read it. It is still a good book. Maybe there is a filter bonus for Game of Thrones fans. For me, the most attractive thing is that the author strives to imitate George Martin's "reasonable, unexpected" in the plot. At present, there are two issues that need attention. First of all, I don't want eunuchs. The author's fans are accumulated one by one. Even if I write a short article to fool myself, I don't want eunuchs. The bad ending can only be said to be due to the author's limited ability. People will still read the next book, but there is no desire to click on the next book of The Eunuch. Secondly, it is a bit embarrassing for the author to boast that the protagonist considers himself the best general after reading a few military books. The political and military strategy in the later period is much worse than the suspenseful rhythm in the early stage. It is recommended that you study the most outstanding novels about political wars, including The Dragon, Iron Blood, and Struggle in Soviet Russia. I hope the author will continue to work hard. You have the potential to be a great person. 2023.3.25 ———————————— It seems that I am somewhat prescient. Why do I think there is a risk of eunuchs? As an author with a criminal record, it is very common to not adapt when switching from suspense rhythm to political war, and it is also easy to become eunuch when encountering difficulties. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch, otherwise it will be difficult to eat this bowl of rice. 2023.4.9

I clicked in dozens of times... I was persuaded to leave by the title and introduction, and then I was dismissed three times after starting the game. I really couldn't help but continue reading because no other fan had read it... Only then did I realize that it was getting more and more exciting, and it was a book I wanted to read.

[Unified Explanation] Question 1: Why didn't the protagonist choose "Remnant of the Free Trade City of Valyria" as his bloodline? This problem has been explained in the book, that is, the protagonist does not believe that this pheasant bloodline from the colony can be related to the "Dragon King bloodline", and he thinks this may be a trap dug by planning. Question 2: Will the protagonist have a dragon? I am not afraid of spoilers here. How could the protagonist of Game of Thrones fanfiction not have a dragon😂, but the specific method of obtaining and using it was not revealed so early.

I thought about it and found that the author's battle royale background is quite interesting. If the results here are not as good as expected, the author may consider using this battle royale background in the next book to place it in an alternate history that most readers are familiar with, such as the Three Kingdoms period, the Sui and Tang Dynasties, etc., Which may attract a larger audience. The strategies in it are more classic, and we are more familiar with the advisors and generals. Compared with the foreign names in this book (many people may think the characters are confused). Of course it's just a suggestion.

It's a pity that such a good book is available. IQ Online is also creative, but the update speed is too slow. Much better than that time-traveling Game of Thrones fat man pretending to be 13 book

It's quite amazing. I wanted to see if there were any battle royale type novels. I don't really read Game of Thrones, but the author wrote it very well. I was stunned to see Ian proclaiming himself emperor all night long...

Slaver's Bay/Lazar Map

The author is great, I will write about Game of Thrones next time. After analyzing the reasons for the defeat, apart from problems with the update and some poisonous points, the biggest problem was that it was separated from the continent of Westeros. Although being separated from the continent of Westeros gives the protagonist a lot of farming space, it is far away from the main storyline, which greatly reduces the excitement of this book. After all, only by staying in Westeros, fighting with the natives, fighting with players, and growing in the cracks can you write a wonderful story!

I took a look at the chapter title. It's quite interesting. Let's take a look. If he died from the poison, he would come back to pretend to be dead. If he didn't come back, it means he was a good book. (*´I`*) What you can also watch in the Thrones category at the starting point: King of the Wall, Game of Thrones: Wrath of the Sleeping Dragon, Game of Thrones: Lord of the Flame. There are relatively few poison spots. Is there anything else with good writing that I would recommend? It's really too niche.

The author's plot construction and writing skills are excellent, but the focus of the writing is wrong, which makes people speechless. Game of Thrones is, after all, a fanfic. What are its lovable characters? What is the point of its story? Who are the characters for readers to get familiar with and interact with? Why don't you understand these things when writing a fanfic🔥? Moreover, the author claims that he wants to write a refreshing novel. To be honest, although the author can write excellent stories, his control over the refreshing aspects is really not good. Many plots look like they are coming, but in the end they feel like "this is it"? I feel that the author is more suitable to write some scripts or publish works. After all, it is fatal to fail to control the content of online articles.

The monthly vote has been cast, and I have read the foreshadowing and reasoning. I have a good IQ online. The climax is coming soon. Come on, author!

The book is a good book, but the popularity of the new book by a new author is too low. Please support me.

It took me almost 200 chapters to realize that this shouldn't be considered a fanfic, but rather a scripted version of the Game of Thrones background. Play Werewolf through reasoning and if you lose, you die.

The previous part was fine, although it was a bit forced and deliberate, but you can see that the protagonist's power is not entirely due to the protagonist's buff, but the protagonist himself is also working hard. But later on when the final battle at the Great Wall began, I felt a bit out of my wits. If you find that the White Walker players are still slowly converting the Iban people, you don't care. In fact, you can always recruit a partial army to eliminate them; if you want to find a ghoul to maintain the military morale of the people below, you can also just go to the Iban people and grab one at will. The Yulong will grab one and run away. , And are not afraid of the javelins that players may have; they are still stationed on the Great Wall under uncertain circumstances. If the effect of the Horn of Winter is blown and the Great Wall collapses, at least half of the people on the Great Wall will die; in the end, Aunt Mei directly sacrifices herself to eliminate the fog! It shocked me directly. Those princes of Qarth knew that their legendary mage used his ultimate move to ask for sacrifices without preparing them in advance? Ship it here in advance. If you really can't use the blood of Neptune, where are the Iron Islands and where can't those Kaos be burned? As a result, the protagonist acted as if he didn't know and was completely unprepared! Moreover, the purpose of going to the fog is to deal with the giants. You might as well let Aunt Mei fight the giants with you, and in the end you have no choice but to sacrifice yourself and die with the giants. Of course, it should also be because the Night King and the White Walkers are easy to deal with because they are prepared. Unless the Night King has an army of hundreds of thousands and can hide in the army and throw javelins, it's really not difficult to deal with him.

The overall structure is very good, but I feel that the ending will not be very good. When you become the emperor, other players are still working hard to get a castle. As for the indigenous people, all the capable members of the Baratheon family are dead, and there is no one left who can compete with the protagonist. You actually added a trick to Dorne to destroy the Martell family. To be honest, if you really like to write about betrayal and conspiracy, you might as well develop it in Westeros. Littlefinger, Octopus, Roose Bolton, Old Frey, Tywin and even Eddard Stark, everyone will love you to trick them with all kinds of intrigues. Those who play tricks are very comfortable in Westeros, so that they can experience the feeling of climbing slowly. And those who engage in the army go to Essos, and they can conquer the entire continent with their army.

The writing is good, but there are too many mystery plots... The question is, who watches the mystery in Game of Thrones?

It was very well written, I was so anxious to finish it. No, it feels like gods teasing mortals in the original novel. The original God is everywhere.

Such wonderful two epic victories, so well written. But the follow-up to the victory in the war has basically not been written. I will jump to the next plot immediately. After Volantis, it will be Westeros. Are you in such a hurry? Have you thought about finishing the book like this? I can only say that it is a pity.