Star Talisman Repair

Um, can an online store be blocked immediately if it is reported by someone who has never purchased anything? Then there is no need to open all online stores, and the coincidence is too deliberate. Once or twice is okay, but if it happens every time, it looks like a deliberate coincidence.

In fact, this genre is quite good. If you didn't forcefully reduce your intelligence and use the same old plot, I feel that you have already taken off. I really admire it. I have not seen any of your plots in other places. I like it. It's really uncomfortable when you write it like that. Don't use those plots from a few years ago. Look at other authors and imitate them. Really, this kind of plot will seriously delay you.

Coincidences happen 3 to 5 times and it feels interesting, but coincidences 8 or 10 times feel boring.

It's boring to keep missing out. In Chapter 54, Teacher Qin felt the presence of the card maker and was sure that the protagonist was the only one in the dormitory. Why would you ask? He actually left directly

The foreshadowing in the first few chapters is too long.

Although the story is good, there are too many coincidences and misses that no one can find. It was a bit exciting at the beginning, but it will be uncomfortable when you watch the end. Moreover, it is obviously the routine of "The Return of the Immortal Emperor", but the protagonist is also squeezed too hard.

Please change your rhythm, it's a big problem

After seeing this introduction, my desire to read was immediately halved.

It turned into a fan meeting anyway, water, water

Reminds me of Ka Tu, Legend of Shishi

😏I come, I see, I record

Card science fiction flow, rare to see

Hehe, still number one😁

Small suggestions: Netizens can have less dialogue, and when will the author arrange for Zhang Xiaoyue to know that Pig's Foot is a card maker?